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okay, my first ever work of fiction! please be kind, the title says it all, i'm basing it around the mansion incident and if reception is good, when i finish i might even make a sequel!

The legals:
i DO NOT own resident evil, its characters or settings. Same for Warhammer 40K, i DO NOT own its characters, settings, vehicles, races ect.

these remain property of Capcom and GW respectively

right with that done on to the story:

Resident Evil 40K!

Prologue
The forest was silent…deathly silent. Trees stood all around. They were giants; tall as titans and wider than a Leman Russ. The forest was massive, extending further than the eye could see. A mouse scampered away in search of safety, as a high pitched whine of approaching engines smashed the serenity that once filled the peaceful forest. Thick, black smoke belched from the damaged engines of the injured Valkyrie, leaving a greasy trail behind it as it appeared over the horizon.

“May day! May Day! Valkyrie RAD-STARS-Bravo going down, some sort of engine trouble. Losing altitude, repeat RAD-STARS-Bravo is going down. Coordinates as fol…*static*”

The sound of angry rattling punctuated by the low thrumming of waning power were the only warnings the pilot had before engines finally gave up. With no power to keep it aloft, the Valkyrie crashed into the forest, crushing trees as if they were eggshells. With a sickening snap, the aft wing broke off and hit a tree; detonating the rocket pods anchored there. The resulting explosion flipped the Valkyrie end over end; sending it skidding to a halt 5km from the place it entered the forest.

The forest once again returned to silence after the sudden burst of action, and from the wreckage of the Valkyrie a stream of blood trickled out, limbs scattered around the crash site. Slowly something in the wreckage stirred.

It stumbled through the forest, drawn by the noise and the scent of blood. It was near, it was sure of it. And it was hungry, so very hungry.
End of chapter.

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Interest levels rising.
Do continue!

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lookin good so far mate if u want ideasfeel free to add me on messenger. PM me for my add
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might do that mate, cheers
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a treat for you, 2 chapters at the same time, god i need a life.

Chapter 1- Meet the Team
Christiphorus Redfieldens (called Chris by his few friends) sat in the briefing room Adeptus Arbites Building on the planet Raccoon III, a largely forested planet with only one major population centre- Raccoon Prime,

the only thing this planets good for is men, scouts that rival those of the Tanith first-and-only mused Chris. Scouts and boredom.

Chris was a Kasrkin, the best of what Cadia had to offer, he had personally fought all the evils the universe had to offer, from Orks on Armageddon to Tyranids at Fortress Carcasson. With a figure that inspired fear in many of his foes and an intellect far greater then a normal man, Chris was a marksman, with an aim that rivalled even the legendary Astartes. Chris and his unit were in great demand by every general between here and holy terra.

so what Chris wondered Am I doing here? On this forest planet in the arse-end of nowhere?

Chris’s thoughts were interrupted when a member of unit entered the room Jillianis Valentinias (known as Jill) the teams machine specialist, respected for her ability to pick virtually any lock they come across, she had also saved the lives of many of the team, a debt Chris had yet to repay.

“Hey Chris, any idea what’s this ops about?” Jill asked

“no flipping idea Jill, all I know is that we were re-directed to this arse of a planet instead of Kladimer, shame, I was looking forward to blasting some Tau” sighed Chris

“Well we’ll find out soon enough, captains on his way” Jill replied as she took a seat.

“Any idea where Barry is?” Chris asked

“Yeah, behind you!” said the giant of a man as he snuck up on the marksman, causing Chris to jump out of his seat and land on the floor with a bang

“Barry! I’ll get you for that” Chris grumbled back at his old friend, Barrius Burtonia, the team’s huge weapons specialist, responsible for supplying and maintaining the team’s weaponry.

“Settle down men, and woman,” snapped the teams leader, Alburtis Wesker, flanked by a weedy man dressed in a yellow combat vest, Bradacklese “chicken heart“ Vickers their Valkyrie pilot, and the teams vehicle specialist Joseph Frostilicus.

“Alright everyone take your seats, we’ve got a rescue mission on our hands” Wesker commanded.

All throughout the room everyone’s attention focused on the captain, they had a job to do.

Chapter 2- Rescue Mission!
“Alright men, we’ve been asked to track down a downed Arbites Valkyrie” The captain launched into his briefing immediately

“They were dispatched to this location a supposedly abandoned building, some sort of mansion by all accounts, to investigate rumours of strange creatures, even stranger noises and some bodies that have appeared recently.” The captain continued

“However it appears that they did not reach their destination and in fact their Valkyrie came down at these coordinates: AX18374 by PK96723. Hear is their last received message”

” May Day! May Day! Valkyrie RAD-STARS-Bravo going down, some sort of engine trouble. Losing altitude, repeat RAD-STARS-Bravo is going down. Coordinates as fol…*static*”

“As you can hear it appears that they had engine trouble close to their target area and failsafe didn’t activate. We are to follow their path in our own Valkyrie, rescue any survivors and retrieve the dead, and then proceed to complete their mission. Any question?”

“Yeah, sounds like a simple fly in and fly out mission, what am I missing?” queried Chris

“Yeah what’s the catch?” echoed Jill and Barry

“We don’t have an exact fix on their position, the trees make it difficult to land in and so we will have to put down in this clearing here, about 3km from their last recorded position and search by foot” The captain answered.

“If there are no other questions, the governor wants us on this ASAP, so get kitted up were moving out”

The team, sensing the briefing was over, stood up and proceeded to the armoury to get their kit
Great, a kraking hike to find some lost coppers, how fun Chris thought as he walked to the armoury.

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seems good but the names seem quite strange
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yeah, i didnt want to copy every facet of resident evil and tried to 40K the names up a bit, in this case trying to make them sound more latiny while keeping it so poeple knew who was who.
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Startin good mate, always like a slow start for the first part of the fiction. Keep up the good work

Thanks Proccor for the awsum sig

After 10 years of relentless shelling, the hive is reduced to naught but rubble and dust, two years after all signs of life ceased and five years after the hive issued its unconditional surrender.

I dont want to hear any more flashlight joke alright, there just guide lights for the artilery
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ta for the compliment Micklez, anywhos chapter 3 for your viewing ecstasy.

Chapter 3- Kitting up and moving out
Barry reached their mobile armoury first and went about unlocking the lockers, or at least he tried.

“What the krak!? Why isn’t the password working? Okay lets try this again, input password WFY35324, still not working?” Barry cursed and smacked the locker

“Problem Mr Burtonia?” Wesker enquired

“Yeah, kraking lockers aren’t accepting the password” Barry replied

“Ah yes, I changed the passwords, I saw someone sneaking around and decided not to take any chances, new password is MA-125” Wesker said.

With the lockers now open the Kasrkins started to collect their armour and weapons, putting on the heavy Carapace armour, Strapping on the power packs for their MK:VI Hellguns and Hellpistols checking each other’s armour to make sure it was connected properly. This done they started collecting their secondary weapons. Everyone carried a combat knife, three frag grenades, and three krak grenades. Chris picked up an autopistol from his personal locker, while Barry grabbed his Bolt Pistol. Jill put her lock decoder into her side pack, Joseph grabbed his combat shotgun and strapped it across his back, and Wesker put a sheaf of documents into his side pack.

“Kasrkins are you ready to move out!” Wesker roared at the squad

“Yes Sir! For the Emperor Sir!” the Kasrkins roared back

Excellent, now all remains is to get them there Wesker ominously cogitated.

With preparations complete the Kasrkins stampeded up the Valkyries boarding ramp, Wesker bringing up the rear slammed the button to close the ramp. The pistons came to life with a serpentine hiss, the inside slowly darkening leaving the only sources of light the power gauges on their armour and the blood red light in the roof, making the squad a fearsome sight.

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I'm thinkin its pretty good so far buddy. Keep it up yeah? a bit less flowery though maybe. For instance -Excellent, now all remains (should be remained) is to get tehre wesker ominously cogitated) should be a little less descriptive. its good though
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