id just use a normal DP w/ WT & wings - MoT if anything for the 4++
id drop the lascannon from the 1st CSM squad, take a second melta
if your taking a PF dont use MoS - use chaos glory or nothing
if your opponent doesnt have too much armor why do your termies have PFs? just use PWs & combi flamers, maybe MoS
perhaps the defiler could work...but those are rather expensive at this point level - IF you had them id run 2 vindicators
id drop the lascannon from the 1st CSM squad, take a second melta
if your taking a PF dont use MoS - use chaos glory or nothing
if your opponent doesnt have too much armor why do your termies have PFs? just use PWs & combi flamers, maybe MoS
perhaps the defiler could work...but those are rather expensive at this point level - IF you had them id run 2 vindicators