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Default Cognitive Gaps Regarding the Tau Xenos.

The process of tactical efficiency
Begins with the profound acknowledgement
That from malleability all
Strategy flows.

The sun crested a mountain range, revealing a small complex, the dull grey of the infrastructure reflecting little of the morning light. The sloping, ovoid shapes gave the impression of shells, each having several windows facing a center avenue with few turns. Some of the buildings were multi-leveled. Around this facility ran a wire fence, gleaming with traces of dew dripping from the barbs along the top. The fence stopped at a barred gate, where a solitary figure waited, occasionally glancing at the chrono-piece in his left bracer, noting that the exercise would soon begin. He was not tall, stout for one of his bearing, and more prone to hard labor than his peers. It was also noted that he was considerably wider than his associates. The planar segments of his large left shoulder pad gleamed a dull red with the morning, along with the rest of his armor, which consisted of a chest piece, a smaller shoulder pad on his right, and segmented leg plates with greaves. In the center of the left pad was a black-on-white symbol, somewhat resembling a beetle with a circular head, with a white line bisecting the center and accenting the ďheadĒ. His helmet picked up the sounds of the morning, the artificial intelligence inside comparing the sounds to detect anomalies in his surroundings.

He checked his equipment: grenades, carbine with a shoulder strap, pistol, a few extra clips of ammunition. The short amount of time his people spent training revolved primarily around the firing ranges and exercises like this one, where close combat is considered suitable ground for failure. Either one made do with this equipment, or one could not pass this test.

A small beep from his wrist told him he had a few seconds before the training exercise began. He took the carbine to his right shoulder, quickly locked a clip in place, and primed the rounds. A mini-map appeared in a corner of his vision, with an arrow showing his facing, and his immediate surroundings.

A low-pitched gong rang at the top of the fence.

It swung in, and the warrior sprinted in, his hooves kicking up residual dust.
As he ran forward, he noted that the buildings were shifted from previous trials; there was no building on his left. He immediately slid beneath the window of the first building on his right, and peered in. A loud bang from primitive firearms was the only warning he got before the glass shattered above him, but no shards got through his armor, nor the protective cloth beneath it. He ducked, and considered what he saw: large targets, with quarter-moon shoulder pads, indicative of the elite forces of the unenlightened humans. Their technology was known to the Empire, and the flash grenade at his belt, with a magnesium center, would blind them for a short time; their visors unfortunately compensated quickly for their technological level. With suppressive fire coming in bursts, he inched himself towards the street a little, priming the grenade. At the conclusion of a burst, he flung it just inside the walls, and moved back to the wall.
A few seconds passed, and the telltale explosion of the grenade told him it was time.

His visor, already calibrated for the flare, showed him two enormous targets, both fully two meters tall. He fired at the one in front of him on full auto, making sure his left shoulder was pointed towards the other figure to give him cover. The energy bolts ripped through the helmet of the first target, and it slumped to the ground. His shoulder took hits from the other, the impact deadening the feeling in his left arm. He ducked, slung the carbine behind him, and pulled out his pistol. He then moved to the left of his previous position, stood, and fired the pistol, the three-round burst taking the target at the neck. The last round of the target, however, hit his left arm between his bracer and shoulder, the shock of the round forcing it to fall useless. He cursed, and had to carefully reload both of his weapons before moving down the street.

As he traveled down the road to its first intersection, he stayed close to the first buildingís windows, noting the advantages high angles would give at the end of the street. He moved in a semi-crouch, with the carbine slung over his left shoulder, the right trying to maintain a smooth transition to a firing stance when he would need it. The next building, substantially smaller than the one he was by, at least in width, was two stories tall. The smooth architecture, reminiscent of his culture, was a small comfort to the fact that he had to finish the trial with a handicap in favor of his enemies.

A shot rang down at him, grazing his helmet.

He dropped down to get a greater area of protection by his shoulder shield. He then attempted to acquire the target, but he couldnít see anything on the top of the building ahead of him.

If I stay here, Iím done. Yet, I could run down the street, attempt to suppress the sniper with blind fire, shoot my way into the first level, and gain cover by jumping into the building. Yet, if I canít see the second story, I can easily miss the whole thing and take fire anyway. I will have to advance with my head exposed.

His summation only lasted a couple of seconds.

He ran, firing at the roof of the building as best he could. With no fire returning, as he got beneath what he believed was the sniperís arc of fire, he switched to the windows, firing into them as he crashed blindly into the first floor.

He rolled when he hit the floor, sweeping the room for targets as soon as he got to his hooves. With no targets appearing, he drew his pistol once more, and moved around vending counters towards the stairs that would lead to the roof, his approach keeping him concealed except for his head. As he neared the stairs, he considered the silence of the opposition: No return fire, no noise. He knows Iím down here, probably also knows that Iím near the staircase. As a sniper, the stairway is probably rigged with a trap, and he must be watching the exit to the roof. Or, heís moved down a floor and plans to get me there as I move up. Iím at too much a disadvantage here.
He fully crouched, placed his pistol on the floor, and checked his equipment again, only finding two more grenades, and a couple more clips of ammo for his weapons. He then checked his special hiding place: an extra fold of cloth above his right thigh armor for special occasions. The detachable pouch contained just enough explosives to possibly level the building. Given his understanding of demolitions, he placed small amounts of the substance at the support beams on the first floor, taking extra time to help keep his movements silent while kneading the dull grey matter with one hand into smaller discs. At the last placement, he inserted a small cylinder, which would set the detonation off after pushing a pressure point beneath his still-useless left arm. My mini-map tells me that I should be able to see the next building through one of the side windows. If I can fire enough rounds from my pistol to get in cover, I can detonate the building with little chance for sustaining further injury.

With the final piece of the explosives set, he moved quickly through a door to another window. Sure enough, the next building was in view, and there was a convenient window for him to hurl himself through. He attempted to draw his pistol, only to find that he had left it back at the stairs! With no time to retrieve it, he pulled the carbine up from his left shoulder, and fired.

The glass predictably broke, and he vaulted the wall towards the next window, firing as he went. As he jumped towards the next window, however, a round hit him in the back, hitting his power pack and throwing him forward. He crashed into the window, his greater weight allowing him to break what was left of the glass. He rolled head-over-hooves into the room, and only when he slammed into a cooling unit did he remember the pressure switch. His right arm, sore from the impact, was damaged enough so that it barely could move. His heart racing, his mind speeding, he attempted to activate the switch with the edge of the knee cap plate on his right leg. After several attempts using the edge, he slammed his knee into his arm, and the pain was nothing compared to the deafening sound of the plastic explosives he had planted.

He found himself lying face-up on the floor, his senses returning.

I can barely move, my equipment is busted, and I still need to get to the end of this street to pass. Iíll try. But first, I need to get my dead helmet off.

Slowly and painfully, the Fire Warrior got to his hooves, and used his right forearm to push his sloping helmet off. The forehead of the warrior was broad, and a slit down the center of it housed his olfactory senses. His grey skin was lighter than the darker blue of his eyes, which followed the familiar biological pattern for sight. His cheeks and jaw were well-pronounced. The only comparably small feature to him was his mouth. A braided brown topknot ran down to the middle of his back now, for it was stored in the back of his helmet for combat.

He took one step, his arms hanging down to his sides, the right feeling bruised, the left feeling worse, yet the fact that feeling had occurred there left him hopeful of being able to use it. The carbine, half of its clip spent, swung with him on his left shoulder still. He walked to the front of the building, turned to his left, and, a few buildings down the road, stood the exit gate. Unfit for any further firefights, the Fire Warrior ran, his arms and weapon trailing after him. That gate meant free time, fermented drinks, and the nearby beach that was exclusive to those that passed this trial.

He gained momentum, passing the first building. Fire exploded from above him. Whether it was from the third or fourth floor, he knew not. If his legs were to get hit, it was over. The adrenaline gave him enough feeling in his left arm to pull his smoke grenade, press the primer key, and toss it in his path. A heavy cloud quickly poured out of the grenade in all directions, and, as the ground floor of the building to his left opened fire on him, he ran even harder. His sense of distance became somewhat skewed, but by counting his steps he knew that he would run out of cover quickly, but the finish line would be straight ahead.

He pumped his aching arm, trying to move faster.

The smoke cleared.

Time slowed down for him, for on both sides were barricaded buildings, and the same figures as at the beginning of the trial fired upon him. There was only one possible way for him to make it with this much incoming fire. He gathered as much of his power into his legs as he could, and threw himself forward, his left hand stretching to reach the line.

He didnít hear the cacophonous noise that would mean his victory, he only felt the sting of stun pellets against his body.

Pulse it!


Thought I'd try my hand at writing some 40k fiction.

The Tau list I use was created by Stelek over at Yes The Truth Hurts. Check it out!
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Does sound nice, I must admit I haven't read it all yet. It hurts my eyes, although I like the introduction and the placement of the text at the top. Will read it all tomorrow when I'm not experiencing a mild dose of extremely painful headaches.

It's nice to see someone writing with Tau, it's normally based upon the Imperuim as people know so much more about it. To much of us are worried to venture out there and write about something we know little about, I must admit I am one of those people. I will, however consider writing a Tau novel after taking some inspiration from this idea.

I like the language you write in however I don't feel very secure with one of the lines I quickly read:
"yet the fact that feeling had occurred there left him hopeful of being able to use it."
Not sure what it is about it, but it seems to long to me. Otherwise from what I can currently see it looks quite good, I admire your courage to write about something less known than the Imperuim, I only wish there were more Tau books out there. If only the shelves weren't dominated by Space marine and Imperial Guard novels....


EDIT: Read the whole thing, looking very good. +rep

"To the darkness I bring fire, to the ignorant I bring faith. Those who welcome these gifts may live, but I shall vist naught but death and eternal damnation on those who refuse them"

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Holy cow, someone read that!

The night I posted that intro I did very little editing. Never written a story before, so I'll be happy to hear some constructive criticisms.

For that line you quoted, the stun rounds were supposed to deaden the nerves, so only after being able to experience pain there again could the character hope to use the arm. Whether or not it works, no idea.

I'm right there with you on a lack of fiction regarding the Tau. I've got a bunch of ideas bopping around, none of which conflict with the pathetic little fluff in the codex or that horrid Fire Warrior game.

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Remember the skulls of our brothers!
Frozen in glory before the Corpse Godís Palace!
One day we will return to claim the False Emperorís own skull,
And with it, stand before the Blood God and receive his greatest Blessing, War Eternal!

The stars formed a blanket of small lights around a small moon above an uninhabited planet, its dead and cratered surface giving the impression of an old skull. Nearby in the void, the background of stars began to move. Space began to fold upon itself in a thousand ways, creating what appeared to be a whirlpool in space. The center of the phenomenon began to take on a strange color, some shifting combination of reds and purples, with energy discharges resembling lightning originating within. The coruscating lightning became more and more violent, some of the emissions reaching the nearby moon, lashing out at its surface like a whip of pure malevolence. Then, even the lightning took on a rotating countenance, and a speeding object within the storm could be seen from within that hell of energy. It did not come out of the maelstrom of its own accord.

It was expelled.

As soon as the ship was fully flung from the whirlpool, the unnatural happenstance collapsed upon itself, the only evidence of its passing being the vessel itself, and the deep abrasions on the planetís surface. The ship was an enormous terror from the past, its ancient architecture defiled with a number of spiked spires beyond numerical understanding. The ship was painted a deep red, and one might only see that by closely inspecting the oldest parts of the stern, for the rest of the ship was gloriously crisscrossed with battle scars. The various cannons and defensive weapons were worn with long use, their services seeing this battle barge through its long life.

The bridge of the ship was bathed in an eternal red light, the various corrupted serfs seeing to their instruments. Standing in the center of the room was a huge figure, well over two meters in height, and encased in such armor that he appeared impossible to harm. Thick plates covered every part of his body, with various battle scars and stars with eight points etched on his shoulders and knee pads. Two rows of trophy racks adorned his armorís large shoulders, extending to his back with the skulls of various worthy foes he had sent screaming into the next world. His own face was obscured within a helmet, the green eyes giving off little light. Two horns protruded from the helmetís forehead, a natural testament to his armorís battle spirit. Yet, instead of a grate to speak from, the helmet had grown a mouth of pointed teeth, and it was from such a hellish visage that the only voice on the bridge came from, bass and commanding.

ďEither one of the serfs here tell me where we are, or all of you will be sacrificed within the deepest bowels of this ship! I might even give you to that weak hermaphroditic deity our misguided brothers worship!Ē In his hand was an ancient and enormous sword colored like brass. Its hilt was long enough for two hands, and the pommel held a weighted spike. The guard was a large skull made from a particularly worthy Ork Warboss he had the pleasure of besting. At the touch of the activation rune on the grip it would become charged with energy, able to cut through nearly any armor. At this sight, the cultists worked harder, and only within a couple minutes did a response come.

The menial furthest to his left responded, ďM-my Lord Slaughterer Herteit, we have ended up in the eastern fringes of the galaxy. Scans show a nearby xeno civilization. The energy signature indicates that it might be the grey-skinned weaklings we have encountered a few times. The only other data we have is that they prefer ranged combat over close combat.Ē The bridge was silent once more, the imposing figure standing like a statue.

After several tense minutes for the bridge crew, he spoke, ďVery well. You may keep your skulls this day. Comms, signal our Skull Priest. I will want to know how we ended up here. Also, signal our brother slaughterers. We may have been thrown through the Warp to the edge of the galaxy, but we will stay in practice by invading the nearest world that belongs to these aliens. Once the rites are observed and we sacrifice these puny beings, we will rip our way back to the Planet of Sorcerers and kill the Sons of Magnus to the last! I will add the coward who sent us here to my collection of skulls, maybe even give him a place of eminence for inconveniencing me!Ē His green visor-eyes squinted at the thought, and his mouth formed a terrifying smile. His laugh chilled the blood to hear, yet also enflamed the desire to rip another limb from limb.

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