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Space marine: Sargeant, our radar's are coming in hot with Hostile activty?!, over!
Sargeant: Don't bullshit me soldier, the Radar must be jamming, Over!
Space marine: Sarg! This is code BACK, Thousands of them, Like i've never seen before! Sarg! SARG!?
Sargeant: Whats going on soldier!?!? Fallback, Hold your line, reinforcements are coming.
Space marine: It's to late sarg, we're doomed!!, theres millions of them! Clad in chrome?! SARG?

Sargeant: For the Emperor, soldier, for the EMPEROR!

20 Years ago​

A ruined city, ablaze in fire; Buildings: A giant wick for the angry flames of Kharn's betrayal​

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Kharn: YOU BROUGHT THIS UPON YOURSELVES, COWARDS. YOU BRING SHAME UPON THE WORLD EATERS AND YOU BRING SHAME UPON OUR LORD.

Alone in the black, A monster who fears nothing; Feared by everything.
A light glances from behind, a mysterious silhouette emerges
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Gorechild raised upon high, Ready to bring the whole of Khorne's mass of hatred down with it.​

Kharn (with a sick pleasure in his voice): Name one reason why i don't shead you of your blood in a pathetic sacrifice to my lord?

Mysterious Figure: Stop! Kharn! It is I: Zhufor! Commander of the 11th warband, World Eaters. I have followed you!

Kharn(with the same sick pleasure): Name another reason.

Zuhfor: Very well! If you must destroy me, know it that I accept this, in the name of Khorne!

Kharn: What the fuck do you want with me, coward.

Zuhfor: I wish for your training, teach me how to kill for khorne, i wish to serve as a Lord, for Khorne.

Kharn(angrily): BULLSHIT, Your a coward, I refuse to associate with your pathetic being!

Zuhfor: In the name of Khorne i beg you!? Let me travel with you, i am no Coward!!!

Kharn: NEVER

Zuhfor (Wrecklessly, Forgetting Kharn's authority): TAKE ME ON

Kharn: NEVER

TAKE HIM.​

Silence​

Zuhfor: WHAT WAS THAT!?

Kharn's face sunk​

Zuhfor: KHARN WHATS GOING ON

Kharn; For the first time, has no answer, falling to one knee​

Kharn: My Lord...

Kharn, It is time...
This one is different...
WE ARE READY..​

A blazing light, crackles thought the canapy of dark clouds above. A large black mass falls, hitting the floor with an earth-shattering crash.​

A snarling Daemon prince stood before Kharn. And it Spoke out in a voice that Kharn couldn't mistake.

Kharn: Warmaster.. Warmaster horus...

Horus: Find me Abaddon. The False Emperor's time is short.

To be Continued​

 

[ROT]

Continued.

A mighty Legion formed; Abaddon swore elegance to Horus, and in the Name of Khorne, Hell Erupted over Cadia. ​

They go by many names; the Followers of the Profit. The Elite World Eaters.

But they are, The Final Legion.​

Last Sighted: The Cadian Gate; During the Great Assault; The Final Crusade again the Gate, 500,000 Berserkers.

Leader: Warmaster Horus (Daemon Prince)

Primarch: Abaddon The Warmaster's Accomplice (Formerly The Despoiler)

Lords: Kharn the Creator(formerly the Betrayer) Zuhfor the Witness(terminator Lord)

Tactica: Anihilation: Hordes of Berserkers, wave after wave of Land Raiders And extreme use of Terminators.

Warcry: Blood for the Blood God! Skulls for the Skull Throne! Horus Rebirth!

Wargear:

 

[Primarch Lorgar]

now that, is what I call awsome, have some rep for good fluff!:victory:

 

[ROT]

Thanks for replying! Dosn't look like many people aprove! with only 1 reply, lmao.

but thanks for feedback I might look back into adding some more depth, and hopefully Make it more catchy and interesting, I can imagine it looks quite childish with the hole idea of Horus and all his super-fantastic amazing individual characters all joining together.

But it's not s'posed to be!

 

[kharn-the-betrayer]

I liked it