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I'm splitting the thread I made for my Onyx Warriors fluff, and will put the serial here, so I can post the updates to the background in a separate thread and everything won't get all jumbled up. Shoulda done that in the first place...

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The thunderhawk shuddered, and Scout Sniper Vash of the Onyx Warriors tried to ignore the sick feeling in his stomach, partly from the constant up and down motion of the transport, and partially from the fact that this was his first combat drop in a thunderhawk. All of his other insertions had been via large landing barges, moving like titanic whales through the sky. Nevertheless, this would be a chance to further prove himself to his brothers, and if he performed admirably, then perhaps Scout Sergeant Castus would honor him with a promotion to battle brother. Vash gripped his sniper rifle tightly, and closed his eyes to try and dispel the airsickness he was feeling. Castus looked over at him and laughed.

“Not all it’s cracked up to be eh scout?”

“Sir…” Vash tilted his head back for a moment and swallowed. “No sir.”

Castus slapped him on the back playfully, causing Vash to fall forward onto his hands and knees and throw up all over the deck of the thunderhawk. The thunderhawk was dropping fast to avoid enemy anti-aircraft fire, and so the scouts were exposed to the full force of an orbital landing. Making matters worse was the fact that they were not strapped into crash seats; riding instead on long metal benches.

“Don’t worry scout, I did the same thing on my first drop.”

Vash wiped his mouth with his glove, still tasting bile, and looked up at his Sergeant.

“And how was the Great Crusade sir?” Vash said playfully. He and the other members of Squad Castus had learned long ago that the Onyx Warriors encouraged this sort of loose relationship amongst the enlisted ranks, believing it built camaraderie, as long as, at the end of the day, you still knew who your superior was.

Castus leaned over and swatted Vash on the back of the head with his bolt pistol. Even playfully, the blow still hurt dearly and Vash yelped like a whipped dog, rubbing his bruised head. Castus laughed again, and was sure the other members of the squad would have too, had they not been busy retching up a lung as well.

Castus stood and addressed the squad, looking the ones who had their heads up in the eye.

“All right, we’re landing in a little bit. Our target is a large refinery, which is currently being used by renegade Guardsmen to produce weapons and munitions. Intel says these guys turned traitor when a terrorist group, known as the ‘Black Hand’, attempted a hostile takeover of the planet. This factory not only produces weapons and munitions, but is also where the former PDF got its vehicles from, so it’s an extremely high priority target. Expect heavy resistance however. It’s got the STCs for the Basilisk Self Propelled Artillery, the Leman Russ Main Battle Tank, and the Chimera Armored Personnel Carrier.”

The squad whistled appreciatively, and Brother Scout Brock, their heavy weapons man, asked,

“Why are they sending 5 scouts instead of oh, say, a Landraider squadron?”

“Because we’re not there to kill it, we’re just there to distract them. And who better to send than 5 scouts with sniper rifles and a missile launcher?”
The squad murmured in agreement, and Castus cleared his throat, indicating a wish to continue.

“Now, we have a rhino on site to extract us if things get sticky, and if you get separated, the extraction point is here.” He said, motioning to a red dot on the tactical map.

“Also, a word of warning. Always keep in mind that these are men who have thrown their lot in with Chaos, so there is no telling what we may find. You would do well to remember what happened to Battle Sergeant Dumont at the Qweris VII disaster.”

The last major training exercise the Onyx Warriors had been on took place on the small planet Qweris VII, and had ended with a Sergeant becoming possessed by Chaos and killing his entire Tactical Squad. He claimed a further seven men from an assault squad before he was brought down by a razorback. The Inquisitorial investigation was still pending.

The other scouts began to murmur about traitors and daemons, but when Castus rose his hand there was silence. He produced an auspex from his cloak, and projected a map onto the floor, carefully avoiding the part Vash had thrown up onto.

“We will set up here,” he indicated the position on the map, and a red dot appeared. “On a ridge above the refinery, and wait for the main force. You are not to fire until I get permission Brother Captain Krish. Understood?”

“Sir yes sir!” The four of them yelled.

“Very good. Now, Vash, Nolan, Eurebus, and I will deploy on the ridge with the sniper rifles, and Brock will cover our rear with the missile launcher. Brock, you do not have permission to fire without my go ahead.”

“Sir yes sir.” Brock said, hefting his missile launcher. Brock carried a large satchel on his back, filled to the bursting with fragmentation and krak warheads.

The thunderhawk rumbled, and Castus gripped a bar on the ceiling tightly.

“We’re landing soon, and shall commence attack on the refinery immediately. Remember the plan, and we’ll be okay.”

White plumes of fire shot from the thunderhawk’s engines, and it came to a slow landing, skimming across the grass before stopping completely. The rear ramp dropped, and Castus waved the scouts forward. All of them wore full face helmets with rebreathers, similar to the ones used by the Kasrkin of the Imperial Guard, so that their breath wouldn’t be visible to onlookers. They advanced at a crouch slowly across the frozen plain, their sniper rifles raised, scanning the horizon. Vash looked up and saw that the black and crimson thunderhawk was already just a dot in the sky. Castus clenched his left hand into a fist above his head.

“Squad, go to prone positions now!” His voice roared over the vox like a landspeeder’s afterburners.

The scouts dropped to their stomachs and crawled across the landscape, weapons slung across their backs. The cameleoline cloaks worn by each man rippled in the light breeze. It was fall on this agri-world, but the fields of grain were frozen solid, tall white obelisks in the cold.

Agri-World 23-19 was a world gripped in fear. An uprising of a local chaos cult, the Black Hand, had pitched the entire world into anarchy. Bolstered by warp spawn and elements of the Lost and the Damned, the Black Hand had become extremely dangerous. They had quickly overrun the 23-19’s meager Planetary Defense Force, and those that hadn’t died immediately were now fighting amongst the ranks of the heretics, as traitors or worse. The Chaos forces had even gone so far as to send the entire planet deep into the embrace of winter. For most of the citizens of the agri-world, they had never even felt temperatures colder than 50 degrees Fahrenheit, much less seen snow thick enough that walkers quickly became the only practical mode of transportation. The planet’s governor had dispatched a call for help to the Ordo Malleus, and they had sent one of their best, Inquisitor Nathe Garrison. Garrison had contacted the Onyx Warriors chapter master, as the chapter had a history of working closely with the Inquisition, and asked him for help. The chapter master accepted of course. Despite the fact that they were not the Inquisition’s playthings, they would still honor a legitimate request for help. Castus also gathered elements of the 17th Cadian Division, who, with the unofficial moniker of “Arctic Shock Troopers”, would serve the Ordo Malleus well in this campaign.

Vash was shook from his thoughts when Brock tapped him on the shoulder. He realized that they had arrived at the refinery. Castus whispered their orders to each of them, crawling down the snowbank they were hiding behind and tapping each man on the shoulder.

“Vash, eliminate all sentries on my mark.” Vash nodded, removing his from its sling and pressing it into his shoulder. He ran the scope along the wall of the refinery, and silently counted the number of sentries.

“Excellent.” He muttered, after counting four. With his superhuman reflexes, the swivel bipod on his rifle, and the extended clip, this would be easy.

“Mark!” Castus whispered.

Vash nodded, and took stock of the first sentry, in a tower on the east refinery wall. He held his breath, and ever so gently pulled the trigger. The rifle hissed, and the sentry fell to the deckplate in a cloud of pink mist. He quickly repeated the action with the other three sentries, and smiled with satisfaction as the fourth man tumbled over the wall into a bloodstained snowbank.

“Nice job Scout. Now, they’re going to figure out what’s going on pretty soon, and from now until I tell you otherwise, you have my permission to fire at will. Brock, you are to fire frag missiles at tightly packed groups, and krak missiles at any sentry installation you may see.”

Apparently their enemies were a rather dumb bunch, because the dead sentries weren’t discovered until the guards changed shifts. And even then, it took them another twenty minutes to muster any sort of a counter-attack. When the gates to the refinery opened though, Vash’s jaw dropped and he sincerely hoped that he was seeing things. Eurebus was best able to it into words though.

“Oh throne, that’s a lot of guys.”

Castus stood and fired his bolt pistol at the group of enemies quickly approaching.

“Fire at will! Fire at will!”

The sniper rifles cracked, and a frag missile snaked from Brock’s launcher across the battlefield, detonating in a spectacular airburst above a squad of traitorous guardsmen. Shrapnel flew everywhere, shredding the fatigues and flak armor of everyone it touched. But, despite the best efforts of the squad, the heretics just kept coming. Vash sighted a sergeant, the aquilas on his armor crudely removed with a bayonet, enthusiastically directing the fire of a heavy bolter team, and lined his head up in the crosshairs. One quick squeeze of the trigger, and the man’s head popped like an overripe melon, spraying gore all over his squad. The guardsmen on the heavy bolter may have been ill-trained, but they weren’t stupid. They immediately turned the large gun towards Vash’s position and let loose a burst of 75 caliber shells. Vash dove behind a tree, and the bullet stream followed him, reducing the tree to kindling and spraying toothpicks everywhere. He took a krak grenade from his belt, and, being careful to keep a firm grip on the spoon, pulled the pin. He leapt to his feet and hurled the grenade right at the heavy bolter, diving for cover even as he heard the familiar KRAK-BOOM!!! of the grenade detonating. Castus reached over and pulled him out of he snow, muttering,

“Yer not a hero yet boy!”

Vash reached for his sniper rifle, and snapped it up to his shoulder. Looking around the battlefield for new targets, he saw a small man in flowing black robes carrying a twisted eight-pointed Star of Chaos forged from wrought iron. He lined the man’s head up and fired. This time, his head did not explode but instead literally detached from his shoulders. The daemonic sigil fell to the snow with a clang, and Vash grinned triumphantly.

He was so busy searching for another target that he didn’t hear the fallen guardsmen sneaking up behind him, and was only alerted to his presence when a lasgun shot deflected off of his carapace armor. He turned and drew his chainblade in one, fluid motion, raising his arm sharply to cut through the man’s flak armor. The guardsman grunted in surprise as the razor sharp teeth of Vash’s chainsword sliced through his belly, spraying blood everywhere. Steam hissed off of the snow as warm meat from the man’s recently eviscerated torso hit the ground with a sickening splatter. Vash flicked the roaring motor of his sword off, wiped the blade roughly on his fatigues, and sheathed it again. Picking up his rifle again, he returned to his deadly duty without so much as a second thought to what he had done.


The scouts continued their work for almost half an hour, before the swarms of the damned became so thick their high powered sniper rifles were barely making a dent in them. For every zombie or traitor that fell, three more seemed to take his place. Castus stood above the squad, the barrel of his pistol cherry red as he fired into the fray with reckless abandon. They explosive .75 caliber bolts ripped through the soft flesh of the enemy, exploding on impact and spraying gore everywhere. There was chatter all over the vox; it seemed the same thing was happening everywhere. The main marine force had been crushed by massive waves of the beasts, and most of the guardsmen they had brought along had either bolted or been corrupted in the face of such an enemy. The few guardsmen who were either iron willed enough to stay and fight, or happened to be near enough to a commissar that they dared not try anything were quickly being herded back to the landing zone, where it was said a massive evacuation effort was going on. However, just because the weaklings were retreating, that didn’t mean it was acceptable for his squad to go with them! Castus would stay and fight until Captain Deus ordered the chapter off planet. His bolt pistol roaring, he gritted his teeth and continued firing into the unending mob of the damned.


Captain Deus sighed, cradling his head in an armored hand. The battle was not going well. Already, the detachment which had been sent planetside, comprising elements of the Onyx Warriors 2nd, 5th, 10th, and 12th Companies, had taken heavy casualties. The devastator detachment from 5th company was at under half strength, and even then, the ones who still lived had lost many of their Razorbacks. That would require that a flight of thunderhawks be sent to retrieve them, if indeed retreat was deemed necessary. The 2nd company’s assault squads had been hit hard, but thanks to their veteran skill and the grace of the Emperor they had only lost a handful of their numbers.

“Captain!!! You should see this!” Sergeant Hapes yelled. He ran up the hill where the marine’s hastily established command center lay, and was waving a data-slate around as if he were holding a flag. He stopped in front of Deus, saluted quickly, and handed him the slate. It scanned the captain’s retina, and, after it had ascertained that he was allowed to see it’s contents, blinked to life. Deus read rapidly, soaking in the latest casualty reports from 12th company.

“Emperors teeth, six Landraiders!?!? How in Terra did we lose six bloody Landraiders?” Deus breathed.

Hapes stuttered. “Well sir, as you know, the heretics have captured a large munitions plant, and they produced an insane amount of Basilisk Artillery Pieces. It’s an amount that, prior to this, they only thought was possible to make in this amount of time on a Forge World. They must have a hell of a lot of men down there sir. And well, you’ve seen the damage one Basilisk can do. Now, take that damage amount and multiply it by…”

Hapes pulled another slate from his belt and checked some figures.

“Three hundred sir. They have three hundred basilisks pounding us on the western flank.” He said sheepishly.

“Oh, throne.” Deus whispered. “We’re in trouble.”



Castus popped a clip out of his bolt pistol and slammed a new one home. He was now on his second bandolier of ammo out of three, and was all out of frag grenades. Against his better judgement, he found himself hoping they would call a retreat soon, as his squad would soon run out of ammo for their sniper rifles, and then it was down to pistols and chainblades. They woundn’t last long against such a giant horde, even with their superior weapons and training. There were just too damn many them. Emptying his clip into the face of a guardsmen who was getting ideas with his bayonet, he almost didn’t hear the crackle of his vox-set.

“This is Captain Deus to all Onyx Warrior units. Our lines are in danger of being overrun, and I want all units to retreat to their assigned evacuation zones. Again, all Onyx Warriors units, this is a general retreat, proceed to your assigned evacuation zones.”

Castus swallowed, and drew his chainsword. This was about to get interesting.

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“Fall back!!!” yelled Scout Sergeant Castus, his bolt pistol roaring as it wrought holy justice upon the endless swarms of the Lost and the Damned that were swarming the small Space Marine Scout squad’s position. Castus swung his chainblade down, ripping through a traitor guardsmen’s neck and sending green slime gushing through the air. He dared not pause to contemplate why the man bled green instead of red now, as there were more of the freaks headed their way. The scouts on the ridge scrambled to pack up their sniper rifles, and ran back to their rhino. The last one in line, Brother Scout Brock, was swarmed by a pack of zombies before he could make it into the safety of the armored transport.

“Brock!” screamed Brother Scout Vash, reaching out his hand to help his friend. Before the zombies tackled him to the ground, Brock threw his missile launcher into the rhino, where it landed with a hard clang. The rhino was already driving away, and the troop door was already closing, but Vash still drew his bolt pistol and fired at the pack of death that had enveloped his friend. Castus reached over and patted him on the pack, and gestured for him to sit down.

“We’re heading toward the extraction zone.” The driver said over the vox. “Inquisitor Garrison just declared exterminatus on this entire world, so we need to get the hell out of here.”

Castus stood up. “All right, Squad Castus. You performed admirably today. The loss of a brother shall only serve to make us fight harder. Let us all avenge Brother Scout Brock.”

The rest of the squad cheered, banging the butts of their combat knives against the hull of the rhino.

“Furthermore, you fought as one today. You performed as well as any good Battle Brother should, and so,” Castus smiled, letting the sentence hang for a moment. “I am recommending to Company Commander Reaper that you all become fully fledged members of the Onyx Warriors. You are to be Scouts no longer!”

The cheers turned into roars, and the knives were replaced with gun butts, in an attempt by the scouts to make as much noise as possible. The driver up front shook his head, and muttered something about noise discipline in a combat zone, but Castus pretended not to hear him.

“Congratulations men. I am proud to call you my Battle Brothers.”


The extraction zone was a site of barely contained chaos. Columns of Leman Russes lay abandoned on the side of the road so that their colossal landing barges could be used to evacuate the billions of Imperial Guardsmen planetside. In order to save space on the limited number of troop transports, they had all been ordered to ditch their equipment in a pit that had been carved out of the snowy earth by the plasma cannon of a Warhound Titan. The Titan was being lovingly loaded in a titanic drop pod by its Adeptus Mechanicus masters. And of course, there were the Astartes. Thousands of them were being herded into lines so that they could board the thunderhawks that were waiting patiently to take them back to their battle barges. They were not ditching their guns in hastily dug pits, their transports were roomy enough and there were few enough of them that they could afford to leave with all that they had come with. Which was, at its most basic, a suit of power armor, a close combat weapon, and a gun. Becoming a Space Marine meant forgoing things like possessions.

Above all this, standing on a small hill with his chosen few, was Inquisitor Lord Nathe Garrison, his crimson robes flapping gently in the wind. He held a gold Daemonhammer in his right hand, waving it about every so often to emphasize his orders, and generally intimidate people. It worked. When Squad Castus pulled up in their Rhino, he was talking to an Imperial Guard commander, and they seemed to be arguing about how best to load the remaining soldiers. Vash stepped out of the Rhino, his sniper rifle strapped his back, and heard Garrison scream,

“I don’t care about the equipment loss General. Quite frankly, you’re lucky I’m letting you break protocol and leave the Russes behind, as any one of them is more valuable than an entire company of your men. So stop bitching and tell your men that if they want to live another day, they are to ditch their lasgun, helmet, flak vest, grenades, and any other weapons and equipment they have into the pit. They are to board the ship in nothing but combat boots and fatigues. If I see-” he turned to a servitor standing aimlessly next to him, and waved his hammer in front of its head to get the thing’s attention. “make a note of this. If I see so much as a garrision cap on one of your men, he and the three men closest to him will be pulled out of line and shot by Commissar Molotov. No exceptions.” The servitor scurried away to give the orders to the Commissar.

“What about my officers? Some of their wargear is irreplaceable!”

Garrison moved his face very close the officer’s, until they were about two inches apart.

“Do I look like I care? I am trying to coordinate the evacuation of billions of footsloggers, thousands of Astartes, and an Emperor-damned Warhound Titan, and you bother me with queries about some trinket your color sergeant picked up on Tallarn!” He pointed his hammer at the mess of troops scrambling for space on the transports for effect.

“Well then, what about me then?” The officer asked. He drew his power sword and held it in the air. “This sword was a gift from Ursarkar E. Creed himself!”

Garrison rolled his eyes dismissively. “You have your own shuttle, do you not?”

“Well…yes.” The officer muttered, trying very hard to avoid looking at the Inquisitor right now.

“Look me in the eye when I speak to you worm!” Garrison yelled, nudging him with the butt of his hammer. “Now, you have your own ship correct?”

The commander nodded eagerly.

“Then do what you wish with the space on that ship! Now, leave me, or I’ll rend your head from your body!” Garrison screamed, holding the Daemonhammer under the officer’s chin menacingly.

“Yes sir!!!” The officer yelled, snapping a quick salute, sheathing his sword and scurrying off to the safety of his shuttle.

Castus tapped Vash on the back. “Spying is not generally encouraged brother. Come, our transport awaits.”

Vash nodded slowly, and followed his sergeant toward the landing pad to the squad’s assigned thunderhawk.


The boxy transport, resplendent in the bright green and rich black of the Onyx Warriors, rose slowly into the sky. Vash stared out one of the portholes, eyeing the evacuation zone as it got smaller and smaller.

“We’re approaching the battle barge Semper Vigilans, and should be docking soon.” The pilot said over the vox.

Castus stood, and slammed his fist on the hull to get the squads attention.

“All right, listen up! When we land, you are to proceed to our barracks, and wait until Battle-Captain Jirken calls us to assembly room C. It is there you will receive your new legion assignments.”

The squad responded as one. “Yes sir!”

“We’re now docking with the battle barge, so I need to ask everyone to sit down. There’s a lot of traffic up here.”

Vash looked out the window, and saw hundreds of thunderhawks waiting to board the various ships that made up the fleet the Onyx Warriors had sent. Fortunately, they were headed for the legion's scout barge, and not one of the regular ones, making the wait time a lot shorter.

The thunderhawk flew through the small opening in the landing bay, and slowly set down. It’s engines whined in protest as the pilots brought it down nice and slow, and Vash could barely feel the thud as it finally hit the deckplate.

After a minute or two, the rear door slammed open and the squad filed out.

Castus eyed them all, and then roared, “Scout Squad Castus…dis-missed!”

The four of them walked out of the landing bay towards their barracks, each knowing that that was the last time they would see combat together.


The squad’s barracks was sparse, just some beds and desks for studying the enormous amount of material that came with being a Space Marine. Vash sat down at one of the desks, and laid a greasy dropcloth down on its surface. He set his sniper rifle on the cloth, and began the slow and arduous process of disassembling and cleaning the thing. In the back of his mind, he wondered what kind of squad he would be assigned to. Perhaps he would become an assault marine, bringing death to the foes of the Imperium from the air. Or maybe he would serve in a frontline tactical squad. He secretly hoped, however, that he would be assigned to one of the many devastator squads the legion had.

Scout marines are not allowed to use any heavy weapons aside from missile launchers and heavy bolters, but they do receive operational training in the many other special weapons available to the Astartes. On the day Vash and his squad were sent to receive this training, Vash fell in love with the plasma cannon. He admired the soldiers who were able to strike a balance between optimal plasma output and a deadly overheat. Under controlled condition, they were taught, overheats never happened. But even an Astartes could miss a warning rune during the heat of battle and ask too much of the machine spirit in the gun, causing a massive discharge of superheated plasma over himself and anyone nearby. When Vash was given a chance to fire one, he performed admirably, according to the gunnery sergeant in charge of the training operation. He still recalled the man’s words,

“I hope to see you in a dev squad someday boy. It’d be a hell of a waste of potential to do otherwise.”

Vash beamed at the words, pausing in the disassembly process to bask in the warm inner glow of the memory. After a minute or so, he shook his head to clear it of any distractions, and went back to his assigned task.

A few minutes later, a fully armored Astartes walked into the room, and cleared his throat. Vash looked up, the silencer of his sniper rifle in his right hand and a greasy rag in his left. He looked up at battle-captain Jirken expectantly.

“Will all members of scout squad Castus please follow me? The ceremony is about to begin.”

Castus walked over the man, and they whispered to themselves for a few minutes. The armored marine nodded, and then said,

“I’m sorry brothers; I didn’t realize you were busy caring for your weapons. But there is no time, the ceremony is to begin immediately. Leave the guns to the armory servitors, they shall see to it that they are properly cleaned for the next group of men who use them.”

Castus whistled sharply, and the scouts all jumped up.

“Scout squad Castus, fall in, single file parade formation!” The sergeant barked.

The three remaining scouts jumped up and ran to form a singular line behind the battle-captain, with Castus marching alongside.

“Where to, battle captain?” Castus asked.

“Promenade deck B. The company commander is waiting for you there. He will give the men their new assignments.”
The sergeant nodded understandingly. He had done this hundreds of times with as many squads, training them as best he could and handing them off to the legion.

The squad quick-marched through the starship, never breaking stride, and arrived at the promenade deck within a few minutes. Castus held waited until he could see the Aquila inscribed on the gilded doors, and then yelled,

“Atten-shun!!!” He stopped as soon as the word left his tongue, knowing the squad would do the same. He spiraled around on his foot, and saw three men, standing ramrod straight, with their eyes forward. He nodded to Jirken, and the captain walked to the doors. They parted when he got close, and he stopped, turning back to face Castus. Jirken beckoned the squad forward with a wave of his hand. Castus barked,

“Squad Castus! Advance!”

He led them down the aisle into the small chapel, used solely for the purpose of anointing scouts. Inside, rows of Astartes in full ceremonial battle plate stood along the center aisle, their right arms held high above, each holding ceremonial chainblades. Castus led the squad down the aisle at a lockstep, savoring the moment. He had trained these men since they had been admitted into the legion, and grown to know them like brothers. Each had their own special talents, and he was sure that these would be brought to light today. Castus would often brag to the other scout sergeants that he had never had a batch of men that became normal, bolter wielding marines. And despite how much the other sergeants hated to admit it, they knew it was true. Castus had a way of bringing out a man’s talents, and honing them into useful battlefield skills.

He was ripped from his reverie when he eyed the end of the aisle, and saw the company commander, Drej Reaper, standing relaxed in his gilded suit of armor. As company commander, and the overall trainer of Space Marine scouts, he held a high position of authority in the Onyx Warriors, second only to the First Captain and the Legion Master himself. As such, the commander's armor reflected his personal taste, and allowed him to pick and choose parts from the various Marks to suit his pleasure. The suit he was wearing currently was a combination of many different marks of battle plate, ranging from the Mark VI helmet he was holding under one arm, to the Mark VIII chestplate and throat guard. His shoulderpads were incredibly ornate, as befitted his rank. The right one had a gold eagle, and the left was studded in the style of the ancient Mark V armor, used during the Horus Heresy. Reaper had been a scout during those days, and was one of the few remaining in the legion who were original legion founders.

“Sergeant Castus, is this your squad?”

Castus snapped back to reality, and nodded.

“Squad! Atten-shun!!!” he roared, causing the three scouts to stop as if they’d been struck paralyzed. Even the battle-captain’s step wavered a bit as Castus’s words hit him.

When Jirken was standing at the company commander’s side, Castus saluted and said,


“Sir, presenting Scout Squad Castus.”

They were starting the sacred ceremony, and as custom dictated he do when a squad with missing members was presented, Reaper answered,

“Where is your missing member Sergeant?”

“Sir, he is with the Emperor!”

Reaper nodded, and smiled. “Scout Squad Castus, your sergeant tells me that you achieved the level of fighting required of an Astartes. He says that despite the loss of a brother, you continued your mission in an orderly manner, and proceeded promptly to the evacuation point. He tells me there were no foolhardy search and rescue missions proposed, no body retrieval asked of anyone. You simply accepted the fact that Brother Scout Brock’s time to die had come and gone. This is the mark of a true Astartes, looking death in the face and shrugging. I am proud to present you your squad assignments. Battle Brother Nolan, your close combat prowess has not gone overlooked, even in a legion that frowns on it, and you have been assigned to assault squad Winh in the Third Company.” Nolan slammed his fist to his breastplate in a salute.

“Yes sir, thank you sir!”

“Battle Brother Eurebus, you have been chosen to receive further training as a Techmarine, because of your intense fascination with the arcane.”

“Sir, thank you sir!”

“Battle Brother Vash, you have been assigned to a devastator squad in the Fifth Company. I am told that you are to wield the deadly plasma cannon.”

Pride welling up inside him, Vash slammed his fist to his chestplate and yelled,

“Yes sir! Thank you sir!”

Reaper smiled warmly. “You will find your new equipment in your quarters, where you will stay until we return to the legion fortress. When we do arrive, you are each to report to your new billets. Eurebus, for you, that means a shuttle to Mars to study under the Adeptus Mechanicus. Congratulations, and Emperor be with you all.”

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When the ceremony was over, Vash and his squad were dismissed from the hall and sent back to their barracks. Before he could leave the room, Castus was pulled aside by Reaper. The commander of the tenth clapped his hand on Castus’s shoulder, and spoke in a soft voice.

“Hey Eugo, you did a good job with these ones. They have some real potential.”

Castus chuckled and turned to face his old friend. “Thanks Drej. Coming from you, that means a lot. What’s the word from up top?”

“Well, the legion master is as tight-lipped as ever. He won’t even tell the first captain what he’s got planned battle wise, but I know it’s something big.”

“How do you know that?”

“Klebold and I are good friends, so I get to hear some things that ordinary people don’t.” Reaper smiled.

Xander Klebold was the Techmarine in charge of caring for the legion’s vast contingent of servitors.

“So, you have drinks with Klebold. What does that matter?”

“Admit it, when there’s a servitor in the room, you carry on like there’s no one there, am I right?”

Castus nodded slowly.

“And so they take in everything, and then Klebold gleans the interesting bits.”

“Ah, so you use them as your own personal spy network?”

“Yeah, pretty much. By the way, you may want to stop using the sparring cages after hours. Klebold kind of frowns on that.” Reaper grinned.

Castus laughed. “Damn servies, they’re everywhere aren’t they?”

“Yeah. Listen, I don’t want to keep you, but as the company commander, I need to give you your next assignment.”

“Okay, shoot.”

“You’re are being assigned to train 9 neophytes this time.”

“Oh bloody hell…” Castus muttered.

“Yeah, I know, the large squads can be a problem, but I think you can handle it. You’re pretty experienced. Anyway, you’ll find them on C deck, barracks number 42.”

“All right, thanks Drej. Time to go be a hardass.”

“Hey, good luck to you.” Drej said. “Seriously.”

“You as well brother.” Castus saluted his old friend casually, causing Reaper to break into peals of laughter. They slammed their right fists together in the traditional Onyx handshake, and departed.



Vash walked down the hall, riding a wave of emotions that made him feel all giddy. It almost felt like the time he and his squad had bummed a box of Lho sticks off of an Imperial Guard squad, during some field exercises. He practically ran down the hall, wanting to see his new suit of power armor and plasma cannon. He swerved between servitors and other scouts, finally skidding to a halt in front of his barracks. Gone were their sniper rifles and carapace armor; in the place of the lesser weapons was the wargear that Vash and his fellow marines would be using for the rest of their lives. Nolan walked over to his bunk, where a chainblade and bolt pistol were laying neatly arranged on the smooth cotton sheets. A disassembled suit of Mark VII lay nearby on a weapons desk. Eurebus found nothing on his bunk but a rust red cloak and a bolt pistol. He nodded, and quickly exchanged his green and black fatigues for the looser, more ornately woven cloak. Vash walked over to his bunk, in the corner of the barracks room, and was pleasantly surprised at what he saw. A suit of Mark VI armor was in pieces on the floor, but it wasn’t the ancient armor Vash had been blessed with that caught his attention.

A large backpack was leaning against his bunk. A fat, silver cable ran from the backpack, snaking across the floor, and eventually connecting with the weapon he’d dreamed about for years, a plasma cannon. His plasma cannon was lying on his bunk, along with a box of plasma charges and a bandolier to carry them in. If he remembered correctly from basic training, each charge had about six to eight shots in it, depending upon many factors, such as how stressed the machine spirit of the gun was, the temperature of the gun, the surrounding environment’s temperature, and whether the gun had been rapid fired recently. When he could finally tear his eyes away from his new weapon, he saw a small note sitting on his endtable. He slit it open with his combat knife, and read it.

Battle Brother Vash:

You are to report for advanced training with the plasma cannon when your battle barge reaches the legion fortress.

Drej Reaper

10th Company Commander

Vash crumpled the note and threw it into the incinerator on the wall. This was to be expected. Up until now, he was a sniper, and now that he was being reassigned as a plasma cannon operator, he was pretty much obligated to train and become the best he could in his assigned weapon. He gingerly moved his new weapons, setting them on his spartan desk, and walked over to his former squadmates.

“Hey, are we ready for the feast now?” Vash asked.

Eurebus looked up. He was proudly sporting the rusty red robe of a Mechanicus adept, and he nodded. “Yeah, I think so. Talk to Nolan though, he’s still messing around with his chainblade.”

Upon hearing that, Nolan looked up. “Hey, I’m hungry!” he said, setting the deadly weapon down.

Vash nodded. “Okay, then lets call Sergeant Castus.”


The feast was a tradition amongst the Onyx Warriors. All newly anointed scouts held a dinner were they could talk and share memories. It was also the first time an Onyx Warrior was allowed to drink alcohol, and there was plenty of heavy drink at these parties. They were usually small affairs, with just the scout squad and their sergeant. Very rarely, if the legion had a particularly large graduating class, or if several scout squads happened to finish their training at the same time, then a grand feast would be organized, with as many as twenty scout squads all together in the main dining hall of their respective battle barges.


The three scouts arrived at the dining hall dressed in their new gear. For Eurebus this meant his rusty red Mechanicus robes. Vash and Nolan each sported their suits of power armor, Marks VI and VII respectively, helmets carried under the crooks of their right arms. Castus was waiting for them, dressed in his green and black carapace armor, and carrying a small, varnished cherry wood box under his arm. He nodded to each of them, and they took their seats. Castus was seated at the head of the table, with Eurebus and Nolan seated to his left, and Vash seated to his far right right. The seat on Castus’s immediate right, the position of highest honor, was empty, representing the fallen member of their squad, Brother Scout Brock. Castus cleared his throat and spoke,

“Brothers, your time is here. You are scouts no longer. We will begin the festivities in a moment, but first, let us remember our fallen comrade, Brother Scout Brock.” Castus bowed his head in silence and crossed his palms across his chest in the sign of the Aquila. The other marines followed suit. Many minutes passed before Castus raised his head and nodded.

“Very good men. Now, on with the celebration.” He gingerly lifted the lid of the box and removed a dusty bottle of amber liquid from a purple velvet sheath. Pulling five small tumblers from the box, he gave one to each marine. He placed the fifth in front of Brock’s empty seat. Deftly, he removed the cork from the bottle and poured a few fingers of the strong alcohol for each man. Raising his glass, he smiled to the newly minted marines and chorused,

“For the Emperor!”

“For the Emperor!” the Marines repeated, and downed their glasses in a single gulp. Vash, Nolan and Eurebus immediately keeled over, hacking up a storm as the amber liquor washed down their throats, burning the naÔve organs. Castus smiled knowingly, having merely taken a small sip of his, and said,

“Yeah, I kind of expected you to do that. That’s 300 year old Terran whiskey. It’ll melt your tonsils off if you drink it too fast.” He said laughing.

“Throne, but that stuff’s awful!” Eurebus wheezed.

“Ah, you get used to it. Nolan, you’ll be wanting another glass. In the assault corp, they’re pretty heavy drinkers, and it’s good to build up a tolerance now.”

“Joy.” Nolan said, sarcasm dripping from his voice as he the sergeant refilled his glass.

“Vash, the devastators don’t drink that much; it messes up their accuracy, so your next glass is optional.” He said.

“I think I’ll pass.” Vash muttered, eyeing Nolan as he choked down another glass of whiskey, his face red like an overheating plasmagun.

“Suit yourself.” Castus said, taking another small sip of his glass. “I’m rather a fan of it actually.”

The drinking part over with, Castus snapped his fingers, summoning several servitors laden with platters of food from all over the universe. There were delicacies from each of the scouts' home planets; for Nolan, wild Terranosaurus from the jungles of Catachan. Eurebus received a plate laden with small grub-like things. The others stared at him, their faces pale as he smacked his lips in delight and tucked a napkin into his shirt.

“What? Don’t tell me you’ve never had Xaip grubs? Oh, they’re delicious! A veritable delicacy on my home planet! Here, try some!” he said, holding the platter high for the others to spoon some onto their plates if they so desired.

“We’ll pass, thanks.” Vash said, holding his hand up. The look of disgust quickly left his face as an ashen faced servitor set a platter full of grox meat down in front of him.

“Mmm… nothing better then a fresh grox steak. Uh, my good man?” he said, tapping the servitor on the shoulder as it turned to leave. “How about some barbecue sauce?”

“Of course sir.” It said in the monotone voice that characterized all servitors.

“Excellent.”

Castus, meanwhile, was digging into a bowl of fresh salad, made up of greens from his home planet.

“Hey sarge,” Vash said between mouthfuls of steak. “What planet are you from?”

“Cadia my friend. We’re encouraged to eat lots of salad there, so that we’ll be fit once we enter the Imperial Guard. Even though I was recruited by the Space Marines, the habit never really left me. And it tastes a might better than that ration gunk they serve you normally!” he grinned as he downed another mouthful of leafy greens.

Vash nodded, digging into his steak greedily, and reached for the water glass near him to wash it down. He sighed, and leaned back in his chair, contented. Castus finished his salad and watched as the other marines slowly stopped eating their food as well. Snapping his fingers, he summoned a squad of servitors who came and removed the soiled dishes from the table, and replaced the empty water glasses with fresh ones. Castus began to talk about how proud he was of the squad, and shared a few of his favorite memories of their exploits. Pretty soon, everyone was chatting and sharing tales of exploits both on the battlefield and off it. They stayed up talking until the early morning.



Captain Verunas of the Imperial Navy stepped onto the deck of his command ship, the Xenosbane, and straightened his cap before walking to his command chair. Returning the salute of his executive officer, Lieutenant Smith, he took a seat and accepted a data slate filled with the latest stats about the fleet from a hovering servo-skull. The slate contained information about the fleet's current position, estimated time of arrival, astropathic communications, and various voxes that had been flagged for his attention. His eyes lingered on the fleet's coordinates, making sure that they were on the correct course, and then pressed the erase button, wiping the slate clean of files. Tossing the slate aside, he stood up and addressed the bridge crew.

“Men, I’m told that we’re now in orbit over Onyx Prime. Order the fleet to begin troop debarkment, and have the Medicae ships enter into a stable orbit above the planet. I want these ships unloaded in four hours.”

The crew immediately began buzzing around the bridge, attending to their various concerns, and Verunas sat, watching the fleet arrange itself in an anchorage pattern through the forward viewing screens.



Vash lay on his cot, relaxing for the first time in days, when the overhead lamps switched from a cool white to an amber colour, and every man in the room dropped what they were doing. This was the signal to disembark, and sure enough, a rough, mechanical voice came over the vox a moment later, blaring out orders with machine-like efficiency. Vash was suited in his armor in a matter of seconds, and strapped the backpack generator for his plasma cannon to the rear of his armor. He hooked the plasma cannon to his back, and clamped his helmet down around his head, mating it with the neck seal. There was a slight hiss as the suit pressurized itself, and as soon as the runes in his helmet turned green, Vash ran out of the room and down the corridor. He was being ordered to debark with the devastator crews in Bay 11, and had to find his way there in the five minutes before the ship left. He passed countless ship personel, clad in grey jumpsuits and carrying a various assortment of handheld items. All paused and stood against the wall as he ran by, out of respect to the Astartes. He arrived, out of breath, in Bay 11, three minutes later after running from the bow of the ship to the stern-most launch bay on the port side. If he ever met the moron that had assigned him this launch shuttle, he’d throttle the bastard. Drawing himself up to his full height, he took a moment to compose himself before he strode across the landing bay to greet his new sergeant.

“Borther Sergeant Kenth, I’m Battle Brother Vash, your new plasmagunner.” He said, making the sign of the aquila across his breastplate. Kenth stood next to the thunderhawk, holding a data-slate manifest with his left hand and drumming the bionic fingers of his right on a bolt pistol holster. He looked up, and eyed Vash, sizing him up with a glowing red mechanical eye before nodding.

“Vash, right. I’ve been expecting you. Haul ass and grab a seat on the ‘hawk, I’ll brief you inside. Stow your gear in the cargo bay underneath.” Sensing his hesitation at being unarmed, he added,

“There’s a bolter rack inside if anything happens, now get to it trooper!”

“Yes sir!” Vash said, banging his fist on his breastplate in a quick salute. He reached behind him and released the mag-clamps holding the plasma generator to his back. Deftly, he caught the backpack before it hit the ground, and carried it to the open cargo bay beneath the waiting transport. Vash slid the weapon underneath, and slammed the hatch shut. He ran around to the other side and jumped into the thunderhawk, landing with a muted clang as his boots hit the deckwork.

The other members of his squad eyed him as he entered the ship, and he nodded to them as he took sat down. Taking a seat, he grabbed a bolter from the rack and cocked it. His squadmates eyed him uneasily, and the man sitting next to him said,

“Hey newbie, this isn’t a combat drop.”

Vash nodded. “I know, but I always get a little antsy without a weapon in my hands.”

The other marine nodded understandingly, and leaned back against the seat, waiting for the ship to launch. Sergeant Kenth jumped inside the ‘hawk, and eyed them all with his bionic eye.

“Men, we’re to report for a rotation of duty at the Citadel, and for further training with the Mk. VI plasma cannons. We also have a new member, Battle Brother Vash. Fresh out of Sergeant Castus’ squad.” He grabbed Vash’s plate sheathed arm for the squad to see, and raised it high. The men murmured approval. “So, a short flight and we’ll be on the deck at the Citadel. Report for training tomorrow bright and early.”

The squad groaned, but Kenth cut them off with a terse glare and a raised brow.

“Are you space marines or not? I expect better from the best warriors in the universe! So, let’s try again. Report for training tomorrow bright and early.”

This time, the squad all nodded brightly and made pleasant affirmatives to each other.

“Excellent!” Kenth banged his fist on the ‘hawk’s roof and yelled something at the cockpit.

“Pilot! Get us out of here!”

The gravelly voice of the servitor in the cockpit scratched over the vox as it responded an affirmative.

“Yes sergeant. We’re beginning our pre-flight checks now, and expect to be underway in a few minutes.”

Kenth nodded to no one and sat down on the troop bench, fiddling with his bolt pistol as he waiting impatiently for the craft to take off. A few minutes later, Vash felt the rumbling of the main engines beginning to warm up, and his teeth rattled as they began burning in earnest. He could picture the gargantuan cylinders, flames roaring out of the dispersal shafts and down the launch tubes of the troopship. Suddenly, he was pressed into his seat as the thunderhawk shot forward and screamed down the launch tube, the pressure doors opening an instant before the craft was due to pass through them. Vash breath a sigh of relief as they reached open space and the engines slowed down to a puttering burn. A large red sphere loomed in the distance, dotted with craters and the occasional singular mountain. Onyx Prime, the birthplace of their glorious legion and the location of The Citadel, the Onyx Warrior’s legionary fortress. Visible from space, this massive piece of architecture sprawled across the land below, enveloping plains, mountains, and water features. It was all ringed by a massive system of walls, dotted with gun emplacements and landing pads to allow reinforcements to quickly reach troubled areas. Vash grew misty eyed as he thought of the place he had called home for so many years, and the idea of returning to it gave him an intense feeling of happiness.

“Oy! Listen up! We’re landing in a few, so look sharp Razor squad.” Kenth had clearly not been rattled by the less-than-desirable thunderhawk launch, as he was just as sharp as he had when Vash had met him. Leaning back against the non-existent headrests, Vash closed his eyes and waited for the feeling of the thunderhawk’s landing skid’s hitting rockcrete.

It did not come. Instead, he heard a shrill alarm and a tinny voice coming over the vox, as the servitor pilot coolly warned them of an incoming krak missile. Vash sat up with a jolt. Did he just say krak missile? This is Onyx Prime for fething sake! Who’d be stupid enough to shoot down a space marine thunderhawk on its legion’s home planet?!

Kenth jumped to his seat, and grabbed hold of the crash webbing hanging limply there.

“Razor squad! Brace for impact!” Vash fumbled with his own crash belt, finally securing over his breastplate and pulling the tabs tight to secure it. By now, the alarms were incessant, and the servitor seemed to have given up hope of evading the missile. Vash braced for impact with the missile, and wasn’t disappointed. The small warhead ripped their tail assembly off with the signature KRAK-BANG characteristic of all krak weapons, and suddenly, they were falling. The missile must have cut the engine coils, because they had just flared out. They were falling, high up in Onyx’s atmosphere, with no possible way of surviving.

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Its very well written dude - you have a good knack for not repeating favorite phrases etc.

The only thing I don't like about it is the tone of the story. If the main subjects were IG it would be perfect but its not really arrogant enough for Space Marines if you know what I mean?. Theres not really that much reverence in the piece.

But thats just personal preference mind. Theres nothing technically wrong with the piece in the way of writing its just the portrayal that I'm 100% behind.

Keep on going though dude I want to see what happens next. I imagine the =I= has had enough and attacked despite the AM's veiled threats.
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Without revealing anything:

You're a sharp one...

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Lol why thank you. You can never trust those =I= bastards can ya
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heh, no you can't. part of the reason i'm strangely drawn to them.

next chappie should be up in a day or two. Work starts late for me tommorrow, so I might have it finished by then.

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Okay, so the new chappies up 13 days later than I promised. Again, I place the blame squarely on the shoulders of ADD and laziness. Enjoy.

The flaming transport dropped like a rock through the sky, trailing bits of debris behind it as it fell towards the rusty surface of Onyx Prime. Inside, the pilot servitors were still trying in vain to stabilize the craft, and Sergeant Kenth, despite being restrained by his crash webbing, was letting loose a stream of curses that would make any underworld ganger proud. Vash had managed to secure his webbing, and now sat with his back pressed against the troop bench, clutching the bolter so tight the pistol grip was deforming. All he could think about was that he had finally been promoted to battle brother, and now, instead of dying on some alien battlefield for the glory of the emperor, he would die, nameless and forgotten in a fething thunderhawk crash! On his own planet for Terra’s sake! He closed his eyes and prayed to the Emperor to deliver them from the sorry situation, and, as if in answer, the servitor growled over the vox,

“I’ve been successful in my endeavors to stabilize us enough so that we may land in Lake Deus. All personnel, prepare for a water landing.”

Kenth seemed to settle down; he quit bucking at the straps of his restraints, and leaned back against the bench, reaching to the shelf above for his helmet. He slammed the Mark IV helm home, the soft hiss informing him that his suit was now airtight.

“All right men, you’ve been trained for this, and I expect you to do it right. You ain’t pansy Ultramarines, you’re Onyx Warriors! We will come out of this alive, or by Terra, I’ll storm the Holy Palace and kick yer asses myself!”

The squad nodded, their helmets bobbing as they pressed hard against the bare metal bench.

The air screamed through the dying transport as it rocketed towards the surface, propelled by its dying engines. Vash gripped the pipes snaking along the ceiling tightly, crushing them in his superhuman grip and dripping subzero coolant on his head. The servitor was counting down to the estimated time of impact, and he had now reached the single digits.

5…

Vash closed his eyes and prayed to the Emperor for salvation.

4…

The pipe burst, spraying coolant everywhere.

3…

Vash slung the bolter over his shoulder; damned if he’d be caught wounded and unarmed.

2…

He could see the lake coming up rapidly through holes in the ‘hawks walls. A crystal blue oasis on the red dusty plain.

1…

Gritting his teeth, he screamed a defiant, guttural roar as the dead transport hit the water like a bolt shell.



The lone grey knight approached the small village. Situated near a clear blue river that cut a swath through the rusty red plain, this village was barely more than a small collection of thatch huts and mud brick buildings scattered about a cobblestone town square. Despite being extremely feral, the villagers were fiercely loyal to the Imperium, paying more than their fair share of taxes and levies, and truly believing that their meager contribution, usually simple iron ore and foodstuffs, made a difference in the state of affairs in their sector. Being situated on a planet that was home to a space marine chapter only served to further increase their pride and loyalty towards the Imperium. When they had collected enough resources, the village council voted to erect a large marble statue of the Emperor. It was a crude thing when you compared it to the precise, laser cut works of art on core worlds like Terra, but it served as an example of the people’s devotion to the mysterious god-emperor. They had been out of contact with elements of the Imperium for decades, merely leaving their tributes at the arranged drop off point on Tax Day, where it would be gone in the morning, whisked away by one of the glorious flying machines. So, when the holy servant of the Imperium walked down the dirt roads towards the center of town, all of the villagers were overwhelmed with happiness. Of course, they didn’t know anything about his status as a grey knight, merely thinking he was a space marine bedecked with many battle honors. Even so, they took it as a sign that great things were to come, and greeted the servant of the Inquisition with a grand banquet and festival, complete with all of the entertainment the village could muster. As was only proper, the grey knight sat in a chair carved of rare valewood, and adorned with gold gilding. This was normally reserved for the village chief, and only used in special occasions, such as weddings and funerals, but naturally the Emperor’s chosen servants took precedence over a simple village chief! The grey knight sat, never removing his helmet, and said nothing as the festivities played out around him. At the climax of the ceremony, during which the village’s adolescents had been brought out to perform for the soldier in the hopes he was on a recruiting mission, he slowly stood, and everyone instantly ceased their noisemaking. Pulling a scroll of yellow parchment from his belt, he unrolled it slowly and began to read.

“Citizens of Imperial Village 214892, of the 1st planet in the Onyx system. Your village is situated danger close to a recent rumored daemon sighting and extermination, ergo, you and the land your village is situated on is to be purified. Please, do not resist, it will only prove your guilt in the eyes of the Imperium. Go quietly, and some of your reputation will remain untarnished.” He unslung the incinerator from his shoulder, and, after dropping the scroll to the ground, reduced it to ashes in a burst of blue flame. The townspeople were exchanging confused looks, and finally, one stood and said,

“Holy servant of the God-Emperor of Mankind, what is it you are trying to say?”

The space marine shook his head. These village people were so simple; so naÔve when it came to matters such as this.

“You are to be exterminated.” He said simply, the pilot light on his incinerator glowing a cold blue. On cue, Inquisitorial Stormtroopers stepped from the shadows, armed with hellguns and incinerators. Their armor was painted in the crimson and black of the Inquisition, and they stared grimly at the doomed townspeople from behind their mirrored visors. The marine nodded, and the Stormtroopers snapped their weapons up to their shoulders.

“Fire.”

Ruby red beams shot through the night, cutting down the hapless villagers and gouging craters in the buildings. The incinerator squads went to work, jets of blue flame licking out and engulfing groups of the townspeople, instantly reducing them to purified ash. The grey knight stood and began incinerating the tables and chairs he had been sitting at. Out of the corner of his eye, he saw a young man running through the forest, clutching what appeared to be a picter. The marine turned on his heels and yelled,

“Sergeant, take that man down!!!”

The Stormtrooper sergeant raised his boltpistol and fired a quick volley of three shots, the pistol barking loudly as the shots sliced through the darkness. Two of them went wild, but one nicked the man in the shoulder, failing to explode. He stumbled, and the picter swung wildly on the thin leather strap around his neck. The sergeant frowned and pulled back on the pistol’s release bolt, an empty ammunition magazine falling to the grass. He fumbled with a new magazine, finally slapping it into place and cocking the pistol. By this time, the man was almost to the treeline marking the edge of the forest. The grey knight rolled his eyes beneath his visor, cursing the idiocy of his troops, and yanked a hellgun from the hands of a nearby Stormtrooper, snapping it to his shoulder and firing one shot, aimed at the picter. The crimson beam struck the small camera in a shower of sparks, and the man dove to the grass instinctively.

“Sergeant, once you are done fondling your pistol, send two men to ensure that the man is dead.”

The sergeant nodded eagerly, not wishing to disappoint a grey knight. He snapped his fingers, and flicked his hand toward the area the man had fallen. Two Stormtroopers ran towards the fallen villager, intent on purging him once and for all.


The hologram froze on the image of the two Stormtroopers, and Captain Xander of the Onyx Warriors 3rd Company shook his head.

“They found the man, and executed him shortly thereafter. What they did not find, however, was this tape, which you just saw. Apparently, that man, Emperor save him, was a decoy, so that another villager with a second picter could slink away and record whatever happened to the first man. He approached our camp this morning, offering proof that the Ordo Malleus was up to no good. After a thorough interrogation, he presented us with this film. You men are the first to see it. Now this, combined with the “accidental” thunderhawk crash, makes me extremely worried that the Inquisition has crossed the Rubicon, and doesn’t give a shit. Any questions? Comments? Concerns?”

Captain Deus of the Onyx Warriors 18th company spoke softly.

“Imagine, our brothers have been doing this the entire time.” He said, referring to the Grey Knight seen in the pic.

“The Grey Knights are not our brothers!!!” Brother Sergeant Proxeus of the 1st squad, 7th company spoke sharply, but it was true. The Grey Knights always carried with them an air of self importance, which was interpreted by most other chapters as snobbishness and arrogance.

“The Grey Knights make the Emperor’s Children look timid and shy.” Scout Sergeant Castus said plainly. “But that is beside the point. What we have just witnessed is genocide. Something which the Emperor would never have condoned. We must do what we can to stop it.”

“Aye, I agree with Castus. That, coupled with the firing upon one of our thunderhawks, makes me so angry I can’t see straight! They can’t wantonly slaughter innocents and expect us to sit in our fortress and do nothing. It’s our planet for throne’s sake! We have a duty to these people!” Deus said.

Everyone nodded, but Proxeus put it best when he said,

“Onyx first, the Inqusition second!”

“Aye, for Onyx!” Deus bellowed.

“For Onyx!!!” the marines cried.


The Onyx Warriors maintained an extensive fortress on Onyx. It was really more like a network of fortresses, all converging on one central keep. Commissioned by Rogal Dorn himself as a legion founding gift, back before the Horus Heresy, the outer walls were built with the strongest materials available at the time, meaning it was all but impregnable now, and the fortress bristled with guns. Anti-aircraft cannons dotted the towers, and Earthshaker cannons were spaced evenly every five hundred feet. Manticore missiles were arranged in blow away silos all over the place, and point defence lasers, strong enough to cut through the void shields of a titan just with a graze, were placed in the tops of the mighty towers. There were plenty of pintle weapons bolted to the battlements, all crewed by servitors and Onyxian militamen, and the fortress held enough ammunition and supplies to last ten years. Plus, it boasted a fully-fledged spaceport for large landing craft and such to land well inside the perimeter and resupply the base. The chapter’s substantial fleet of Thunderhawks was berthed in underground hangers and could be scrambled to deploy in minutes. By all means, the fortress was considered impregnable, and this gargantuan place was where the Onyx Warriors were going to make a stand against the Inquisition.

Sergeant Proxeus walked along the battlements of the first layer of walls, the hovering servo skull beside him checking off a list of defensive essentials. The veteran sergeant, who had refused more battlefield commissions than anyone could remember and had been dragooned by the Ordo Xenos to serve as a member of the Deathwatch, was a better choice than anyone to organize the defenses of the Citadel. He knew more about the ways of warmaking than most of the field commanders did, and had known several dreadnoughts since back when they too were marines. He was a living legend, the rallying figure around which countless counter attacks and last stands had been based, and he was worried to the extremes right now.

If they truly believed them to be a threat, the Inquisition would not stop until the Citadel had been ground into a fine powder; its defenders, a paste. There were several reports from the milita garrisons of lone figures in power armor slinking about, and of villages mysteriously burning to the ground. Unless the Salamanders were playing some cruel joke on them, then Onyx Prime had clearly been infiltrated by the Grey Knights, and Emperor knew who else. Scouts dispatched to those villages had found weapon discharges that were inconsistent with boltguns, and the picter clearly showed soldiers wielding hellguns, so it was safe to assume that, wherever the Grey Knights were, they had brought Stormtroopers as well. Legionmaster Kristian had already enacted a planetwide quarantine, with the only starport remaining open being the one in the Citadel. Proxeus doubted that would do much, other than create panic among the civilians. However they had got to the surface, it clearly wasn’t on the public shuttle system. Emergency housing was already being constructed in the Citadel, to allow any refugee who so wished a safe place to live during the conflict. And an emergency emissary to the Adeptus Mechanicus had been dispatched, with a copy of the tape and a plea for assistance. With time and luck, the Skitarri and Titan Legions of all the Forgeworlds in the area would be on their way. The titans of Onyx XI had already been put on alert, and were making their way to the Citadel even as Proxeus walked along the parapets. Eyeing a pair of militamen manning a pintle mounted lascannon, Proxeus walked over, smiling warmly to lift the frightened men’s spirits.

“Private, how goes the watch?” he asked the gunner.

The soldier loosened his grip on the weapon, and looked up at the hulking warrior before him.

“Uhh… sir, good to see you!” he stammered, snapping to attention.

“At ease trooper, there will be little time for that soon, so you may as well kick the habit now. I am out inspecting our defenses, and you militamen are an extremely important component of them. Are you men receiving everything you need, or are there other things you need to better serve in the defense of your homeland?”

The soldiers beamed at such praise, and the loader said,

“Well sir, our lasguns are extremely high quality, and the boxes of power packs spaced along the walls ensure that we will virtually never run out of ammunition. The only thing I can think of is perhaps some harsh weather gear, as these walls are extremely exposed, and it’s hard to fight in such minimal conditions. Uhh… that is, if you are able sir.”

Proxeus nodded. It was hard to anticipate the needs of mortals sometimes, but the man brought up a genuine point.

“I’ll have an emergency order placed immediately. They should be shipped from Onyx XI in a week. Also, a freighter just arrived with a new shipment of carapace armor. It’s been earmarked for you men on the walls, so when you get a chance, head down to the spaceport and pick up a pair. Could save your life someday.”

The soldiers nodded, smiling in appreciation at the idea of better protection than the flak armor they had been wearing so far. Although of the highest quality, making most guardsmen green with envy when they saw it, it was nowhere near as good as the full body carapace armor suits their space marine masters had somehow managed to procure for them. They thanked Proxeus, and wished him luck in his endeavour.

“The same to you my friends.” Proxeus said.


Lake Deus, named after one of the sharpest commanders in the Onyx Warriors, was now home to the smoking wreckage of a thunderhawk. The crystal blue water ran black with oil, and bits of armor and weapons floated in the lake, choking its pristine beauty with pollution.

An arm broke the surface; an arm clad in Mark VI plate. The hand flexed for a moment, testing to see that it was above the water, and then the arm was swiftly followed by a head, a torso, and another arm. The marine peeled off his helmet, taking a breath of the cool, Onyxian night air. Then, slamming the helmet back on, he began the slow and arduous swim towards the shore.

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