Your battle damage is really excellent.
It's cheeky to ask, but I think that it would be really awesome of you to make a tutorial, if possible.
I also like the pointing power fist; is it a conversion or a part you found?
I agree with much that has been said; I like your colour scheme. It's both simple and affective - two great qualities. Your rhino is fantastic, and your dread' is even better. I am not personally keen on the Sanguinary guard in white, but at least it's original (or at least the only actual white model I have seen so far).
All of this has happened before.