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I'm not sure many people will be into this kind of stuff on this forum, but its more aboutt he words then the music too me, so if you have time to read then I appreciate it.

I'm no mear man, no mortal being
Beneath flesh and bones lyes the supreme
Don't blastpheme, I walk the shores
Walk hard on the same ground where the blood falls
I fight the same cause, I'm the answer arisen
You prey to the gods but they don't listen
I fight for change, catalyze a revolution
Scared to know whats real, try put me in an institution
But I'm the truth
I'm the reconcilliation
I'm the cause and the answer, the life, I'm the cancer
I'm the antagonist, the anarchist...
Pshycotic and not right I'm the dark the light
The balance and the equalibrium between these worlds apart
I'M THE INSIGHT
Ready to do war on the world if they don't start listening tonight




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Roll the end credits, got the credentials with no edits....
Take note, what I've wrote emits..
Cycles round, breaks down and then addicts
The ground shakes like a march with a thousand units....

Exit, relapse, lets take it back to the beggining of the track,
The story unmasked, the task at hand that I smashed...
The people that I plagued and massed, career mapped
Critics gasped while the floor packed, haters slapped...
Told you I'd take the globe, now watch it happen fast..

No opposition, when I reached the top position
You watch first hand at the amazing transition...
Girls follow with irational addiction...
Then the globe follows suit its like I'm a religion

I speak words so powerful I could convince without effort,
I speak words so powerful I could convince without effort,
See I said it twice, but if I said I said it once you'd believe who?
Me. I'd delve in your mind and find ways to decieve you,

I'll intrigue you, too much knowledge for an MC, true?
a 1000 of my sets wont fatigue you,
Just releave you...
Any MCs next to me, my bars will antique you...

I'm on that next level, law breaking rebel..
Throw my hands in the air and bask as I revel
I'm the master of the apocalypse....
Control the four horsemen with whips,

Put out propaganda in my clips,
Let secret messages slip as I spit...
Critical hit, control you like body snatchers.
Accurate darts like an accurate archer

Inprint my name world wide, strongside
witness the strong ride, the strong turn of the tide.
And if your on the wrong line?
Then for the last time the strongside will end lives....


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Got a lot more stuff including full raps, if this gets enough views or posts I'll put more on.

Comments and Critisizm welcomed.
 

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I'm no mere man, no mortal being
Beneath flesh and bones lies the supreme
Don't blaspheme, I walk the shores
Walk hard on the same ground where the blood falls
I fight the same cause, I'm the answer arisen
You prey to the gods but they don't listen
I fight for change, catalyze a revolution
Scared to know whats real, try put me in an institution
But I'm the truth
I'm the reconcilliation
I'm the cause and the answer, the life, I'm the cancer
I'm the antagonist, the anarchist...
Pshycotic and not right I'm the dark the light
The balance and the equalibrium between these worlds apart
I'M THE INSIGHT
Ready to do war on the world if they don't start listening tonight




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Roll the end credits, got the credentials with no edits....
Take note, what I've wrote emits..
Cycles round, breaks down and then addicts
The ground shakes like a march with a thousand units....

Exit, relapse, lets take it back to the beggining of the track,
The story unmasked, the task at hand that I smashed...
The people that I plagued and massed, career mapped
Critics gasped while the floor packed, haters slapped...
Told you I'd take the globe, now watch it happen fast..

No opposition, when I reached the top position
You watch first hand at the amazing transition...
Girls follow with irrational addiction...
Then the globe follows suit its like I'm a religion

I speak words so powerful I could convince without effort,
I speak words so powerful I could convince without effort,
See I said it twice, but if I said I said it once you'd believe who?
Me. I'd delve in your mind and find ways to decieve you,

I'll intrigue you, too much knowledge for an MC, true?
a thousand of my sets wont fatigue you,
Just releve you...
Any MCs next to me, my bars will antiquate you...

I'm on that next level, law breaking rebel..
Throw my hands in the air and bask as I revel
I'm the master of the apocalypse....
Control the four horsemen with whips,

Put out propaganda in my clips,
Let secret messages slip as I spit...
Critical hit, control you like body snatchers.
Accurate darts like an accurate archer

Imprint my name world wide, strongside
witness the strong ride, the strong turn of the tide.
And if your on the wrong line?
Then for the last time the strongside will end lives....

Edited for your pleasure, and it was pretty good. i tried it, and i think the beat may be off. i think you repeat a little too many times.
 

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Edited for your pleasure, and it was pretty good. i tried it, and i think the beat may be off. i think you repeat a little too many times.
You missed relieve in the 5th stanza of the 2nd one. :p

It's not too bad, the boasting was a little overdone and i had a hard time fitting a few lines around a beat properly - have you got anything online set to music?
 

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congrats to the dicks that were complaining about spelling he had around 6 typos in the whole thing. Next time don't be dicks and just read the damn thing you can understand that mear = mere so why bother complaining?

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"I speak words so powerful I could convince without effort,
I speak words so powerful I could convince without effort,
See I said it twice, but if I said I said it once you'd believe who?
Me. I'd delve in your mind and find ways to decieve you,"

This line is not flowing right your attempting to follow a AABB there while most of the song flows with AAAA...mostly
 

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congrats to the dicks that were complaining about spelling he had around 6 typos in the whole thing. Next time don't be dicks and just read the damn thing you can understand that mear = mere so why bother complaining?
Your butt hurt?
 

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congrats to the dicks that were complaining about spelling he had around 6 typos in the whole thing. Next time don't be dicks and just read the damn thing you can understand that mear = mere so why bother complaining?
Because such obvious typos bring the quality down so much that it isn't even worth reading. If you have the time to write this stuff...why not write it right?
 
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