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Something i was mucking about with on my laptop during my latest bout of writer's block:

"Two shots in the dark ended the lives of three people.
Only one lived, the soul destroyed.
Two shots in the dark created a monster.
A monster born in darkness.
A monster born in suffering, and pain.
Full of rage and hate.
Tempered by love and compassion.
Then the monster became a knight.
Clad in armour and wings.
Riding a roaring iron steed.
A knight in shadow.
A symbol of hope for a ruined city.
A beacon of light.
The knight became a hero, and sacrificed himself.
But the hero will rise again.
The bat will return.
The Dark Knight Rises..."

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sounds cool, and i'm moving it to Original Works. lol it should go there, since you wrote it.

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Interesting little bit. When, exactly, will this knight return? I await another tale.

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