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firstly AWESOME STORY i love it! cannot wait for thenext installments +rep for it definatly!
i have one issue though which got me a bit whilst reading it was how its in present tense. now this is more of a personal thing but somethign about this story makes me eel like it should be in past tense, talking about it as if it is a retellign of a great tale or something. but thats just me
great job and looking forwward to the net installments
 
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