[MontytheMighty]

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Overall I really like it and appreciated how much effort the author put into the work

I especially liked how he handled




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Corax's ending, quite poignant
The World Eaters
Word Bearers (esp. the death of Kor-Phaeron)
Thousand Sons (the warp rift into the official 40k reality was a great touch, I smell great material for a cross-over fanfic )
cannibal Nurgle BA's

I thought the only weak spots were
the choice of Dorn as the betrayer
Jaghatai's fall to Chaos

Ambivalent about the independence of Ultramar...the result was interesting but I felt that how it came about could've been more convincing

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