I should have it up soon, sorry for any delays, I'm just having a bit of trouble thinking up a history
Better but alter your age a bit, for a Skaven 20 is past middle aged and you'd be a full Grey Seer by then. Go for 10-15. Other then that accepted. However I would point out that its second nature for Skaven to be underhanded, devious and treacherous. So you can respect your superiors but you'll want to kill them and gain more power.Name: Skratak Gnawshqueek
Affiliation: Grey Seer Apprentice
Age: 20
Appearance: Skratak stands at at 4'11 with light grey fur, with a single patch of white on his chest, and a small bit on his head between his horns. His paws are rough from the years of brutal fierce and cut throat training. He is especially proud of his horns, and does not like to cover his head. Though little more than five inches long,and only just begun to curve(upward) in his mind it is his most noticeable feature. His eyes have a red hue while light is shone into them, but there is a bit of fogginess there as well, as he is a little near sighted. He wears white on black flowing robes and carries a staff. His long pink tail whips side to side, when he is deep in thought, as he often is.
Personality: Skratak is always pushing himself to greater limits with his sorcery. He wants to burn his enemys with warpfire and see them cower and skitter away. Skratak's hiss is loud and noticeable, it is something he often uses to keep the lessers in their place. He sees other clans as a means to an end. He knows he is a chosen one of the great horned rat and it gives him great pride. Though he greatly respects his order, and obeys his superiors vehemently. The great horned rat is always on his mind. As it is his favorite topic of conversation.
Weapons: Staff and dagger.
Background: Skratak has earned a reputation amongst the grey seer apprentices as being one you should not underestimate. He is far quicker than he lets on, and his skills in magic as they are out shine the best of the apprentices. He was told to stop killing the other apprentices in training. He knows he has much to learn if he wishes to be a full grey seer.