Thank you all for your advice, I've revised my list, taking some suggestions in mind, and I'll also adjust my tactics as such too. I also added the names of the units, and I've begun to write down fluff about my Alpha Legion warband I'm creating.
CS ‘Kaltos‘-130
MoS, LoS, MB
Chosen ‘Behemoth Busters‘-190 (Five Models)
Meltax5
Rhino-EA
CSM ‘Hydra’s Bite’-260 (Ten Models)
Meltax2
Champion Dekko
Powerfist
Rhino-EA
KB ‘Quarl’s Bloodpack’-279 (Nine Models)
Skull Champion Quarl
Powerfist
Rhino-EA
Predator ‘Ferrus’s Hammer’-140
TLLasC
DP
Havoc
CS ‘Kaltos‘-130
MoS, LoS, MB
Chosen ‘Behemoth Busters‘-190 (Five Models)
Meltax5
Rhino-EA
CSM ‘Hydra’s Bite’-260 (Ten Models)
Meltax2
Champion Dekko
Powerfist
Rhino-EA
KB ‘Quarl’s Bloodpack’-279 (Nine Models)
Skull Champion Quarl
Powerfist
Rhino-EA
Predator ‘Ferrus’s Hammer’-140
TLLasC
DP
Havoc