One thing, is the spelling in the fluff meant to be from the Ork warboss? Because it isn't exactly fantastic. No offense but please go through it with a spell checker, you have many simple mistakes such as not putting a space after a full stop. Like so.
Good ideas so far, keep it up. I like ''Gettt Innn forrm Boyzzz'', sounds pretty interesting.
"To the darkness I bring fire, to the ignorant I bring faith. Those who welcome these gifts may live, but I shall vist naught but death and eternal damnation on those who refuse them"