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K people so new to the whole story writing thing thought I'd give it a stab what do you think.

The Emperor Reborn

The Guardsmen surveyed the Battle Field with Awe “one Man can’t have killed all those Greenskins and then killed Warboss Az’Ruk aswell, its just not possible...its just not…only the…no…no” he seemed to be assuring him self then stood up from examining the dead warboss.
“Its nothing Corporal I’m a fool for even thinking it”
“Searg over hear!!!” The sergeant walked over to the Private still pondering “how… and all by blade hand to hand…how”. The Sergeant approached the Private who seemed some what scared.
“What is it Private”
“Over there sir”
“I can’t see anything” “other than lots of dead Orks” he thought.
“He’s there sir”
“Who… Oh just give me those Binoculars boy!” as the sergeant snatched the Binoculars from the Private, making him jump “s the bloody problem with newbie’s always so bloody jumpie”. As the sergeant looked through the binoculars he seemed to freeze.
“Get me the Vox Boy… quickly now!!!” then he looked again.
“The Vox Sir” The sergeant took the Vox and almost yelled into the mike
“This is Sergeant Arus speaking, get me Colonel Heize”
“Yes Sir” came the hurried voice.
“Colonel Heize speaking what’s the problem sergeant”
“We’re checking out area sector C, there’s tons of dead greenskins sir, and Az’Ruk is dead to”. The colonel gave a sigh of relief.
“And the rest”
“the rest sir?”
“Yes the rest of the Orks sergeant” the colonel replied impatiently
“Well they’re gone sir… retreated is my guess”
“So whats the problem?”
“Well there’s someone… something big… huge out there”
“how huge?”
“… my first thoughts were…”
“dammit sergeant what?”
“… the size of a Primarch….”

To be continued...

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WOOT! Liked a lot there ;) Seems someone decided to bring someone else back from the grave ;)
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Yeah Your Horus idea certainly got me thinking.

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Well here's part 2

Part 2
The line went dead
“Sir… colonel Heize sir!!!”
“Its no good searg the lines dead”
“Gather the squad tell them to prepare for a fight”
“searg… are you sure?”
“Yes boy I’m sure… we don’t know this… thing as friend or foe and vice versa”
“But sir he killed all these green skins and a Warboss”
“Regardless we shall fight him if he attacks… now go assemble the squad”
“Deale… where is that confounded corporal!!!”
“Here sir” a tall skinny man saluted the Sergeant and the Sergeant saluted back.
“I need you to go find Lieutenant Cezar tell him to bring the Platoon”
“What should I tell him searg”
“tell him we have a problem… a big Problem”
“yes Sir!!!” and with that the corporal sprinted off.
“Sir?” The sergeant turned round and looked at the squad assembled.
“Ok men there is something out there and we shall have to approach it”
“I want five men to stay back and keep a look out”
“Keys?” a Bulky man with a huge sniper rifle stepped forward.
“Yes Sir?”
“your in charge of these four men” he pointed to the to Lance corporals with the lascannon and to Privates armed with lasguns “should we be killed I want you to take no unnecessary risks… take cover and wait for the Lieutenant”
“Kreis, Felps… come with us but only provide cover fire”
“Akins” the private jumped at hearing him being address and hurriedly saluted.
“Bring the Vox and stick with me, you and I will take point” with that he drew his chainsword and Plasma pistol, and set of through the piles of dead orks. after about 5 minutes of walkingAkins stood still and spoke.
“what is it Akins” grunted the sergeant.
“what you said about the Primarch”.
“what about it”
“well is it possible?”
“I’m not sure boy” the sergeant grumbled impatiently
“But sir if it is a Primarch then we stand no chance”
The sergeant stopped, then turned around and grabbed the boy by the collar and the corporal gave a yelp of surprise.
“Do you have faith in the Emperor Boy!!!”
“Yes sir” cried Akins.
“and do you have faith in the imperium!!!”
“y..y..yes sir”
“Then do not fear death for the Emperor shall shield you from it”
The sergeant dropped the boy and started walking again the Private brushed himself of, picked up his lasgun and hurried on after the sergeant.
“you here that boy?”
“what searg?”
“you don’t hear it?”
“hear what sir?”
“he’s seen us”
“its strange I don’t feel scared but I should be” the private started spinning around wildly a strange mist had appeared without them noticing, but the sergeant could see him.
“over there boy” the private turned to where his sergeant pointed a shimmering/glowing light that seemed to hang in the air.
They walked towards it
“searg where are Kreis and Felps?” the sergeant spun round he hadn’t noticed they were gone.
“dammit get your weapon ready lad” the sergeant sheathed his chainsword and cocked his plasma pistol and they started to walk towards the light.
“Lower your weapon” said a voice which sounded familiar to the sergeant, with out a seconds thought he obeyed the command it was as if the voice had forced his mind to obey. The sergeant spoke
“I feel I know you and yet I don’t”
“You no who my Father is you do not know me” the voice sounded calm and complacent.
“your father”
“Yes my father”
“How the hell should I know who your father is”
“Because he is as much your father as mine”
the sergeant paused and considered and then said,“show yourself so that I know who I’m bloody talking to”
“fine” the mist began to lift the sergeant focused on the spot where the shimmering light had been and as the mist lifted his mouth dropped open in awe, because before him was something, someone Far greater than a Primarch.
“It…it…it is Impossible…how” exclaimed the sergeant.

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I like it, though I think "searg" should be "Sarge" Just a thought as that is what I'm used to <.<;
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Originally Posted by Andros View Post
I like it, though I think "searg" should be "Sarge" Just a thought as that is what I'm used to <.<;

thanks I'll try it depends on if I can get used to typing it.

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Some really good ideas here I like it!
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I take full credit for giving him the idea

( :fuck: it was copyright and you know it)
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Next Part Here for you

Part 3
Lieutenant Cezar sat in the back of the Chimera talking to Deale “but did you see anything… what did the sergeant say”
“I heard him on the Vox he said… he said” and then he stopped he looked like he was doing some serious thinking.
“What corporal… what did he say?”
“he said he’d… he’d seen a Primarch…”
“it was the Lieutenants turn to do some thinking”
“Then what happened?”
“The line went dead Sir”
“just like that” the Lieutenant muttered to himself.
“Pass me the Vox”
“Yes sir”
“I need to speak to Inquisitor Lord Malec” said the Lieutenant into the mike.
“Yes Lieutenant Sir”
“What is it Lieutenant?” came the Impatient voice of inquisitor Lord Malec
“we have a Problem in Sector C your assistance is required urgently sir”
“and can you tell me what the Problem is Lieutenant”
“a Primarch sir”
“I’ll get there do not attack I repeat do not attack unless necessary”
“Yes sir”
The chimera stopped “Sir we’re here” said one of the crew. The lieutenant picked up a glistening Power sword and walked down the access ramp with Deale following close behind. The Lieutenant stood still for a moment he looked at the other Chimera as the squad emerged with Commissar Ulsar, he studied the Huge Power fist and the glittering sword and then looked at his own Battered, bruised and Battle hardened Power sword and laughed to himself thinking “its amazing how I’d rather have my sword”.
“Lieutenant over there!!!”
The Lieutenant turned to where the Commissar pointed and saw 5 men. 2 as a lascannon team, 1 Bulky man with a Sniper Rifle who he recognised immediately as Keys, and two Privates. He walked over to them and addressed Keys.
“Keys where is Sergeant Arus?”
Keys pointed at the mist about half a mile away as the Lieutenant looked he noticed 2 men with guns pointing into the mist.
“should go after him sir” asked Deale
“No… no we have our orders”
“but sir our sergeant is in there if we don’t do something…”
The lieutenant considered it and then said
“Commissar Ulsar take these 5 men and another Squad” he seemed to be going against his better judgement. The Commissar noticed he was wrestling with his thoughts.
“Don’t worry Cezar we’ll be fine the Emperor will Protect us” he said with confidence. The Lieutenant smiled and saluted the Commissar. And every other man saluted the commissar to he was respected throughout the Platoon and all would die for him as him for them. The Commissar Saluted back and went into the Mist.


But the Cadian 93rd had more problems far more than they knew for Orbiting the Planet of Salonika was a huge force with a Daemon Prince known as Belias and a Chaos Lord who was none other than the Infamous Lucius the Eternal. Belias Spoke to Lucius to anyone else it sounded like hissing.
"He is Here I can sense him such Power"
"yes Brother I sense him, too prepare the Noise Marines, we have Finally found A challenge and it has been Provided By the Imperium... Fulgrim was right."


Sergeant Arus and Private Akins stared and then remembering themselves lifted their weapons.
“You have no need of your weapons against me, I have no intention of Harming you”
“Who Are you?” said the Sergeant feeling that he should have already asked this question.
“an interesting question and I can only say that I am An Emperor”
“Oh its very Possible even the Primarchs knew this day would come even if they chose not to believe it”
“So what do you mean by an Emperor”
I am an incarnate of him in some senses I shall be the knew Host for his soul once they have Gathered”.
“The Primarchs”
“that’s not Possible we don’t anything about the living Primarchs”
“Two things Arus one they do not have to be Living two those living with Faith in the Imperium shall Return and the same for the Dead”.
“Prove it” said the sergeant suddenly
The Man Smiled “in what form would you like Proof my son?”
“If you are the… an Emperor then you have great Powers show me them”
“soon you shall see… very soon my son”.

To Be continued…

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decent when is part 4 coming
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