Well first of all i think you forgot to change the points when you got rid of the individual upgrades (for the last couple at least).
As for the list: I agree with ntaw on what he posted. In addition, I would (personally) drop the epistolary upgrade, unless you have a specific use for it in mind those points could almost always be better spent.
As for the list as a whole, it seems kinda all over. If these are the models you have then no need to go out and buy new ones, but if you are planning to buy or have lots of models I would go for something with more cohesion: Right now you have 1 tank, 2 jump squads, 1 footslogger and 1 dread in a pod (plus a flier). The Tac. are much less mobile than the rest of your army, the tank is unsupported (as in its pretty much the only AT target so will probably be destroyed, until the dread arrives at least). Its not a necessarily bad list (in fact it has a lot of great elements), but it has specific elements that can be countered easily.
If you go down to the woods today, be wary