Hey,
This is an ok list for Codex Marines. So this is how I would change things:
With that your chapter master will be 185 pts.
This comes out to 220 pts.
First: Autocannon and Heavy Bolter spons - 85 pts
Second: Autocannon and Lascannon spons - 120 pts
That totals to 205 pts.
Now that comes out to a grand total of 1085 pts with 15pts to play with so you can put extra armor on either Rhino or the Razorback and that would finish it up.
Note: the Chapter Master might not have anyone to run with but you can use the Bombardment to go effect and you could run him behind the razorback then when the Sternguard get out they have a cc person with them.
Good Luck and Happy hunting!!
This is an ok list for Codex Marines. So this is how I would change things:
Here I would drop the Hellfire rounds(you can't use both only a BOLTGUN) and storm bolter for a Storm Shield.
With that your chapter master will be 185 pts.
IMO I don't like plasma guns that much because of the 'Gets Hot' rule. With that you could lose one marine and its over. Take a Meltagun w/ Powerfist in this squad. That would be 235 pts. Also don't forget that ML.
Here I would also drop the Plasma gun in place for a flamer and a power weapon and of course don't forget that heavy weapon. Maybe another ML.
This comes out to 220 pts.
Here I don't know what your putting in here, "Is it 5 man or 10 man?" or "Is the razorback Heavy Bolter or TL Lascannon?" But IMO I would do a 6 man team (if you still want that razorback and chapter master with them then go 5man) with Three combi-meltas and then the RazorBack would have TL Assualt Cannons. This comes out to 240 pts.
I don't like Venerables very much because in my experience they haven't been as effective as I wish. So I would drop the Dread and get Two predators
First: Autocannon and Heavy Bolter spons - 85 pts
Second: Autocannon and Lascannon spons - 120 pts
That totals to 205 pts.
Now that comes out to a grand total of 1085 pts with 15pts to play with so you can put extra armor on either Rhino or the Razorback and that would finish it up.
Note: the Chapter Master might not have anyone to run with but you can use the Bombardment to go effect and you could run him behind the razorback then when the Sternguard get out they have a cc person with them.
Good Luck and Happy hunting!!