I agree with Blood_Knight, The army is ok, but can be better if you can change out the whole devastor squad for some better choices thats if you can. They seem to cost a lot and dont get you back the points you putt into them but If you do run them alway run tem in 10 man squads.
Also if I was you I would put a counter-punch (assualt) unit in the list the terminators or great for that job, but are too slow for it unless you think ahead.
Well good luck on the list and ...
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