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post #11 of 128 (permalink) Old 09-18-08, 09:16 AM
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You're all doing an amazing job I can't wait for the next installment!
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post #12 of 128 (permalink) Old 09-18-08, 02:45 PM
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I only read the first part.Good writing, a little over gory for my tastes, but over all well written and intresting.


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well i thought that was fleking awesome ploss i really enjoyed it, and to everyone else who wrote it it is looking brilliant cant wait for the next installment

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yeah. "Flek" if you haven't figured it out yet, is the new curse word. haha! I wanted to come up with something unique other than F**K and S**T and all that.

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This is all going really well, thanks for taking the idea and running with it, you have all put a big smile on my face!

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I don't mean to nit pick, but there seems to be a bit of a continuity error. At the end of imm0rtal reaper's post he says the ship has jumped forward in time 10k years, but Commissar Ploss goes on as if this wasn't mentioned. So Marneus Calgar has been fighting on Terra for 10 millennia?
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I don't mean to nit pick, but there seems to be a bit of a continuity error. At the end of imm0rtal reaper's post he says the ship has jumped forward in time 10k years, but Commissar Ploss goes on as if this wasn't mentioned. So Marneus Calgar has been fighting on Terra for 10 millennia?
You don't hear back from the Lightning squadrons if they actually see the ultramarines or not, i figured i'd leave that up to the next person...the whole date thing really confused me so i sorta brushed it aside, just like the captain did, but if someone wants to bring it back, thats fine with me.

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Very nice, has inpsiried me to get some stuff completed!
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update: possible addition in the works, keep your eyes peeled for more fantastic writing!

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quality, if only GW could move things along abit. maybe you ashould send it them to give them a kick up theirs arses
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