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Only read about the Black Chain Host. Cool stuff, nothing to change, imo. (they are such noobz)

 

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of course, i imagined that. Are you using them in a gaming campaign or you write fanon just for fun?

EDIT: also, about Azaria, i think there should be a more precise description of his apperance and some more details on his daemonic maul

RE_EDIT: About Viktor, there are a few typos here and there. Give it another read
Then, the Damados-Viktor relationship and the betrayal plan should get some more love, i liked that but it was too quickly dismissed.

A fun and entertaining read!

P.S. Why not to write a page for the Black Aegis? I'm curious about them...

 

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When you do, make shure you post the updates here I'll have a read!
Also, see updates on my previous post

 

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:victory:

 

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Very interested in Diamondback cell. How do you plan to use them gamewise? The Specialist thing, in particular, with new rules it will be hard to make them led by an astartes. Maybe using the old Defenders of vraks army list?

 

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Gotta love the brass maw. The description of Balthazar is awesome! I could almost see him! Great piece! Also, it was about time that someone remembered the less common sides of khorne's worshipping. Respect for the honorable Maws! +rep for you

 

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you should post pics, even if its a wip!