[Captain Galus]

This is the updated version of the codex i wrote; i adjusted the point values, added a new section to the armory, and put in a few new pictures.
DISCLAIMER: once again, i take no credit for the pictures, as they are not mine. only the army itself is of my design.
anyway, open up the codex and tell me what yall think
peace

 

[plug]

wow man, thats a lot of work, well done looks good

 

[Dark Archangel]

Great Work

Great work,

Nice fluff and and good units. Mayby you should send a copy to GW?

 

[Captain Galus]

if i knew a way to do that i would do it in a heartbeat!

any GW guys post on this website? :biggrin:

 

[Cadian81st]

Wow, that's really cool. I would definitely play that army if there were models for it.

 

[Beaky]

i've had a look, you've done really well!
there's a few changes i'd make, and i've put them in my copy of Senarions, but it takes ages for the file to attach! So long in fact, i got bored, and stopped. so if anyone tells me how to attach it without it taking so long, you can all see it!

 

[Lord Sinkoran]

Love it! the fluff is amazing great job.

 

[Captain Galus]

thanks for all the positive feedback yall!
and yes there are some changes that need to be made...i might upload the updated version after i make a few more tweaks.:biggrin:

 

[Beaky]

i've got a few tweeks:
-make Vostul Guardians S4(8)
-add a defense turret to the heavy support
-add a Powersythe and Uranuim-Core Bullets to equipment
-get rid of the spitfire (pistol), because it's got the same statline as a Serahk SMG, but the SMG costs more pts.
-change the force organisation chart to:
compulsory: 1 HQ, 3 Troops
optional: 2 HQ, 3 Troops, 7 Elites and Heavy support (combined)
-and make elite and heavy support options 0-? each, so you can't take 7 units of Vostul Guardians.
-add more Bio-Enhancemnets (+1Ws, +1A etc...)
-make the silencer add pinning, instead of extra shots.
-change a couple of the Bio-Enhancements (so stamina treatment adds fleet, and eyesight twink gives the model the night vision USR)
-and why are humans in the Andromeda Galaxy?

there's a few other things as well, cos i've already done a bunch of updates to my copy of senarions, and use those rules.

 

[Captain Galus]

some good ideas that ill look into!

and why are humans in the Andromeda Galaxy?

this is based on the scientific assumption (theory lol!) that if there is intelligent life in elsewhere in the universe, it will almost undoubtedly look and sound like us.
what im aiming at with the Senarians is that humanity has popped up all over the universe in roughly the same form...of course, this is just going off my opinion

 

[Beaky]

oh, in my one, i said that a bunch of explorers before the emperor came found a wyrmhole and went through it and got into the andromeda galaxy

 

[Marshal Seir]

Is it alright for people to use this as a Codex, if they create the models. I mean in the sense that they won't be plagiarizing your army.

 

[Meep]

I personally would make some sortabig changes. Like, an amoury? I would make it more 5th edition like the new marine, the ork, the eldar, the csm codexes. Also, i would reduce the number of guns. Its just.....too much.

 

[domdan]

id love to say how good it is. but unfortunatley it wont download oh well, keep it up

 

[willofdeath]

That was awesome! Keep it up. k:

 

[Fallen]

that was damn good. although i agree with the general consensus that there is are way too many gun options.

a few ideas

1. get this copyrighted
2. possibly put the points up with the description of the units so that we can get an idea of what it would cost
3. when writing the descriptions set it up like a, not as interesting, codex with hq, elite, troop, order - it was just a little hard to figure out where some troop types would go until i got to the end...this is just my perception on reading the text.

ok...where did you find those AWSOME photos?

this really was impressive but id change the way that the Andromeda galaxy was found by using railguns are fun idea on the explorers

 

[FleshHound6]

Have just flicked through and ive gotta say it looks awsome!
grat job:victory:

 

[Ste]

epic, i absolutely love it

 

[dopey82]

this codex rocks. +rep. It could be easly fielded with a combination of existing minis like using guard and tau and by be some eldar.

 

[Captain Galus]

The pictures were from a combination of DeviantArt.com (great website btw) and Google Image Search...but mostly DA.com. I'm currently working on a new and completely revised version, so stay tuned!