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Nice continuation, Doom Wolf, though I do have one suggestion to make. It really has nothing to due with the story itself, though. If this is going to be a long series, than you should really be posting all of these updates in one thread. Look at everyone else's stories as an example. Aside from that, though, you're doing well :).
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