Agree with Ahab... more focus... You will do fine and probably beat most non-optimized lists... but it will be more painfully obvious when you face a focused/optimized list.
Ok so i got another list here this ones a bit more shooty
2X 1 Runepriest(COTS[1 RP has JOTWW/LL and other Murd Hurricane/LL])
8 Grey Hunters (Meltagun, MOTW, Standard)
1 Wolf Guard (PF/Combi-Melta)
Rhino
9 Grey Hunters (Meltagun, MOTW, Standard)
1 Wolf Guard (PF/Combi-Melta)
Rhino
3X 6 Long Fangs (5 ML, 1 Sgt)
Razorback (Twin Link Las)
2 Land Speeders (MultiMelta/Heavy Flamer)
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i am really undecisive with these lists i keep making them and i like em all lol what do you guys think? what do you guys usually roll at 1750 for competition? But seriously i want to thank you guys for your time and experience i really take everyones advice seriously.... :-D