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Treesnifer, One Day's Hunt, 3pts
Brother Edmund, It's All In the Name, 2pts
Very good stories this month:grin:, had a little difficulty choosing between them. In the end, though, I had to nitpick you a little Brother Edmund, because the point of view kept switching between the Rogue Trader Captain and the Archon nearly simultaneously towards the end. That was the only complaint I had though, loved the rest
. An added bonus for making the Rogue Trader a psyker, isn't a perpetual like a relative of the Emperor?
Treesnifer, A+ for creativity, I never would have guessed that they were Ogryn until you revealed that fact. Interesting and intense action sequence, but I think my favorite part was envisioning an entire tribe lazing about in the new spring sun, waiting for fresh food to spring up from the earth. Really good story.
Brother Edmund, It's All In the Name, 2pts
Very good stories this month:grin:, had a little difficulty choosing between them. In the end, though, I had to nitpick you a little Brother Edmund, because the point of view kept switching between the Rogue Trader Captain and the Archon nearly simultaneously towards the end. That was the only complaint I had though, loved the rest
. An added bonus for making the Rogue Trader a psyker, isn't a perpetual like a relative of the Emperor?Treesnifer, A+ for creativity, I never would have guessed that they were Ogryn until you revealed that fact. Interesting and intense action sequence, but I think my favorite part was envisioning an entire tribe lazing about in the new spring sun, waiting for fresh food to spring up from the earth. Really good story
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