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HQ: 275

Chapter Master Pedro Kantor 175
Librarian Nerovar Exellion 100
w/ Smite, Null Zone

ELITES: 850

Venerable Dreadnought Ixon 200
w/ Drop Pod
Sternguard Squad Zorax 325
w/ 9 Sternguard Veterans, 1 Powerfist, 3 Combi-Flamers, Drop Pod
Sternguard Squad Calvero 325
w/ 9 Sternguard Veterans, 1 Powerfist, 3 Combi-Meltas, Drop Pod

TROOPS: 637

Scout Squad Aleximum 227
w/ 10 Scouts, Sergeant Aleximum (Telion), 8 Sniper Rifles, 1 Missile Launcher, Camo Cloaks
Tactical Squad Andres 230
w/ Flamer, Missile Launcher, Powerfist, Rhino
Tactical Squad Lexion 205
w/ Flamer, Missile Launcher, Rhino

FAST ATTACK: 60

Land Speeder "Eternal Crimson" 60
w/ Multi-Meta

HEAVY SUPPORT: 250

Predator "Rynn's Vengance" 165
w/ Lascannon Side Sponsons, Twin Linked Lascannon
Predator "In Memorial" 85
w/ Heavy Bolter Sponsons

That Leaves me with 3 points. Fix at will, and I'm trying to keep it as fluffy as possible. Also, the Venerable Dread isn't going.

 

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Well what could I add to make it more competitive but fluffable?