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Forum: Original Works   11-15-10, 08:20 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 496
Posted By toffster
Icon Desola Memoria

Haven't written anything in a little while, so I'll upload this one in small parts so issues can be picked out easily. Any suggestions will be VERY welcome.

Desola Memoria

Light suddenly flared...
Forum: Original Works   11-15-10, 08:18 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 473
Posted By toffster
One thing, is the spelling in the fluff meant to...

One thing, is the spelling in the fluff meant to be from the Ork warboss? Because it isn't exactly fantastic. No offense but please go through it with a spell checker, you have many simple mistakes...
Forum: Wargaming News and 40k Rumors   11-13-10, 08:37 PM
Replies: 130
Views: 15,303
Posted By toffster
8/10 Good Film!

Personally thought it was great. Thought the graphics/CGI could have been improved a little more but this was only a small budget film so thats fair enough. I'm really looking forward to a second...
Forum: Original Works   06-27-10, 12:12 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 369
Posted By toffster
The cold

As soon as you realise this a poem,
Do not click on the back button,
Nor neglect to post,
Make a poet happy,
And post something nice!

This will eventually develop into a short story, if some...
Forum: Original Works   06-26-10, 09:01 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 763
Posted By toffster
Good story, although I think there needs to be...

Good story, although I think there needs to be some more motivation for the people, people would rather not be slaughtered like that attacking the Imps fortress. Perhaps some chaos involved? That...
Forum: Original Works   06-26-10, 08:41 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 431
Posted By toffster
Icon Liberation

I haven't been writing in a long time, thought I'd get back into things with this project I have here. Sorry if I'm a little rusty, here is a brief summary of the novel to be. A blurb I suppose.
...
Forum: Original Works   06-26-10, 08:12 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 735
Posted By toffster
Does sound nice, I must admit I haven't read it...

Does sound nice, I must admit I haven't read it all yet. It hurts my eyes, although I like the introduction and the placement of the text at the top. Will read it all tomorrow when I'm not...
Forum: Original Works   06-26-10, 08:02 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,000
Posted By toffster
Bit of a small chapter? Perhaps it could be a few...

Bit of a small chapter? Perhaps it could be a few pages longer ;)
Sounds like a nice idea though, I suppose it's from the view point of a civilian or PDF trooper?
Forum: Original Works   02-28-10, 06:22 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,149
Posted By toffster
Ok I'm confused. Plus I can't see your sig as on...

Ok I'm confused. Plus I can't see your sig as on my iPod remember? Lol
Forum: Original Works   02-28-10, 03:30 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,149
Posted By toffster
Yes, perhaps the young primarch is kept on the...

Yes, perhaps the young primarch is kept on the planet... I have an idea for the prologue and have wrote it out in note form. However the Internet on my computer is bust so I'm stuck to posting on my...
Forum: Original Works   02-28-10, 09:41 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,149
Posted By toffster
Ooooo ok second it is. The idea is that Horus...

Ooooo ok second it is. The idea is that Horus keepss him secret. So he wouldn't really have his own legion as such.
Edit: brainwave! Perhaps the. Legion of the damned?!
Forum: Original Works   02-27-10, 09:00 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,149
Posted By toffster
Ok 20th it is. The idea is that you follow the...

Ok 20th it is. The idea is that you follow the Primarchs growth for a little until Horus arrives upon the planet, just as he's beginning to "lose it". He doesn't announce his suspicouns that he has...
Forum: Original Works   02-27-10, 10:30 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,149
Posted By toffster
Horus' betrayal

I have an idea for a story using horus and the 19th primach or even the 20th please tell me if you have any objections or if there is already a story using the 19th primarch. May have to make a 21st...
Forum: Roleplay Threads   02-23-10, 10:12 PM
Replies: 66
Views: 3,279
Posted By toffster
On the wall was blood. It spelled: The...

On the wall was blood. It spelled:

The corpse god protects,
from his ... Throne,
Which wire will you pick?
The ... will save the others,
Red will only save you,
Or does chaos lie?

The grey...
Forum: Roleplay Threads   02-22-10, 06:56 PM
Replies: 66
Views: 3,279
Posted By toffster
The grey knight sparked in a electric fire that...

The grey knight sparked in a electric fire that engulfed the two pyskers and Tarkantor flashed. He was gone.

Tarkantor appeared in the room with the time bomb. The timer was now on 3 minutes, the...
Forum: Roleplay Threads   02-21-10, 02:44 PM
Replies: 66
Views: 3,279
Posted By toffster
The grey knights blade swung through the air and...

The grey knights blade swung through the air and cut the daemon. Forcing it back into the warp cage with his mind. He watched the pysker laying on the floor. Only a warp dabbling heretic could have...
Forum: Roleplay Threads   02-19-10, 10:13 AM
Replies: 66
Views: 3,279
Posted By toffster
[[Thats the idea, only a sorceror of the warp...

[[Thats the idea, only a sorceror of the warp could win that fight. Keep posting and you'll see.]]
Forum: Original Works   02-17-10, 10:18 AM
Replies: 66
Views: 4,443
Posted By toffster
Havnt been following this in a while going to...

Havnt been following this in a while going to take some tome to read it. Thanks for the spoiler lol didn't know she was dead, was expecting it at some point but :cray:
Forum: Original Works   02-17-10, 10:14 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 695
Posted By toffster
This isn't a chapter of mine of course but...

This isn't a chapter of mine of course but thought including the inquisition would be a good idea
Forum: Roleplay Threads   02-16-10, 01:03 PM
Replies: 66
Views: 3,279
Posted By toffster
The daemon writhed. Red spots burst and it...

The daemon writhed. Red spots burst and it squealed, straining at it's restraints. It would slaughter this human. The daemon Prince moaned. The cage bent, and the beast broke free. The grey Knight...
Forum: Original Works   02-16-10, 11:09 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 512
Posted By toffster
Prayer of a Dead Man (Poem)

In the wake of battle,
I gaze at my comrades,
Across no man's land,
The thunder has stopped,
The sky is filled with blood,
The sight chills my soul,

My boots are soaked,
In my blood,
My...
Forum: Roleplay Threads   02-14-10, 10:06 AM
Replies: 66
Views: 3,279
Posted By toffster
"Yes, that is why you shall not fight me." The...

"Yes, that is why you shall not fight me." The grey knight smiled. The smile disorientated Tarkantor's senses. "You must only prove your worth."
Forum: Original Works   02-14-10, 10:01 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,429
Posted By toffster
Thanks for the nice comments. Sorting out those...

Thanks for the nice comments.
Sorting out those typos etc now Initiate. Thanks for pointing them out.

He watches us,
From his Throne,
The Golden Throne,
O, Golden Throne,

Nostrum officuim...
Forum: Roleplay Threads   02-13-10, 04:54 PM
Replies: 66
Views: 3,279
Posted By toffster
"Yes, but you were found in the warp....

"Yes, but you were found in the warp. Unconsicious. Near the site of Lord Brauntus' fortress world. You are to be judged."

The grey knight motioned to the weapon on the floor, a gleaming metal...
Forum: Roleplay Threads   02-13-10, 04:51 PM
Replies: 29
Views: 1,955
Posted By toffster
Ok now I'm confused too. The reason there is so...

Ok now I'm confused too. The reason there is so many back and forth posts is that the scene i set up for the others hasn't been responded too. Thats why theres so many posts. The original idea was...
Forum: Roleplay Threads   02-11-10, 04:23 PM
Replies: 66
Views: 3,279
Posted By toffster
[[There is a situation for them at the moment yet...

[[There is a situation for them at the moment yet they are not posting on it. If you go back a few pages they are in a room with a bomb that is counting down 5 mins. It is not my fault they are...
Forum: Roleplay Threads   02-11-10, 04:22 PM
Replies: 29
Views: 1,955
Posted By toffster
Theres something going on right now for the...

Theres something going on right now for the others yet they chose not to post. Theres a time bomb situation and they're doing absolutely nothing in posting wise.
Forum: Roleplay Threads   02-10-10, 03:47 PM
Replies: 66
Views: 3,279
Posted By toffster
The Pysker lay in the middle of the arena. A few...

The Pysker lay in the middle of the arena. A few serfs looked on as he woke. Above him stood the full toned body of a space marine. The Pysker craned his neck up at the astartes.
"Now you prove your...
Forum: Original Works   02-09-10, 03:33 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,429
Posted By toffster
The Emperor blew upon us, Turning us from...

The Emperor blew upon us,
Turning us from sparks,
Into flames,
Into furnaces,

He created us,
To fight,
To live,
To protect,
Forum: Roleplay Threads   02-09-10, 03:30 PM
Replies: 66
Views: 3,279
Posted By toffster
The grey knight stepped in front of Tarkantor,...

The grey knight stepped in front of Tarkantor, just behind the vats. The physker cried in pain.
"There is only the Emperor, and he is our sheild and protector." The knight nodded. "Remember this."
Forum: Roleplay Threads   02-09-10, 03:28 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,634
Posted By toffster
Sargon heard the call for assitance and raised...

Sargon heard the call for assitance and raised the lascannon he so dearly loved. He aimed at the incoming drop pods and released burst after burst at the incoming heretics. The aiming reticles...
Forum: Roleplay Threads   02-08-10, 07:22 PM
Replies: 66
Views: 3,279
Posted By toffster
"Congratulations. I shall restore a small part of...

"Congratulations. I shall restore a small part of your power."
A warm glow spread through Tarkantor as a small part of his powers returned. Yet everything was still blocked, there was no way too...
Forum: Roleplay Threads   02-08-10, 04:12 PM
Replies: 66
Views: 3,279
Posted By toffster
The first trial would begin momentarily. ...

The first trial would begin momentarily.

Grey Knight terminator captain Zogon dragged the squealing Phsyker across the room with his thoughts. He dumped him before a large cauldron. Inside the...
Forum: Original Works   02-08-10, 04:08 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,876
Posted By toffster
I'll look forward to the second part. Just a tiny...

I'll look forward to the second part. Just a tiny piece of advice.

Maybe you shouldn't write at 4:00am. :laugh:

"towering brute of the Chief Custode". Maybe towering brute figure of the cheif...
Forum: Original Works   02-08-10, 04:01 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,429
Posted By toffster
Haha, I'm thinking of writing some more after to...

Haha, I'm thinking of writing some more after to follow it on. As you can see in the second to last stanzer it talks a little more sense.
Forum: Original Works   02-07-10, 02:07 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,429
Posted By toffster
The Chanting Of a Chaplain (Poem)

Death is inevitable,
Death is constant,
Death thrives in war,
Death thrives in the 41st millennium,

There is only war,
There is only death,
No peace,
No life,
Forum: Original Works   02-07-10, 01:59 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,095
Posted By toffster
That would be good yes. I would keep your work on...

That would be good yes. I would keep your work on spectres at the moment, it's probably the best story i've read on here yet.
Forum: Original Works   02-07-10, 01:56 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,363
Posted By toffster
Read it again, very good now. More of a...

Read it again, very good now. More of a mysterious aspect. You don't really know whats going on and therefore want to read further! Looking out for the next bit! Oh yes.... +rep
Forum: Original Works   02-07-10, 01:46 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,363
Posted By toffster
I think maybe you should remove the last couple...

I think maybe you should remove the last couple of sentences. You started with a mysterious aspect and those sentences completely ruined it. ASTARTES in caps was a little unecessary in my opinion....
Forum: Original Works   02-07-10, 01:38 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,876
Posted By toffster
Looking good so far, however i have one thing to...

Looking good so far, however i have one thing to point out.
*"the Custodian Guards were enormous bigger" I'm afraid that sentence makes no sense in any language i can think of :D

Howeverwhat I do...
Forum: Video Games & Software   02-05-10, 08:04 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,061
Posted By toffster
Just a decent amount of memort and hard disk...

Just a decent amount of memort and hard disk space and it's fine. A fully installed wow client takes up to 13gb for me. Thats extremely small. I expect most laptops could run it with ease so don't...
Forum: Video Games & Software   02-05-10, 08:00 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 413
Posted By toffster
Try reinstalling the software. Then try again. If...

Try reinstalling the software. Then try again. If still not working go on the troubleshoot section of Blizzard.com .

If you get it working pick Blades Edge, I've got a 80 on there and can help...
Forum: Original Works   02-05-10, 07:57 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,095
Posted By toffster
Is there a possibility of a second one? Something...

Is there a possibility of a second one? Something like "You are Da Boss" for orks...
Actually thats a good idea *suspicious looks*.
Forum: Roleplay Threads   02-05-10, 04:51 PM
Replies: 66
Views: 3,279
Posted By toffster
He was a swirling mass of blazing energy in the...

He was a swirling mass of blazing energy in the darkness. Electrical storms surged around him as he flew through the warp. Captain Zogon was on a mission. One he would complete or die trying. He...
Forum: Roleplay Threads   02-03-10, 04:01 PM
Replies: 66
Views: 3,279
Posted By toffster
Timan was curled up in a dark place. Memories...

Timan was curled up in a dark place. Memories slowly rushed back to him, and he watched in horror at his own demise.

"BOW DOWN!" an obscene voice bellowed into the darkness.
"No" He heard his own...
Forum: Original Works   02-02-10, 04:13 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 642
Posted By toffster
A nice start, maybe make more of a hook on the...

A nice start, maybe make more of a hook on the end of the chapter though. That way it keeps people interest and makes them want to read on. I didn't really like the phrase "from somewhere" when the...
Forum: Original Works   02-02-10, 04:07 PM
Replies: 66
Views: 4,443
Posted By toffster
Great so far, looking absolutely great. Just one...

Great so far, looking absolutely great. Just one thing. Maybe a little more description of scenery or longer paragraphs, it all passes a little to quick. Otherwise it's VERY good so far.
Forum: Project Logs   02-02-10, 03:59 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,002
Posted By toffster
I've got loads of stuff to build up at the...

I've got loads of stuff to build up at the moment. Around two strike forces :)

It's a codex sept. (forget the name).

Thanks, i did have some help *blush*.
Forum: Roleplay Threads   02-02-10, 03:56 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,634
Posted By toffster
Sargon knelt watching the pods. His brain...

Sargon knelt watching the pods. His brain calculating their trajectory and working out where they would land. He stood, aimed his lascannon and fired. He didn't have any hope of hitting the thing....
Forum: Roleplay Threads   02-02-10, 03:49 PM
Replies: 66
Views: 3,279
Posted By toffster
[[twice the hieght of the terminators]] ...

[[twice the hieght of the terminators]]

Timan rushed away from the beast as the terminators charged. They were insanely dwarfed by the strange thing, no one stood a chance here so they began to...
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