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post #11 of 13 (permalink) Old 04-12-11, 07:48 PM
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Didn't read any of the chapters yet, only prologue, but it is certainly nice
Yet the prologue is rather confusing, can't see Thorn raising a family I'm sorry XD

Edit: Seriously, I really can't see Thorn raising a family XD
I had to edit the post just to express how it doesn't sound right XD

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Gah! I wasn't sure about putting Squad Ares in as, well, you guys did make them and I wasn't sure if you wanted me to sorta "steal" them for this, but also if you remember they were a newly created squad before the RP: strung together from various other units across the Fifth company. So I guess I could slip a couple of you in, if you wanted... Ares would be more likely as he's still a sergeant beforehand anyway.
Just credit the OC`s to their creators. I did that with Shadow, remember?

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Didn't read any of the chapters yet, only prologue, but it is certainly nice
Yet the prologue is rather confusing, can't see Thorn raising a family I'm sorry XD

Edit: Seriously, I really can't see Thorn raising a family XD
I had to edit the post just to express how it doesn't sound right XD
Maybe you should... read the rest?


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Yes, yes, perhaps I could Serp. Maybe.

Oh komanko, Thorn was never mentioned in the Prologue!

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