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Discussion Starter · #41 ·
next part. think im talking to myself here.

Tyranid bio weapon. Captain Perdithus watch as Angelo’s head was engulfed in acidic slime. His anger raging to new heights as Angelo’s head melted in its helmet.

Charging the closest Tyranid warrior Perdithus “BY THE WATER AND WAVE” razed his battered hammer…..

The captain woke and sat bolt upright, his eyes adjusting to the bright light. A searing pain shot down his left side. Or as to say what was left of his left side. He found several tubes and needles sticking out from the stumps of him left arm and leg. Bandages covered sections of his chest; below these he found newly formed scars that extended from collar bone on the right side to his hip on the left.

“Ah our esteemed Captain returns to the land of the living, Emperor be praised”.

Turning his head Brother apothecary Boronus came into view “ah ever cynical Boronus, but what happened why am I here. Where is Sergeant Apolus”.

“Brother Apolus, will be back shortly, but first you must rest your wounds are severe and I must treat them first questions can come later”.

An injection clouded the Captains vision as his body slumped back on to the surgical table.

“…wa… up y… I said wa… WAKE UP DAMIT”

Perdithus’s eyes fluttered open to find Captain Dreg standing over him. “ah so our hero awakens, it would take a war band of orks to rouse you from slumber friend. Ah but what I’m saying, I’m here to thank you. Because of your injuries I took command of our forces and held them at bay for a week. My name will forever be remembered on the walls of our great hall, but alas we also lost many brothers, many good and strong brothers”.

“start again what happened”.

Taking a seat next to Perdithus, “well lets see, first off you were downed by a Tyranid warrior. Brother Boronus had to remove the remains of you arm and leg, which the warrior did not so cleanly. After that your company drove the Tyranids on to the venerable Visiton’s fire power. Moving the forces from the other flank Captain Prax followed Brother Visiton’s advice and struck hard and fast pushing the enemy still further towards the Eldar position. (a wicked grin crossed his face) For alien scum the Eldar battled bravely but the horde of Tyranids were to much for them and were decimated. Lucky for us they took with them many of the Tyranids with them. Reeling from the Eldar attack my forces smashed in to their front lines hacking and dismembering blood bile and other unsightly bio fluids covered the battle ground. I killed several warriors myself, but that is a tale for another time. Unfortunately we had to retreat several more bio ships of the hive fleet have arrived. On top of that we have a very serious and possibly chapter scale disaster on our hands”. Dreg looked down at his feet, taking several breaths he continued “the imperial inquisition has found us….”.
 

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Hey bro, sorry I have not been pipping in much or at all I shoiuld say. My access to the site is/was cut to a nill so I have not been on much, thuis the reason the FAQ has not been updated either. I promise I will read all of this (maybe even cut and paste it all into word so I can prinit it off).
 

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Discussion Starter · #44 ·
wow some feed back. lol i'll let you tell me what you think first before i post the next 5 parts
 

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Only suggestion I could honestly give is maybe go through the older stories and write them up to the standard you are setting now. The grammar and some spelling maybe a bit off but you have me enthralled by the story. I am waiting for the next part, the story is going great now!
 

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cheers guys for the feed back. here is the next part !!!!:biggrin:

fatboy if you do write up some fluff for ur SM chapter the Sea Dragons are willing to fight at your side in one of your stories.

hey djinn thanks for the long time support :eek:k: goin back to all the older stories would take years lol but i like it and might go back to one or two of them. my grammar and spelling has always been a bit off. sorry if it makes it hard to read.

here it is !!! next part !!!

Unfortunately we had to retreat several more bio ships of the hive fleet have arrived. On top of that we have a very serious and possibly chapter scale disaster on our hands”. Dreg looked down at his feet, taking several breaths he continued “the imperial inquisition has found us….”.

Inquisitor Czevak had sat above the planet for over a week before a company of Gray Knights appeared. Detailed scans of the planet showed that the unknown chapter had fielded four full companies and was easily holding the Tyranid horde at bay. The fact that these marines where holding the Tyranids was the only reason he didn’t order his forces to attack, thus giving the imperium longer to rally troops.
Upon arrival of the Gray Knights the focus of the unknown fleet changed scanners previously pointed at the surface turned to the space surrounding the planet to find a large force of the imperium waiting.

“Shit they have spotted us. Oh well guess its time to introduce ourselves, captain open a channel to the ship in quadrant 4.65₪”

“yes lord Inquisitor”

Captain Perdithus was up on his feet for the first time after Brother Zionus had fitted his augmented leg and arm he still walked with a limp and it was pissing him off. “no warrior of the emperor should walk like a cripple”. His combat boots thumped on the deck plates as he stormed on to the bridge.

“What in the name of the emperor is going on??”

“Brother Captain, a battle barge just jumped in to the system and has joined up with two other ships that were hiding on the dark side of the planet in low orbit. Its markings were those of the Gray Knights.”

“Dreg, what about the other two ships who do they belong to?”.

“The other two belong to the Imperial Guard brother, although one of them caries an inquisitor. What is our noble “Hesperian” going to do?”.

“Dreg how many time do I have to tell you not to call me that!”.

“Perdithus my old friend, it is a name a gave you when we were both just battle brothers I’m not going to stop now”.

“haha true old friend, but still this is not the time for such jokes. We must send a message to the first fleet; inform The Dragon (lord master Vaporus VII) we have been found. Also send a message to the third fleet, lord commander Castalus II will want to hear of this”.

SIDE NOTE HESPERION IS ANOTHER NAME FOR….

(Drakon Hesperios) A hundred-headed dragon which guarded the golden apples of the Hesperides. It was slain by Heracles when he came to fetch the treasure as one of his Twelve Labors.

END OF SIDE NOTE.
 

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Discussion Starter · #48 ·
next part !!

“Lord Captain, we are reciving a message for the imperial fleet”

“should we respond Perdithus”

“yes Dreg, I believe we should. We have no choice”

“Patch it through crewman”

“yes lord Dreg”

The image of Inquisitor Czevak, appeared on the view screen before them.

“I am Inquisitor Czevak, in the name of the emperor I demand to know what chapter you hale from. Stand down and prepare to be boarded”.

“Greetings Inquisitor Czevak, I am Captain Perditus. We are simply servents of the immortal emperor as for our chapter I am not at liberty to disclose such information”.

“Huh, well captain the imperium does not know of you. Your chapter marking do not show up in our data as being loyal to the imperium, as a fact they do not show up at all. So… maybe I will simply destroy your fleet surely you have herd of the Gray knights. They will rip yo……”.

“Inquisitor, I grow tired of your quite threats. If your ships crew was half as good as mine. They would have spotted on the bow of my ship that this is the command ship of the fourth fleet. Aah yes that’s the look I wanted to see (a twitch of a smile flickered on Perdithus’s face) the reason I can’t tell you’re my chapters name is simply I’m only the Captain of the Second company of the Second Brigade. You have but one company of Gray Knights with you. I have four companies in my fleet I wonder how long they would last against us”.

“are you threatening me, I am an inquisitor of the imperium my word is law. I have sent entire planets aflame. Heretics is what you are, your marking will be entered into the chronicles as traitors. Your entire chapter will be hunted dow……”.

“Bright sparks shot across the space between the two fleets as ship after ship jumped in to the system. Last a huge ship entered real space sparks of red, blue and green striking its hull as it ripped the fabric of space, a monumental craft of extreme proportions it dwarfed the four battle Barges that surrounded it. It came to rest above the Inquisitors ship; a huge commanding voice bombarded the Czevak’s senses as the ship linked its coms systems to the open channel.

“You will listen to me Inquisitor Filth; we are the divine warriors of the emperor. We live and die by his will. I am Lord Master Vaporus VII, Chapter Master, Commander of the First Company of the First Brigade. You call me Lord, now speak”.

“I am Inquisitor Czevak, I demand respect. I speak for the emp…”.

“SILENCE, you speak for the Terran Council, but you are not them and you demand nothing here, you are nothing but heretic filth on the bottom of my boot. As Chapter Master I demand respect”.

The inquisitor face rippled with anger but this marine was right he had informed the Terran Council of the unknown force and if he went back saying he had destroyed them as heretics lost of questions would be asked and the Gray Knights would also submit a report. Also there was no evidence to suggest heresy.

“Fine, in the name of Terra and the father of us all. I ask what, Chapter you hale from”. Disgust was evident on Czevak’s face not believing he had bowed down to such people.

Lord Vaporus’s face changed in an instant. From immense anger to a warm comforting smile.

“Well brother Inquisitor, we are the Sea Dragons Chapter”.
 

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What I ment was to go back and fluff it up like you have been. Recntly your stories have a lot more depth then the short snips you started with. Spelling and grammar can be corrected with spell check and a couple runs through it. I have been meaning to copy this entire thing into word and do some editing on it for ya, and I will one of these days. I am waiting for the rest of the story like the rest, I like how you sorta smacked the Inq down in his boots, not totally to fluff bt what the hell it is your story! I am waiting for the next part as is several other folks.
 

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first off sea dragon mate what can i say?
This is awasome:good:
Second: Chapter Master Draven of the Emperor's Avengers greets you in brotherhood *bows* and looks forward to fighting the enimes of the Emperor with the Sea Dragons at their side
 

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Discussion Starter · #52 ·
next part !! sorry this parts not as good, found it difficult to get round it.

“Sea Dragons chapter, I’ve never herd of you. Your chapter is not listed in our records, from what founding are you?”.

Concern crossed Captain Perdithus and Dreg’s faces. This was getting dangerous, questions to their origins were being asked. This could get messy if they had to destroy the imperial fleet to protect their secrets. Cutting the sound transmission Dreg turned to his old friend.

“This is getting, to be problematic, we have had a grand total of three hours contact with our brothers and we may have to cut them down”.

“True, if by chance they figure out who we descended from or suspect we descended from, we will have the entire imperium up our back sides. How can the Dragon seem so calm”.

In truth the Dragon was not a happy bunny, he had to answer the inquisitor’s questions yet hold back certain facts about their progenitors. At this point he had three options, tell the truth reveal everything and have the chapter excommunicated, tell a down right lie and fain ignorance as to their heritage or half truths. Luckily for him the history of the chapter that was written on the walls of their great hall, were in their local dialect, so that no one but them could read it.

“in truth inquisitor, much of our history was lost to us around 38M, what records we do have are after this time, but what we do know is that we are a 2nd founding chapter”

“very well, all records you do have are to be, submitted to the inquisition for analysis, a sample of your gene-seed is also to be submitted to mars for a purity test and analysis, perhaps we will be able to find out your linage for you. Also we require the location of your home world so that it can be reintegrated into the imperium. There is one other question, why have you never contacted the imperium?”.

“We do not have a home world inquisitor; we are a fleet based Chapter. (Vaporus, visibly stiffened at the last question, this was it, the test, to answer this was to decide the fate of his Chapter.) The Sea Dragons were forbidden to contact the imperium by the First, as a punishment”.

“The First, who is he. Why was it forbidden?”.

“The First was our found….

Czevak face lit up, here it was, the mistake. They had secrets, secrets had could damage the chapter. They had lied about not knowing of their founding. They might not have fallen to chaos, but Czevak didn’t care this Lord Master had disrespected him and now he would pay. This Chapter would be hunted down and he would do it personally.

“haha (with a sneer) LORD MASTER, you have fallen, you lie and the imperium has no need for a Chapter which has fallen as far as yours. We will cleanse your souls with the emperor’s divine warriors. I will hunt down your Chapter, your First was right to hide you. His shame, his fall, his heretical filth spawn. Now die TRATORS”.

“Shit”

Vaporus turned to his crew

“Jam all out going communications, we can’t have the imperium finding out about this, call in Captain Faolan and his second fleet, they are hiding behind the moon”.

“Yes lord Dragon”

“Get me the inquisition bastard back, I want to let him in on some info be for we kill him. Also contact Captain Perdithus and tell him to prepare for battle, plus tell him I’m disappointed he was the one found”.

A grin appeared on the command crews faces; this was going to be fun.
 

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Discussion Starter · #53 ·
here is the next small section enjoy !!!

“my lord, we have the inquisitor on coms”.

“haha look at you, come to beg for mercy, before you die?”.

“no I disagree, I believe you shall die. All batteries, prepare to fire at the inquisitors ship, before i open fire inquisitor look at space grid 634 by 265 sector 3. what you see there is our second fleet. You face a total of 13 companies”.

“Empty threats, you heretic traitor, you shall all die”.
“One last thing inquisitor, we are loyal descendants of the Alpha Legion. Now die by the hands of the emperor divine justice”.

Turning to his coms to fleet channel 4 “all fleets this is the Dragon, by the emperors will and divine justice, the inquisitor has turned against the emperor. Thus usurping the power he was entrusted with for his own gain. He tries to turn brother against brother and for that we The Sea Dragons Chapter shall purge his traitorous intentions ALL BATTERIES COMENCE FIREING”.

Thousands of shells, missiles and las-cannons opened fire upon the inquisitor’s fleet, without ever returning a single shot, the inquisitors three ships went down. Explosions rippling along the ships hulls, from the bridge of the imminent death, Captain Perdithus watched as the crews of the downed ships were expelled from rents in the hull as sections of the ships depressurised. Frozen in space several body collided and shattered like glass.

One ship was left untouched, that of the grey knights. Who stood aboard their vessel in mild shock, at the destruction that their brother marines had just cast upon the inquisition. The three fleets of the Sea Dragons surrounded their vessel and opened a vox channel.

“Brothers who do you stand with, the Emperor and father to us all or men such as the inquisition who twist imperial truth for their own gain”.
 

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Discussion Starter · #54 · (Edited)
NOTE !!!!!

for some reason the inquisition tend to go ....... missing........ when they encounter my chapter.

is that a good thing or a bad thing ???????
 

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Discussion Starter · #59 ·
next part will be up on tuesday i know i know its harsh but this fluff is on my work laptop and i left it at work lol
 
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