Couple of thoughts....
1. 3 Tacs is a lot... if you combat squad them then don't worry about the PF on the sgt... that's a bunch of points back into the pool... and in most combats with 5 marines, he may not get the chance to swing back. If you don't intend to combat squad then switch out the ML for something else...
2. Predators are much better with Las sponsons. It gives them a lot more threat
3. Realize that your iron clad is a throw away unit... he won't make it out of turn 2. Also, good opponent's will deploy in a way that he has no good targets (ie a rhino/razorback screen that will force him to give cover to the LR or other juicy target he really wants to go at.
A quick fix for your list would be to drop a tac squad. Then use the points to upgrade two rhinos to TL Las or LasPlas razorbacks. With what's left over I'd buy another predator and see if I had the points to give them las sponsons.
Also, realize that you are essentially running a rock list. The Termies can get very quickly marginalized by a good opponent, so I think the rest of your list needs more punch to make your opponent start thinking about opportunity cost (ie, shooting all at the LR means that you have to ingore the other dangerous stuff)
1. 3 Tacs is a lot... if you combat squad them then don't worry about the PF on the sgt... that's a bunch of points back into the pool... and in most combats with 5 marines, he may not get the chance to swing back. If you don't intend to combat squad then switch out the ML for something else...
2. Predators are much better with Las sponsons. It gives them a lot more threat
3. Realize that your iron clad is a throw away unit... he won't make it out of turn 2. Also, good opponent's will deploy in a way that he has no good targets (ie a rhino/razorback screen that will force him to give cover to the LR or other juicy target he really wants to go at.
A quick fix for your list would be to drop a tac squad. Then use the points to upgrade two rhinos to TL Las or LasPlas razorbacks. With what's left over I'd buy another predator and see if I had the points to give them las sponsons.
Also, realize that you are essentially running a rock list. The Termies can get very quickly marginalized by a good opponent, so I think the rest of your list needs more punch to make your opponent start thinking about opportunity cost (ie, shooting all at the LR means that you have to ingore the other dangerous stuff)