Dragon Slayers:A Space Marine Chapter UPDATED 23-6-14

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revilo44

Discussion Starter · May 23, 2014 (Edited)

Liberian Santon Reaves stood there, looking out on the vast blackness of space, he was on the bridge of the battle barge the Vindicator. The chapter master Ashor Talros came to join him on the front of the figurehead.
"I can feel the disruption in the warp", said Santon his force staff in one hand.
"Who"asked Ashor
"The heretics"replied santion

Hey guys, this is my plog for my first "complete" army a chapter using the salamander gene seed.

what's going to be in the army

Code:

+++  Dragon Slayers Second  Company (1496pts) +++
    * Chapter Tactics
        Salamanders


+ HQ +

    * Librarian Santon Reaves
        Auspex, Digital Weapons, Mastery Level 2, Melta Bombs
            Boltgun, Force Maul, The Shield Eternal


+ Elites +

    * Venerable  Dreadnought Sivan Decktus
        Extra Armour, Multi-Melta, 
        * Dreadnaught Power Fist
            Storm Bolter
        * Drop Pod
            Storm Bolter


    * Terminator Assault Squad Vandar
        2x Swap Lightning Claws for TH/SS, , 5x Terminators, Terminator Sergeant Uriel Vandar


+ Troops +

    * Tactical Squad Israr
        (And They Shall Know no Fear, Chapter Tactics, Combat Squads)
        Heavy Bolter,9x Space Marines
        * Veteran  Space Marine Sergeant Modun  Israr
Chainsword, Combi-flamer , 

* Rhino (The Package)
          Extra Armour	

    * Tactical Squad Argus
        Meltagun, Missile Launcher,  9x Space Marine
        * Veteran  Space Marine Sergeant lothian
            Chainsword, Combi-grav , 


    * Tactical Squad Galar
        Lascannon, 9x Space Marine
        * Veteran  Space Marine Sergeant Septemus  Galar
            Chainsword, Combi-weapon, 


+ Heavy Support +
    * Stormraven Gunship The Winged Falcon
        Extra Armour, Hurricane Bolters, Searchlight, Storm Strike Missile, Twin Linked Lascannons, Twin Linked Multi Meltas


    * Thunderfire Cannon Stomshell

finally a marine form squad israr

i think this is one of the better maines i have done as the red has smooth and does not show brush strokes, i also think that eyes accurately. for the colour scheme i used mainly Mephiston Red,Ushabti Bone,Jokaero Orange

any C&C welcome

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neferhet

· #12 · Jun 23, 2014

You could improve by using base colours for your red and "bone": the black underneath is ruining your work, imo. You could try by applying another layer of red, otherwise.
then, maybe it's the blurry pics (shame on you

) but i can't see any highlight. those, tust me, tranform a mdel from basic to high standard in a second.
Then, last but not least, i can see that here and there you should thin your paint more. Better to apply several layers of paint than just a single "blob" of paint.
I'm not a master painter, but that's the stuff i can suggest

Keep that coming!

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