[10228]

Hey guys,

This has been my WIP for a while now, and I've finally finished him in time for GD tomorrow.

Obviously there is no time to change anything now, but any general C&C to help me in future would be lovely.

Now for pics! Apologies for poor quality/lighting, best I could do.

Thanks, LAF

 

[GhostTwoSix]

Looks good, maybe you should lighten his skin tone a bit.

 

[KhainiteAssassin]

his skin tones fine. dont listen to ghosttwosix. I think the models done very nicely.

from what I can see in the blurryness, your highlights seem fine the skin is done excellently, I can actually make out the features very nicely, with a very good shadowing effect around the face. the gun seems abit bland, but Im sure thats just from the blurry pictures.

 

[Chaosftw]

haha looks like he has an 'old man smirk' love it!

 

[The Sullen One]

Nice model, very characterful, good luck tomorrow.

 

[10228]

Again, I apologise for the quality of the pictures, it was raining and I figured I should get some, because I had to drop him in tonight and from there, if I get through I won't see him for a few weeks.

The pictures actually make the gun look quite rough, but I agree it's a little bit bland. Regrettably I noticed while taking the pictures.

The skin tone is actually quite light, again it's the pictures not the model.

Thanks for all the compliments guys, I appreciate it

 

[10228]

Well I've made the regionals! The hard thing will be the grand final in Sydney

 

[10228]

Righto, sorry for the epic bump, but I just thought I'd let you know I did not get through regionals, but I did come close

He said a bit more highlighting on the cloak, base and flesh would've made it better (cloak was a bit flat, I tend to agree) as well as brighter gold (which I don't agree with, it IS personal preference, but I took it onboard anyway )

I've also been trying to finally get my army underway - 5yrs in the hobby without a complete army is not a good idea So I'll be starting up a weekly worklog to keep me motivated sometime in the next few days when I can be bothered to take pictures.

 

[TheReverend]

man, that's a shame, but at least you entered and got a decent way through. well done. If you'd won first time round you'd have nothing to aim for, so better luck next year mate

Rev