I'll add my thoughts if nobody else will...
Astorath, meh. Psychic hood would be more use. In a DC Raven Lemartes makes more sense; cheaper, more killy once you pop a wound on him, not an IC. I'd grab a different HQ.
8 tanks at 2.5k - errr, nothing special.
Only 2 x 10 man scoring units, way too light. Sure, they're in LRs but since they're going to be getting stuck in what will hold objectives?
Land Raiders carrying nothing threatening - can be ignored until resources allow their destruction (especially since they're relatively slow compared to the rest of the army).
1 SR, carrying what? 920 points!?!? Wow, I'll down that AV12 fast skimmer first then, it doesn't even have Extra Armour. 10 x power weapons!? Come on, that 1 AV12 target is way to expensive. DC are meh at best, they overkill in most cases. Honour Guard would be better here, at least they can pop a tank then charge what's inside, heck at least you can control where they move &/or run! I like the DC Dread but he's not worth it if you waste a ton of points on DC.
Baals are solid.
Vindies are meh. Short range & probably going to have a lack of targets since you're running an assault list. Las Preds would probably be better.
Sorry if that all came across quite negative dude but I like to be honest.
Last edited by Dallas_Drake; 03-10-11 at 10:46 PM.