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Greetings meatbags, as you can likely guess I am a servant of Chaos and as such have written some fanon articles that I would not mind some comments and critiques on. I am always looking to improve my articles and the characters they encompass so let me know what you all think...
Viktor Aramoraehttps://www.blogger.com/blogger.g?b...onClosedMenu=allposts;postNum=13;src=postname
Azaria Drakehttps://www.blogger.com/blogger.g?b...;onClosedMenu=allposts;postNum=6;src=postname
Chapter of the Black Chainhttps://www.blogger.com/blogger.g?b...onClosedMenu=allposts;postNum=11;src=postname

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Diamondbackhttps://www.blogger.com/blogger.g?b...;onClosedMenu=allposts;postNum=9;src=postname
Lords of the Anvilhttps://www.blogger.com/blogger.g?b...onClosedMenu=allposts;postNum=12;src=postname
Warriors of the Brass Mawhttps://www.blogger.com/blogger.g?b...onClosedMenu=allposts;postNum=10;src=postname

EDIT: The links have been modified because the articles have been moved to a blog rather than remaining in their wiki format
 

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Only read about the Black Chain Host. Cool stuff, nothing to change, imo. (they are such noobz) :)
 

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of course, i imagined that. Are you using them in a gaming campaign or you write fanon just for fun?

EDIT: also, about Azaria, i think there should be a more precise description of his apperance and some more details on his daemonic maul

RE_EDIT: About Viktor, there are a few typos here and there. Give it another read :)
Then, the Damados-Viktor relationship and the betrayal plan should get some more love, i liked that but it was too quickly dismissed.

A fun and entertaining read!

P.S. Why not to write a page for the Black Aegis? I'm curious about them...
 

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of course, i imagined that. Are you using them in a gaming campaign or you write fanon just for fun?

EDIT: also, about Azaria, i think there should be a more precise description of his apperance and some more details on his daemonic maul
They are one of my armies that i paint but i also write fanon for fun.

I actually just finished a Model for Azaria (didnt want to give a description until i was sure about the design) and in about a week i will have it up on that page as his image and then i will customize the description. As for the Maul i am really bad with Daemon-Lore and naming Daemons and describing rituals so that may take a lot longer
 

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When you do, make shure you post the updates here ;) I'll have a read!
Also, see updates on my previous post :)
 

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RE_EDIT: About Viktor, there are a few typos here and there. Give it another read :)
Then, the Damados-Viktor relationship and the betrayal plan should get some more love, i liked that but it was too quickly dismissed.

A fun and entertaining read!

P.S. Why not to write a page for the Black Aegis? I'm curious about them...
I may go more into it once i start adding more "notable conflicts" and occurrences, also perhaps i will design an IW GC to better illustrate those around Viktor and Damados but as for right now i dont have any ideas. Also about the Black Aegis, If i do make the GC page then they will definitely have a large section of it all to themselves.
Also i cannot edit anything at the moment on the wiki as i just got a name change and sometimes it bugs out keeps me blocked for a while so in around a week i should be able to clean up the articles
 

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Very interested in Diamondback cell. How do you plan to use them gamewise? The Specialist thing, in particular, with new rules it will be hard to make them led by an astartes. Maybe using the old Defenders of vraks army list?
 

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Very interested in Diamondback cell. How do you plan to use them gamewise? The Specialist thing, in particular, with new rules it will be hard to make them led by an astartes. Maybe using the old Defenders of vraks army list?
Well considering the Astartes-led groups are not a constant tactic, but rather one used in dire situations i wouldnt really need to use them in a list although if i did they would likely just be counts-as for a Sergeant or the humans would be counts-as for Astartes depending on what i came up with. I dont really dip into outside rule sets (outside of the codices) because there is always a chance that your opponent will not accept them which makes your entire army composition null.

Main problem is that i dont have a particular codex for them mainly because a few differeny ones have the right pieces but none have the right whole. CSM has Cultists, SM has Scouts and different doctrines to mix it up, IG has stormtroopers, etc. So at this point i am just building my army a box at a time and i will worry about their list and rules later
 

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New link added to OP, most pages have also been updated with new info
 

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Gotta love the brass maw. The description of Balthazar is awesome! I could almost see him! Great piece! Also, it was about time that someone remembered the less common sides of khorne's worshipping. Respect for the honorable Maws! +rep for you
 

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Much appreciated, i have been working on a model for Balthazar as well and all i need is a helmet that i have yet to find
 

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you should post pics, even if its a wip!
 

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I likely will, i have just recently finished more AL so im gonna post whenever i get a chance so i take pics of them i will also get some of Balthazar
 
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