The legs look a little too big. I think it's supposed to be extra armor, but it looks like he's wearing boots on top of his armor. The helmet looks like he has a frowny sad face. Get rid of the mouth.
The pose is a little static. You either need to give him a more action pose or a more badass "look at me in fear" pose.
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