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Once again a quality bit of fic Hespithe, nicely linked with the previous part.
Im still have a bit of trouble with the laeps in location/time but addining more blank lines when you shift scene would sort that so no biggy.

Sorry its taken me so long to get round to reading and commenting on it :oops: .
 
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