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The time scale felt natural to me, and I thoroughly enjoyed the fresh take on the Repentia.
That said, I do think it could do with being longer- it seemed like there was more story to tell. I'd be interested to read it.

And trust me, I felt the same way. My story could do with being twice as long- I had initially planned it to transition to different protagonists over the course of the story... and I hit 4.3k words just finishing the first one, lol.
 
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