[hells_fury]

so for my chaos sisters that im working on ive scribiled up some special rules for the leader of my rag tag group of heretics. basiclly i made up the model months ago painted it but never made any rules for her, main reason why shes in terminator amour is i reckon it looks awesome

on the rules all have come from the witch hunters and chaos space marines codex hence why i managed to get a point total as i added up everything k:

lord helena

points - 230 points

ws - 4
bs - 5
s - 3(6)
t - 3
w - 3
i - 4
a - 3(4)
ld - 10
sv - 2+/4+

gear
bolt pistol
mark of khorne

chain fist
helena's favoured weapon for ripping apart her foes for her dark master. treated in respects as an eviscrator

terminator amour
salvaged of a lord she bested in combat, blessed by her dark lords protecting her from even the most dangerous of weapons


special rules

eternal warrior
after numerous years as a gang leader followed by years of conflict against her numerous foes helena has taken just as many wounds. her constent battering has made her all but immune to the most dangerous weapons.
lord helena can not be instant killed.

dark influence
such is her blood lust that her troops under her command dare not defy her for fear of her turning her blade on them.
any friendly model withen 12" of lord helena uses her unmodified leadership for all morale and leadership tests.

blessed by the dark ones
such is the carange and blood that helena wrecks across the galaxy that khorne has blessed her with dark powers to futher the canarge that she spreads.
once per turn she may use a chaos gift for without the need to take the test or use a gift

quick rundown on points and everything, i started with standered canoness make, added on the eviscrator (chainfist), bolt pistol and the mark of khorne from csm codex

for the terminator amour i used the cloak of st aspria along with the rosairies from the witch hunters book getting the 2+/4+ saves

battle scared was 2 mantle of opelia, against rules to take 2 of the same item but she is a special character :grin: so 2 of them negates 2 instant death results so with 3 wounds all is good

dark influence is a book of st lucious

blessed by dark ones, a fun one i like basiclly each turn once per turnshe may use a chaos gift (act of faith) this can be used in either yours or your opponents phase but only once per turn. so in a game with 5 turns thats 5 gifts. ive taken off the starting acts the cannoness has (2) and added 2 linities of faith making 4 acts, sounds fair in my books as she doesnt have to do it every turn and she is killable which denies the acts.

so adding all the points totals up ect from everything ive just listed you should come to 201 points, welcome to criticisim or ideas to what can be changed around to balance her out

lastly heres a pic of her

[edit : on fluff wise nothing so much is done yet, im thinking she starts as a gang leader sentenced to death when a cannoness saves her to become her student ect. betrays her saviour assumes control of the order and slowly inducts her fellow gang mates in. murders the loyal, plunders the place ends up following khorne somehow, its slowly working out in my head]

 

[Aramoro]

lord helena

Perhaps Lady Helena would be more fitting?

points - 201 points

ws - 4
bs - 5
s - 3(6)
t - 3
w - 3
i - 4
a - 3(4)
ld - 10
sv - 2+/4+

Mark of Khorne it makes more sense to swap that WS and BS so WS 5 and BS 4. Terminator Armour is also 2+/5++ unless she have more equipment.


gear
bolt pistol
mark of khorne

chain fist
helena's favoured weapon for ripping apart her foes for her dark master. treated in respects as an eviscrator

terminator amour
salvaged of a lord she bested in combat, blessed by her dark lords protecting her from even the most dangerous of weapons


special rules

battle scared
after numerous years as a gang leader followed by years of conflict against her numerous foes helena has taken just as many wounds. her constent battering has made her all but immune to the most dangerous weapons.
lord helena can not be instant killed.

Just call it Eternal Warrior

dark influence
such is her blood lust that her troops under her command dare not defy her for fear of her turning her blade on them.
any friendly model withen 12" of lord helena uses her unmodified leadership for all morale and leadership tests.

blessed by the dark ones
such is the carange and blood that helena wrecks across the galaxy that khorne has blessed her with dark powers to futher the canarge that she spreads.
once per turn she may use a chaos gift for without the need to take the test or use a gift

This needs to be reworded so it actually makes sense, I don't really know what this is supposed to do.

for the terminator amour i used the cloak of st aspria along with the rosairies from the witch hunters book getting the 2+/4+ saves

Ah that 2+/4++ makes sense now, list that in her wargear that it's special termi armour with a better save.


blessed by dark ones, a fun one i like basiclly each turn once per turnshe may use a chaos gift (act of faith) this can be used in either yours or your opponents phase but only once per turn. so in a game with 5 turns thats 5 gifts. ive taken off the starting acts the cannoness has (2) and added 2 linities of faith making 4 acts, sounds fair in my books as she doesnt have to do it every turn and she is killable which denies the acts.

so adding all the points totals up ect from everything ive just listed you should come to 201 points, welcome to criticisim or ideas to what can be changed around to balance her out

The acts of Faith are quite powerful and being able to get a free one without a test is pretty strong, I.e. her squad is invulnerable saves every opponent turn and AP1 on 6's on ever friendly turn.

For that reason alone I would put her in that 230 point kinda bracket.

Aramoro

 

[hells_fury]

okies ill try to answer your questions, i did change the points total and the rule to eternal warrior.

1st i just feel like lord befits a powerful ruler over lady, just personal prefrence really
2nd leaving base stats ect same to make it fairly legit for playing with against others, ill think on swapping as bieng a warrior for khorne, ill fix termi gear at later date when i get more time
3rd ill also work on rewording but the basic guist is get one act of faith per turn, no need to roll, a turn is counted as both your own, and your opponents phase.

thanks for the help, time to finish off the codex type stuff, i might post more stuff up here in near futures