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seems good. but at 2000 pts you are relying a bit too much on the 15 marines. maybe, if they where 20...

 

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hlegm bombardment is the last upgrade the army doesn't need in order to work, but it does make Soul Grinder better.

you need the grinder for 2 reasons only: good AA and crippling melee. no bombardlement, yes brawling.

 

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This way there is no chance ever that the bloodletters will be manning a gun (which was kind of unfluffy in the first place)

But think about the hilarity. Bloodletters SHOOTING and doing it well than sternguard marines. Absolutely trolling.