[killmaimburn]

HQ - 200
Librarian
Shield of sanguinius, unleash rage
100

Librarian
Shield of sanguinius, unleash rage
100

Troops - 430
Assault Squad
10x assault marines
Remove jump packs
2xflamer
1x power weapon
215

Assault Squad
10x assault marines
Remove jump packs
2xflamer
1x power weapon
215

Elites - 400
Furioso Dreadnought
Magna-grapple, heavy flamer
150

Furioso Dreadnought
Magna-grapple, heavy flamer
150

Sanguinary Priests 100
2x priests
100

Fast Attack - 540
Land Speeder Squadron
2x land speeder typhoon
180

Land Speeder Squadron
2x land speeder typhoon
180

Land Speeder Squadron
2x land speeder typhoon
180

Heavy Support - 430
Storm Raven
twin-linked multimelta, twin-linked plasma cannon
extra armor
215

Storm Raven
twin-linked multimelta, twin-linked plasma cannon
extra armor
215

Just looking for general critique to make this type of list effective and competitive.