[Ste]

Heres my dkok commissar and a picture of him with his grenadier body guard unit. i decided against the black coat so did him greys

 

[Shaun_wi]

Nice model, the only criticism I have is that the highlights on the jacket are a bit too extreme. I would darken them with a wash or just re-do them with a darker shade (i.e. Adeptus battlegrey)

 

[Ste]

Yeah i ran out of badab black wash haha so havn't had a chance to slosh it over teh great coat yey and i did it with brown and it looked terrible so had to redo the whole coat. I'll definately go over it with a wash or two though. thanks shaun
-ste-

 

[HorusReborn]

badab black = chaos black thinned down. As for the paint job I'd say that a wash or two isn't going to be the end step if this is supposed to be "over the top" You need to start out with a darker grey and work your way up to that light of a shade in gades as you go to show some progression of light. Right now it looks like you painted a grey design onto a black coat... Please try to take some better pics too man, go to a craft shop and buy a piece of poster board or something to create a back drop... a little goes a long way! It's nothing against you personally man honestly!! I just feel a little ripped off thinking I was going to see some spectacular pics of a spectacular model. Your model may be spectacular, but the sub par pics really don't help!! Have some rep though man for painting him up! He is a cool figure

 

[Ste]

cheers horusreborn, iv just restarted college so may be a while before i get a chance to clean him up abit

-ste-

 

[Dermon Caffran]

i like it!!! although i dont understand the 'over the top' bit so could be missing out on the point

 

[Ste]

Just meant to be him shouting for the men to go over the top it was meant to be a joke but i failed haha