[DeniedSM]

Ok...so im new..no idea what im doing. so. This is what i came up with.
C&C is welcome. be nice haha.


Librarian 100 points


Tactical Squad 230 points
10 man
lascannon
Sergeant
-chainsword
Rhino (extra armor)

Tactical Squad 230 points
10 man
lascannon
Sergeant
-chainsword
Rhino (extra armor)

Scout Squad 125 points
5 man
Telion

Assault Squad 225 points
10 man
flamer
Power fist


Devastator Squad 205 points
10 man
lascannon

Predator 115 points
twin linked lascannon
storm bolter

Whirlwind 85 points

Vindicator 185
Chronus


Points: 1500 exact

 

[Marneus Calgar]

Ok...so im new..no idea what im doing. so. This is what i came up with.
C&C is welcome. be nice haha.


Librarian 100 points


Tactical Squad 230 points
10 man
lascannon
Sergeant
-chainsword
Rhino (extra armor)

Tactical Squad 230 points
10 man
lascannon
Sergeant
-chainsword
Rhino (extra armor)

Scout Squad 125 points
5 man
Telion

Assault Squad 225 points
10 man
flamer
Power fist


Devastator Squad 205 points
10 man
lascannon

Predator 115 points
twin linked lascannon
storm bolter

Whirlwind 85 points

Vindicator 185
Chronus


Points: 1500 exact

Looks a nice list, apart from the fact you have four Heavy Supports . You're only allowed three .

I would suggest getting rid of the Whirlwind, they don't always fare very well. I would then use the points to give the devastator squad more weapons, seems just like a normal tactical squad to me. Not really worth it if you don't have a ton of awesome weaponry .

I would also reccomend giving your tactical squads flamers at the very least, they're free so you don't have to worry about points.

Hope this helps!

 

[DeniedSM]

Ok i actually wanna stay with the whirlwind so i removed the vindicator and chronus. afteri geared the devestators i had extra points so imight use them to buff my lib. ill repost in this thread my new list as soon as i get a chance. i also wanna wait and see what others say. (didnt realize only 3 heavies allowed)

 

[DeniedSM]

Ok i edited the army list and this is what i came up with (after a TON of tweeking)
The Librarian is ment to deep strike in attached to my assault squad



Librarian 175 points
Epistolary
Force Dome
The Avenger
Jump Pack

Tactical Squad 230 points
10 man
Flamer
lascannon
Sergeant
-chainsword
Rhino (extra armor)

Tactical Squad 230 points
10 man
Flamer
lascannon
Sergeant
-chainsword
Rhino (extra armor)

Scout Squad 125 points
10 man
Sniper Rifles (all)
Telion

Assault Squad 230 points
10 man
flamer
Melta Bombs (had 5 left over points at the end.)
Power fist

Devastator Squad 230 points
5 man
4 lascannon

Predator 115 points
twin linked lascannon
storm bolter

Whirlwind 100 points
Extra Armor


Points: 1500 exact

 

[Izzleydill]

If you want to be using the tactical marines aggresively drop the lascannon since it is a heavy weapon. The lascannon doesn't agree with the rhino/flamer/chainsword. It can't be fired when you move, or are attacking in melee. Besides the devastator squad gives you enough anti-tank. Personally i'd rather have extra armor on predator then whirlwind, especially with the firepower upgrade. also I don't think scouts have the right amount of points. But i love the balance, and how its ready for just about anything.

 

[DeniedSM]

Thanks for the advice. I removed the lascannons and fixed the scout points. I did add extra armor to the predator and was able to leave the armor on the whirlwind. I had 10 points left over so i added meltas to my tactical squads. just for filler. So if worse comes to worse they still have it. here is my revised army. Please Look it over and tel me what you think.

I appreciate the compliment. I was going for a balance that could handle as many situations as possible.

Also. Are my spells for my librarian appropriate. Since hes attached to my assault squad and deep striking with them. I figured itll let them live a little longer and give essentially another flamer.



Librarian 175 points
Epistolary
Force Dome
The Avenger
Jump Pack

Tactical Squad 225 points
10 man
Flamer
Sergeant
-chainsword
Melta Bombs
Rhino (extra armor)

Tactical Squad 225 points
10 man
Flamer
Sergeant
-chainsword
Melta Bombs
Rhino (extra armor)

Scout Squad 190 points
10 man
Sniper Rifles (All)
Telion

Assault Squad 225 points
10 man
flamer
Power fist

Devastator Squad 230 points
5 man
4 lascannon

Predator 130 points
twin linked lascannon
storm bolter
Extra Armor

Whirlwind 100 points
Extra Armor


Points: 1500 exact

 

[atatjacob1]

you sure about the whole library approach? i'd go for that kor'sarro'kan dude with the wolfblade thingy. he gives one unit outflank and any wound he makes on a 6 does instant death, plus he's only 160pts!