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Forum: 40k Fluff   02-20-16, 01:25 AM
Replies: 146
Views: 23,997
Posted By Beaviz81
Who hired you to be a MOD? I just wonders.

Who hired you to be a MOD? I just wonders.
Forum: Original Works   02-16-16, 10:21 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 3,326
Posted By Beaviz81
Any reason for you to poffer advice for me? I...

Any reason for you to poffer advice for me? I mean I gave advice, I didn't indicate I neeeded.
Forum: Original Works   01-18-16, 07:21 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,243
Posted By Beaviz81
While Ionza went to tell two parents their son...

While Ionza went to tell two parents their son had died Carrus and Ivanovic traveled through the palace as the hallways went towards the elevator who soon shot up containing them as they discussed...
Forum: 40k Fluff   12-22-15, 10:18 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,355
Posted By Beaviz81
Just wondering, are you a neo-nazi?

Just wondering, are you a neo-nazi?
Forum: Original Works   08-12-15, 03:09 AM
Replies: 43
Views: 5,622
Posted By Beaviz81
Ain't there a guy named Bjorn Bearstruck or...

Ain't there a guy named Bjorn Bearstruck or something? Even so I think they are very different characters. And he is under Dogs of War not Chaos.
Forum: Original Works   08-09-15, 06:10 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,243
Posted By Beaviz81
Carrus entered with the robed Grey Knight...

Carrus entered with the robed Grey Knight Librarian in tow. The first thing he did was grabbing the rust-colored robe of a passing Tech Priest as he pointed to the door saying as he spat out the...
Forum: Original Works   08-06-15, 11:40 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 5,622
Posted By Beaviz81
You talked to me about the end in the PM. I hope...

You talked to me about the end in the PM. I hope this is not it as it seems a bit hollow for an end. I haven't commented as I haven't found anything I could do to improve your story.
Forum: Original Works   07-16-15, 01:37 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,243
Posted By Beaviz81
Eventually the Valkyrie reached back to Califrona...

Eventually the Valkyrie reached back to Califrona the capital of Ciralix. Carrus was the first off closely followed by Lucius and Ivanovic as he barked out. "Commissar Ionza, you are in charge of...
Forum: Original Works   07-16-15, 01:35 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,243
Posted By Beaviz81
As they waited for the Valkyrie Ionza still took...

As they waited for the Valkyrie Ionza still took the time to shoot down a few Genestealers, but it was a drop in a very large ocean as she knew about the calamity as she calmly said to the girl. "You...
Forum: Original Works   06-26-15, 05:29 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,243
Posted By Beaviz81
A few days passed as the genocide led by Ionza...

A few days passed as the genocide led by Ionza continued on Ciralix in the name of the Inquisition. A civil war had broken out due to the heavy-handed methods of the young commissar. But still she...
Forum: Original Works   06-25-15, 01:59 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,243
Posted By Beaviz81
Thank you. Yeah Fiona and Varus had epic deaths...

Thank you. Yeah Fiona and Varus had epic deaths on the hand of their relative with shots to their hearts dying like Imperial officers.

The Blank kickstarts the story as things change, suddenly...
Forum: Original Works   06-06-15, 08:38 AM
Replies: 98
Views: 11,764
Posted By Beaviz81
Now the Sisters of Battle sounds like Sisters of...

Now the Sisters of Battle sounds like Sisters of Battle. I love that.
Forum: Original Works   06-01-15, 04:22 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,139
Posted By Beaviz81
Tyranids mutate should be the short answer. They...

Tyranids mutate should be the short answer. They also like devouring stuff, and I like this fluff thus far.
Forum: Original Works   05-25-15, 09:19 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,243
Posted By Beaviz81
As Carrus stood there smoking his lho-rod...

As Carrus stood there smoking his lho-rod pondering what to do with his family-members that had seen Ivanovic a guard clad as a Karskin came over and saluted him as he said. "Commissar, the psyker...
Forum: Original Works   05-25-15, 09:00 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,243
Posted By Beaviz81
While his planet burned Carrus went through the...

While his planet burned Carrus went through the gardens where his guards were teaching his young family-members how to shoot. He smiled smugly as he thread forth through what had once been a fine...
Forum: Original Works   05-20-15, 02:16 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,001
Posted By Beaviz81
Another fascinating chapter. Glad you followed...

Another fascinating chapter. Glad you followed my advice at least. I like how you bold everything the Space Marine say just to demonstrate that he has like a booming voice.
Forum: Original Works   05-15-15, 09:29 AM
Replies: 43
Views: 5,622
Posted By Beaviz81
The archers might be a tad worried about...

The archers might be a tad worried about cheering, as they in my mind are finely trained professionals like you described doesn't do that unless the enemy turn tail and run. Sorry if harsh there. ...
Forum: Original Works   05-15-15, 09:23 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,001
Posted By Beaviz81
A description of the killer would be nice, but...

A description of the killer would be nice, but that might just as well ruin the story.

You can however post a few chapters together.
Forum: Original Works   05-13-15, 10:33 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,243
Posted By Beaviz81
Ionza soon found her hefting her longlas as she...

Ionza soon found her hefting her longlas as she walked through the hallways to the infirmary where Elmenhorst was holed up. The health had finally failed the old nun as Ionza noted that anytime a...
Forum: Original Works   05-13-15, 10:33 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,243
Posted By Beaviz81
For Carrus and Ionza the following weeks went...

For Carrus and Ionza the following weeks went down in relative peace unlike what the rest of their warlike lives had provided for them. The jungles of Freudakia was far off with its jungle-patrols...
Forum: Original Works   05-13-15, 09:44 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 5,622
Posted By Beaviz81
No offense to the New Word, but I like this story...

No offense to the New Word, but I like this story better. But I'm a Norwegian and you writing really twisted and evil versions of vikings resounds deep in me.
Forum: Original Works   05-13-15, 08:35 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 5,696
Posted By Beaviz81
This is really nice work. Carry on.

This is really nice work. Carry on.
Forum: Original Works   05-13-15, 05:57 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,243
Posted By Beaviz81
Pogroms is violent persecution of an ethnic or...

Pogroms is violent persecution of an ethnic or religious group. So very nasty stuff indeed.

And thank you for the kind words. :)

I shall try to exercise verbal pogroms on my SPAG.
Forum: Original Works   05-13-15, 12:25 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 5,622
Posted By Beaviz81
This is really fun to read. I love the Norsemen....

This is really fun to read. I love the Norsemen. I get some sort of thrill of this resembling a real evil cast of the Vikings. Dice-throw six.
Forum: Original Works   05-13-15, 11:16 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,243
Posted By Beaviz81
Smoking both commissars entered the glass-doors...

Smoking both commissars entered the glass-doors to the party inside. The were followed by Elmenhorst and Smirnoff with the members of the Carrus-family trailing behind exchanging worried looks over...
Forum: Original Works   05-13-15, 09:58 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,243
Posted By Beaviz81
As Carrus, Ionza, Elmenhorst and Smirnoff walked...

As Carrus, Ionza, Elmenhorst and Smirnoff walked through the shuttleport they saw more Skitarii standing guard with other servitors walking around doing menial stuff like dusting and watering plants...
Forum: Original Works   05-13-15, 09:56 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,243
Posted By Beaviz81
Carrus made his way over to Elmenhorst again, his...

Carrus made his way over to Elmenhorst again, his facial expression was not one of pleasure as he said. "Who had the idea Mistress?" Elmenhorst coffed out her answer. "Your uncle Petrus Carrus...
Forum: Original Works   05-13-15, 09:55 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,243
Posted By Beaviz81
The Emperor's Blood Chapter V

The continuation of the Emperor's Blood Chapter IV https://www.heresy-online.net/forums/showthread.php?t=139473 as mentioned I split up the story.

Chapter V.

The yacht dropped from orbit...
Forum: Original Works   05-12-15, 11:44 PM
Replies: 98
Views: 11,764
Posted By Beaviz81
I haved skimmed through it. Its high-quality. ...

I haved skimmed through it. Its high-quality. So nice doing Myen'Tal. :)
Forum: Original Works   05-12-15, 11:30 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,133
Posted By Beaviz81
More, will be coming up shortly, just need to...

More, will be coming up shortly, just need to edit it.

EDIT: Opps I lied, I have a new chapter ready here https://www.heresy-online.net/forums/showthread.php?t=139473
Forum: 40k Fluff   04-24-15, 02:32 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,470
Posted By Beaviz81
Andy Horace and the lot writing Death Watch 2010.

Andy Horace and the lot writing Death Watch 2010.
Forum: 40k Fluff   12-27-14, 11:07 PM
Replies: 41
Views: 5,516
Posted By Beaviz81
I'm jumping through hoops here, but maybe Chaos...

I'm jumping through hoops here, but maybe Chaos twisted his mind, maybe he was guaranteed not to turn into something like that, maybe he did it for candy, and you are wrong, things you dislike as a...
Forum: 40k Fluff   12-27-14, 09:48 PM
Replies: 41
Views: 5,516
Posted By Beaviz81
Maybe his position of opinion changed, that's my...

Maybe his position of opinion changed, that's my bet in this matter. Plus he is basically the evil counterpart of Rogal Dorn from the get go. I mean Dorn is likely to have chided his legion for not...
Forum: 40k Fluff   12-27-14, 08:43 PM
Replies: 44
Views: 16,928
Posted By Beaviz81
I personally think they don't go for sex normally...

I personally think they don't go for sex normally in any form, but then again you have Ciaphas Cain. And even though I personally disregard his testimony about one having a sexual liason with the...
Forum: 40k Fluff   12-27-14, 06:21 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 5,116
Posted By Beaviz81
You tell people how to think and feel, and that...

You tell people how to think and feel, and that fact alone means you are totally untrustworthy. Plus you seem to evict facts that doesn't suit you. Another thing is the fact that you come from the...
Forum: 40k Fluff   12-27-14, 02:49 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 5,116
Posted By Beaviz81
Read it yourself before trusting that guy about...

Read it yourself before trusting that guy about anything.
Forum: 40k Fluff   12-22-14, 10:25 PM
Replies: 41
Views: 5,516
Posted By Beaviz81
When it comes to those implications I think some...

When it comes to those implications I think some might have stayed loyal initially, but Chaos is the corruption. You just can't fight the corruption by becoming corrupt. There are a few novels...
Forum: 40k Fluff   12-22-14, 03:45 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 599
Posted By Beaviz81
Lone Wolf written by Abnett and a Richardson-dude...

Lone Wolf written by Abnett and a Richardson-dude was interesting. I especially liked how the Space Wolves tip-toed around God-Emperor with the Valhallans. I also want to see more of Kal Jericho...
Forum: 40k Fluff   12-21-14, 11:40 PM
Replies: 41
Views: 5,516
Posted By Beaviz81
The decimation was Pertubo's first step towards...

The decimation was Pertubo's first step towards evil or in this case Chaos, and the fact that he was willing to kill one in every ten Astartes showed how brutal and uncompromising Perturbo were. And...
Forum: 40k Fluff   12-21-14, 08:09 AM
Replies: 41
Views: 5,516
Posted By Beaviz81
They might have kept traitors in the SM at first...

They might have kept traitors in the SM at first after the HH, but yeah eventually they would not be present as their geneseed likely would be seen as corrupted by the AdMech and High Lords.
Forum: 40k Fluff   12-21-14, 12:42 AM
Replies: 41
Views: 5,516
Posted By Beaviz81
Unfortunately 12.000 years mires the Space...

Unfortunately 12.000 years mires the Space Marine-chapter in its tactics and vulnerabilities. Thats what the current fluff is all about for the Space Marines. They all have differentiating strength...
Forum: 40k Fluff   12-20-14, 03:34 PM
Replies: 41
Views: 5,516
Posted By Beaviz81
Where did you find this? Can you link the whole...

Where did you find this? Can you link the whole thingy to me in private?
Forum: 40k Fluff   12-19-14, 12:49 AM
Replies: 38
Views: 5,434
Posted By Beaviz81
Would be sort of funny if you had Eddie Murphy...

Would be sort of funny if you had Eddie Murphy playing every role in different sorts of suits. :)

Both it and he has done it before.
Forum: Homebrew 40k Fluff   12-18-14, 02:40 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,082
Posted By Beaviz81
I hope I was not too bad in how I commented. ...

I hope I was not too bad in how I commented.

And I look forward reading your fluff about the heroes and leaders of your Iron Warriors. After all I want to see how the arch-enemy of the chapter...
Forum: Homebrew 40k Fluff   12-18-14, 11:26 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,082
Posted By Beaviz81
Spelling, punctuation and grammar. Mostly the...

Spelling, punctuation and grammar. Mostly the punctuation-bit, but I have no doubt you would sort it out.

I didn't know it was a longer write. Makes sense to post it like this. You should maybe...
Forum: Homebrew 40k Fluff   12-18-14, 10:48 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,082
Posted By Beaviz81
Except the occasional SPAG (especially in the...

Except the occasional SPAG (especially in the beginning) this seems good. You are stuck in WH30k.? I mean you haven't written anything present so I assume thats the way.
Forum: 40k Fluff   12-18-14, 10:39 AM
Replies: 41
Views: 5,516
Posted By Beaviz81
Ah, yeah I thought I read that they preferred...

Ah, yeah I thought I read that they preferred their geneseed, but also that they hated the IF above all else for their rivalry.
Forum: 40k Fluff   12-18-14, 07:49 AM
Replies: 41
Views: 5,516
Posted By Beaviz81
Indeed, very few maybe none other Space Marine...

Indeed, very few maybe none other Space Marine former legion has an evil counterpart as much as the IF with their level of similarity. Actually the worse IF are a lot like the IW. And I believe...
Forum: 40k Fluff   12-17-14, 10:28 PM
Replies: 41
Views: 5,516
Posted By Beaviz81
I always regarded the MM as the negative spillout...

I always regarded the MM as the negative spillout of either the Imperial Fists (they use their tactics) or the Ultramarines (they have their arrogance). But that's me. Any theories are valid, as...
Forum: 40k Fluff   12-16-14, 10:04 PM
Replies: 41
Views: 5,516
Posted By Beaviz81
Your opinion is quite valid for me, and I was...

Your opinion is quite valid for me, and I was always under the impression that 20-30% of the traitor legions stayed loyal with the exception of the Word Bearers.
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