[Myen'Tal]

A solid and interesting beginning from both of you, I think this will be an interesting tale to follow. So, in Bushie's part, the ex-sororatis and the ganger are searching for distress calls to steal supplies from? Or are they secretly helping those with the distress calls? That was the only thing I confused by.

That aside, though, I liked it. Will be following .

 

[Myen'Tal]

Pretty action packed and interesting chain of events. I like the characters so far, though I feel Khrokos is your typical Chaos Lord. But the story is only beginning, so I think it's too early to really say for certain, but I would try to give him some unique traits, quirks, or flaws that make serving the ruinous powers, all the more ruinous . Overall, though I like where the story is headed from both perspectives.

Keep up the good work you two.