I enjoyed it overall. However, the moment where Spock yells KHAAAANNNNNNN! didn't feel quite what it should have been. In WoK when Kirk saw his dead best friend, they'd both been working together for years and years. This Kirk and Spock just didn't have that much time together, so the emotions were a bit forced I think. Also, the bit with the tribble was cringefully obvious with its foreshadowing.
Finished: Too Much Love Will Kill You (working title), an original fiction novel. Working on: Second draft of Too Much Love, and the first draft of A Winter's Tale (working title).