[Dave T Hobbit]

I like the choice of turquoise tones, and there are some excellent ideas in there. I particularly like the iconography on the banner.

However, the paint does look a little thick, especially on the highlights, which slightly spoils your good work. I suggest thinning your paints to the consistency of milk; it might take another coat to achieve coverage but it will give you much better control.

 

[Dave T Hobbit]

The reflection on the varnish is making it a little hard to make out details; especially on the flesh areas. I think it would benefit from a matt coat.

 

[Dave T Hobbit]

The metal on the trolls looks a touch flat and shiny for my taste; I suggest giving it a dark brown wash to add depth.