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please review the following piece of writing and any tips for improvement in any aspects also any ideas for the aesthetics of the warband and chapter symbol, i want to keep the Dark Angels robes and general feel while being made up of the colours black and white. thanks for any advice
Angels of Malice
The angels of malice are a renegade chapter formed in the 31st millennium that defected from the imperium at some point during the 40th millennium and now worship the chaos entity Malice. The Angels of Malice are a successor chapter to the Dark Angels chapter and were part of the collective known as the Unforgiven.
Chapter history
The Angels of Malice remained close with their founders maintaining a similar organisation and com bat doctrine to the Dark Angels except for one difference, the have an 11th company made up of veterans who specialise in guerrilla tactics and providing mobile ranged fire support for advancing units, these veterans have been briefed on the existence of the fallen more than the Ravenwing but not as much as the Deathwing, this company is known as the Wraithwing (nicked named the “death whisperers”) the rest of the chapter does not know much of this company other than their existence and their appearance . The purpose of the Wraithwing aside from disrupting the enemies supply lines and demoralising them by assassinations or ambushes is to track The Fallen and to disable their holdings in any way possible, be it killing the guards in their sleep, placing remotely detonated explosives, teleporter beacons and recon. Once this is completed the Wraithwing then retreat to a nearby firing position and support the advancing Ravenwing and deepstriking Deathwing. The Angels of Malice’s first chapter master was Dark Angel Elias Saul company master of the 10th scout company. Like the rest of the Unforgiven the Angels of Malice harboured a grudge against the inquisition but unlike the other Dark Angels descendants it was not just for their constant struggle to undercover the Unforgiven’s plans for redemption but also their complete disregard for human life
The one great truth
The reasoning for the Angels of Malice’s defection starts on the hive world of Camellias 4 in which a chaos uprising had occurred and the 4th company of the Angels of malice was deployed in order to counteract the incursion, the harshest of the fighting occurred in and around of Hap-spire 34 in which the main power plants were located as well as the governing households both sides saw the strategic importance of this location as if the governors fell morale of the PDF regiments in place would fall and combined with the loss of the power plants so would the planet. The fighting became so fierce the 4th company called for the rest of the chapters aid instead their distress call was answered by an Inquisitorial vessel entering the system demands the Angels evacuate the Governing body and any possessions they require, the Angels complied and successfully got the governors off planet soon afterwhich the Inquisistion attempted to order the Angels to evacuate as-well calling the war “a waste of resources”, the Angels refused as the rest of the chapter would be entering system shortly the inquisistion paid no notice and began virus bombing the planet in order to eradicate the chaos taint and in the process destroying the entire 4th company and their gene seeds. The viral bombing finished just as the 1st 3rd 6th and 11th companies of the Angels of Malice entered the system; enraged by the inquisitions actions the Angels bombarded the ship making short work of the dogs, it was at that very moment the Angels realised the true face of Imperium and realised who they served, seeking guidance the chapter gathered and communicated with the Dark Angels Grand Master Azrael himself, upon revealing the events to the Grand Master the reaction was not what the Angels had hoped for, their own father chapter turned on them declaring them equal with the fallen angels who destroyed Caliban so long ago and tarnished the Chapter to this very day. The Chapter then fled into the warp but luckily the Dark Angels secretive nature worked in the Angels of Malice’s favour as all record of their existence was wiped from the records and all credible witnesses were “removed” . Upon exiting the warp the Angels came across an icy deathworld by the name of … intrigued that they were not fired at as soon as they entered the system the observed the planet for several months, what discovered shocked them; the world was most certainly an imperial world as they could see imperial governors flaunting their power everywhere the stood however, even on this so called “civilised” world the workers were treated as slaves being publicly branded and excuted for the most menial of crimes, no better than most of the chaos held worlds the Angels had purged. This disturbed the Angels to their very core, how could this be happening on an imperial world, how could the inquisition pay no notice to this, how could the God emperor himself allow this. It was at this point the Angels realised the truth the emperor was no more than rotting flesh and bones, the inquisition was as corrupt as those the claim they fight and to the imperium the men and women who inhabit these worlds are not humans, merely tools to complete a task. The Angels of Malice then took it upon themselves to cleanse the imperium of this mockery and to bring glory back to their name.
Angels of Malice
The angels of malice are a renegade chapter formed in the 31st millennium that defected from the imperium at some point during the 40th millennium and now worship the chaos entity Malice. The Angels of Malice are a successor chapter to the Dark Angels chapter and were part of the collective known as the Unforgiven.
Chapter history
The Angels of Malice remained close with their founders maintaining a similar organisation and com bat doctrine to the Dark Angels except for one difference, the have an 11th company made up of veterans who specialise in guerrilla tactics and providing mobile ranged fire support for advancing units, these veterans have been briefed on the existence of the fallen more than the Ravenwing but not as much as the Deathwing, this company is known as the Wraithwing (nicked named the “death whisperers”) the rest of the chapter does not know much of this company other than their existence and their appearance . The purpose of the Wraithwing aside from disrupting the enemies supply lines and demoralising them by assassinations or ambushes is to track The Fallen and to disable their holdings in any way possible, be it killing the guards in their sleep, placing remotely detonated explosives, teleporter beacons and recon. Once this is completed the Wraithwing then retreat to a nearby firing position and support the advancing Ravenwing and deepstriking Deathwing. The Angels of Malice’s first chapter master was Dark Angel Elias Saul company master of the 10th scout company. Like the rest of the Unforgiven the Angels of Malice harboured a grudge against the inquisition but unlike the other Dark Angels descendants it was not just for their constant struggle to undercover the Unforgiven’s plans for redemption but also their complete disregard for human life
The one great truth
The reasoning for the Angels of Malice’s defection starts on the hive world of Camellias 4 in which a chaos uprising had occurred and the 4th company of the Angels of malice was deployed in order to counteract the incursion, the harshest of the fighting occurred in and around of Hap-spire 34 in which the main power plants were located as well as the governing households both sides saw the strategic importance of this location as if the governors fell morale of the PDF regiments in place would fall and combined with the loss of the power plants so would the planet. The fighting became so fierce the 4th company called for the rest of the chapters aid instead their distress call was answered by an Inquisitorial vessel entering the system demands the Angels evacuate the Governing body and any possessions they require, the Angels complied and successfully got the governors off planet soon afterwhich the Inquisistion attempted to order the Angels to evacuate as-well calling the war “a waste of resources”, the Angels refused as the rest of the chapter would be entering system shortly the inquisistion paid no notice and began virus bombing the planet in order to eradicate the chaos taint and in the process destroying the entire 4th company and their gene seeds. The viral bombing finished just as the 1st 3rd 6th and 11th companies of the Angels of Malice entered the system; enraged by the inquisitions actions the Angels bombarded the ship making short work of the dogs, it was at that very moment the Angels realised the true face of Imperium and realised who they served, seeking guidance the chapter gathered and communicated with the Dark Angels Grand Master Azrael himself, upon revealing the events to the Grand Master the reaction was not what the Angels had hoped for, their own father chapter turned on them declaring them equal with the fallen angels who destroyed Caliban so long ago and tarnished the Chapter to this very day. The Chapter then fled into the warp but luckily the Dark Angels secretive nature worked in the Angels of Malice’s favour as all record of their existence was wiped from the records and all credible witnesses were “removed” . Upon exiting the warp the Angels came across an icy deathworld by the name of … intrigued that they were not fired at as soon as they entered the system the observed the planet for several months, what discovered shocked them; the world was most certainly an imperial world as they could see imperial governors flaunting their power everywhere the stood however, even on this so called “civilised” world the workers were treated as slaves being publicly branded and excuted for the most menial of crimes, no better than most of the chaos held worlds the Angels had purged. This disturbed the Angels to their very core, how could this be happening on an imperial world, how could the inquisition pay no notice to this, how could the God emperor himself allow this. It was at this point the Angels realised the truth the emperor was no more than rotting flesh and bones, the inquisition was as corrupt as those the claim they fight and to the imperium the men and women who inhabit these worlds are not humans, merely tools to complete a task. The Angels of Malice then took it upon themselves to cleanse the imperium of this mockery and to bring glory back to their name.