Stats – Tanthus is supposed to be a powerful mid range psyker and so his own stats should be as good as your average Chaos Sorcerer at the very least so his Ballistic Skill should 5.
Corrupted Runic Weapon – Because he is a Psyker I do believe you’re gonna wanna give him a Force Weapon instead of a standard power weapon.
Dark Robe of Warding and Corrupted Icon – Very nice I like them both :victory:
Psyker – You didn’t list down any psykic powers for him even though Fury of the Betrayed could be reflective his psyker ability amplify a Dark Talons units hatred for betrayal as well as his own into some sort of fear aura.
Desire for Vengeance – I don’t think you should use this ability to increase his close combat effectiveness as we already have Master Retrave, Kilm Vanshal and Amendeculus. Instead Desire for Revenge should be more geared towards improving his potential as a mid range psyker.
Fury of the Betrayed – I like it; but I do not believe you should have the must assault enemies within 6” part. He may desire revenge and has hatred for being betrayed as does every Dark Talon; but that doesn’t mean he desires close combat like some mindless Berzerker of Khorne.
Last Thoughts - There is one more thing I must recommend for Tanthus and that is his special psyker power. The purple fire that was used in the history is supposed to be a trait mark power of his; but no one ever cared to establish it and figure that it’s just Wind of Chaos.
Question - So if Tal’Koth was once a space wolf then you may want to read up on the Savage Wolves. You can find information
HERE
Basically a few things have happened to those Dark Talons who were once Space Wolves.
Stats – Only 1 wound? Tal’Koth is a lieutenant not a squad leader so he should have two wounds.
Sigma - pattern Bolt Pistol and Wolf-tooth Talisman - Very nice I like them both :victory:
Commanding Voice – Because the Chaos Icons are apart of the Dark Talons you can just give Tal’Koth and the squad Icon of Chaos Glory.
Drill Sergeant – Not bad; but I think a rule like that should be left to the Taskmaster of the Initiates Squad.
Raider - Umm there is no explanation but its listed and cought my interested
Otherwise we can move on to Torturer Issatroth and HQ's are done
I don't wanna sound like some kind of jerk; but I think after Torturer Issatroth we should stop with developing anymore special characters and try to fine tune the rest of the Dark Talons.
For Torturer Issatroth I think we should start with his original rules and move on from there. Possible make him somewhat similar to Fabius Bile but with his own twists.
Just click here for his special rules
here