Thank you for the imformation and yeah I did sort of make this on the fly let me change it quickly
Might I recommend giving the Recruitment Thread Template
and GM's and Player's
stickies a read through. I think they could be a great help to you.
my first time so take it easy but still up for criticism my character will joining you on the mission as a blank in case under eichandwald
Take a breath, this is the first sentence and it already feels like your jumping all over the place.
The mission we are going to do is a infiltration and potentially purge of a suspected chaos world under the order of the inquisition
Perhaps a bit more here? Why is the world suspected to be a chaos world (and what does that even mean?) Is this a world of the Imperium and the planetary governor/members of the ruling elite/head guild/etc is suspected of consorting with chaos and we are investigating to determine the validity of this suspicion?
We were recruited as training by a young inquisitor named eichandwald
This sentence honestly makes no sense.
My oc he's name is turala Wentworth he is a omega level blank and carries a chain sword a laz pistol he has both arms being robotic and is very much a prick he has short cut brown curly hair brown eyes and a scar going up his lip from his chin he was olso from a noble family before being taken by the inquisition
Whenever it comes to GM characters who will be more prominent NPC's my advice is always less, within reason, is better. Create a character sheet for your character, especially focusing on personality, appearance, and background, but do not put it up with everyone else. By keeping that sheet to yourself, you are able to make changes if needed and you can pick and choose when/if others know about certain traits.
character must be accepted by me before we can start( just message me them)
This kind of goes without saying
in fighting between characters is not allowed
Why not? At times this may be part of character interaction, because not every character will or can get along perfectly. I ran an RP years ago where the characters were a pack of Space Wolf blood claws and a central focus in the story was internal conflict due to choices some characters made.
up to 6 players at least for this(me included so that's five extra ocs)
As the GM any character you control is an NPC and would not count towards character count.
Limitations on ocs being few but important rules: no chaos or xenos no knights or titans as well and no alien tech for characters unless explained in the oc and not some overpowered warp stuff unless your character can handle it without ripping a new universal asshole on your self like an imperial guard using malcadors powers without training
Perhaps include a character sheet template? This way you can include sections you require filled out and any limitations on things like weapons.