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The Deceiver’s Spark by Ryan John Tyler-Crisp


Torvin sat quietly, the only sound came from the clicking of the auto-guns mechanisms as he carefully cleaned them, almost under his breath he began to whisper a prayer to the god-emperor upon far away terra.

His head snapped up as his sharp eyes caught movement at the far side of the warehouse, in one slick movement the auto-gun was fixed and loaded, with practiced caution he slid into the shadows even as the shadow became the familiar shape of the giant Ogryn Kolov, The huge humanoid bellowed a greeting and stomped over to the young human.

“Kolov,” he said hushing the creature “How many times do I have to tell you!” he gestured around the hanger “We don’t know what caused this rock to be abandoned so we’re being real quiet like ok?”
Instantly the giants head drooped and he started to sniffle, Torvin looked to the hanger roof and punched the creature’s belly,
“Hey,” he smiled “no crying! You ogryn are supposed to be the toughest and hardest solders there is!”
A toothy grin spread across the brutal features and Kolov smashed his ham like fist across his chest,
“Ogryn are de toughest and Kolov is one of de toughest of dem ogryn!” he smiled and flexed his huge muscles, Torvin shivered as he remembered the last time he had seen the brute strength of his giant friend.

The gangster had smiled at the captain and in that frozen moment Torvin had realized there was to be no easy trade, the night had suddenly caught fire in a storm of las-gun and stubber fire, the light and sound of the weapons discharge battered his senses as he fled trying to remember the captain’s instructions should the deal go bad. As he ducked several rounds and made fro the door he heard the evil whine of the captain’s chainsword and his laughing battle cry!

The winding alleys of the small hive were full of wreckage and junk twice Torvin had been tripped by the debris and sent sprawling to his hands and knees, this final time his cursed loudly only to feel a breeze pass over his prone body, rolling to one side he came to his feet and eye to eye with one of his pursuers, a green haired ganger who’s eyes were as wide as saucers, Torvin sidestepped as the man slashed at him with the serrated metal bar he was using as a crude sword, the youngster tripped again and with deliberate slowness his attacker raised his weapon above his head.

Torvin looked up at the man as a huge shadow appeared behind him, the mans eyes contorted in pain, the slap of flesh on flesh echoed in the confined space, the bar clattered to the ground as the fingers lost all feeling, Torvin watched in horror as the mans arms were slowly forced apart, smoothly they reached the widest point they could get to, it was then the screams began, anger, effort, desperation and finally terror all trooped through the mans voice before the final sound of wet tearing flesh sent the screams into a pitch beyond anything the young boy had ever heard. Kolov stepped forward the still gushing arms flopping uselessly in his ham like fists, with almost contempt the giant ogryn threw a backhand into the screaming man, throwing the body through the air until it smashed against a wall with a sickening crack, the dead body slid to the floor, silent at last.

“Captains gonna be well happy wit you maggot pie!” Kolov chuckled, Torvin smashed his fist into the giants belly, pain seared through his hand.
“Its magpie you dumb kek!” Torvin said through clenched teeth, another voice joined the conversation causing both the human and the ogryn to turn around guns raised.
“You calling him dumb then punching him is rich me little magpie!” Smooth and confident the captain approached with several crew members among them the Squat boson, Kaavaar.
The dwarfed sailor stomped over to the crates, and began to laugh
“Looks like the magpie has done it again captain looky here at these beauties!” he threw a rifle to the powerfully built man, who examined the weapon closely.
“These are imperial guard issue!” he exclaimed “worth a kekkin fortune!” another sailor said laughing with delight.
“They are worth so much because they are not easy to acquire fool,” the captain said with an unusual bite in his voice, “grab what you can and head back to the Socrates in case their owners are still around.”
“We ain’t seen nobody captain...” a rough looking pirate said snatching a rifle
“So they will still be here tomorrow then!” the captain said his face smoothing and the smile returning, “lets just get some stuff back to the ship now, get to it!” He turned to the Squat and lowered his voice, Torvin watched as Kaavaar’s face darkened and turned to the youngster and his ogryn friend.
“You two step too,” he pointed to the crates “Captains gave ‘is orders!”

The Socrates sat proud upon the small plain, surrounded by the small defensive wall that the captain nearly always had built on planet fall, the two twins Hern and Kain both sat in the heavy stubber positions waved as the pirates made there way past and into the compound,
“Good hunting magpie?” one yelled as Torvin passed, the youngsters one fingered salute ripped coughing laughter from both sentries!
“Is everyone else accounted for?” Kaavaar barked
“Only Craig’s group ain’t come back boson.” Kain yelled his voice suddenly all business, the squat growled something in his own tongue then turned to the assembled crew members,
“Get this loot in the hold then your times your own until your guard duty,” he turned to stomp up the ramp, “And no leaving the camp!” his voice echoed as he disappeared into the hold.

“Hey Kain how is Eldrith now?”
“The Eldar,” the huge pirate rubbed his chin nervously “she still spooked, I tell ye not a good sign her being all at sea like that!”
“Almost as bad as that crook,” Hern said quietly joining them “Alvin Craig’s team being missing!” he pointed to the skyline “nights a fallin, guess the captain will be after him in the morning!” he said watching the bright yellow sun slid behind the horizon, its deep blue twin rising on the opposite horizon starting to bath them in an eerie ghost light.

“Craig’s still out?” Torvin repeated slowly as the meaning of his words sank in, “that means he…” the men murmured until one voice was raised above all others.
“You know the rules boy!” Kain cracked his knuckles! “You’re back on time or….” He left it hanging the threat obvious in his voice.
Torvin nodded solemnly, he remembered the last creature to ignore the captains orders, the screams and the final whine of the brutal chainsword the captain wielded.
“I’m gonna check in on Eldrith,” he smiled “sometimes I think she likes me maybe I can calm her down!”
“Good luck with that magpie, she’s like a cat in a box at the moment!” Hern smiled.

The youngster strolled up the ramp and into the belly of the pirate ship, sleek and deadly she mirrored her captain, Torvin felt a sense of home as he moved along her pathways, he heard Kolov rumble something about food and is giant footfalls soon vanished among the myriad noises of the Socrates.
It was only a short walk to the strange navigators quarters, she was a fey creature aloof and to some even arrogant but the captain would broke no nonsense from the crew always claiming it was a great honor for one of her race to consent to even share a ship with them never mind actually work alongside, the shadows seemed to darken as Torvin approached the Eldar’s door, even as he reached to the control panel he heard her musical voice inside his head,
“Enter child of man.” The door slid open without a touch.

The young human stepped slowly through the portal, the room was sparse even by the pirates standards, in the centre sat Eldrith, her lithe form cross legged and covered in a bone white power armor, only her head was uncovered, it’s sharp fey features half hidden in shadow, yet the eyes all but glowed as she regarded him.
“Time grows short for us son of man, what brings you to me I wonder?” her lips never moved, “concern?” the thin pale lips turned slightly at the edges.
“I…” he began
“Speak not for I hear your voice in my mind as I allow you to hear mine, think and it will be so.”
“The crew is worried by your absence,” he thought concentrating hard,
“No need to raise your voice son of man,” he thought he heard the whisper of a sigh, “I prepare myself for the death beneath the world.” Her hands moved slowly taking in her white armor, “The funeral rites of my people must be observed even if I shall never be among them again.”
“Are you ill?” he blurted out and darkness filled her beautiful features
“Use your mind or leave this sanctuary,” the snap in the voice was clear “The silence must be preserved!”
“Forgive me Eldrith,” his face contorted with concentration.
“I am not ill, death lies beneath this world, eternal death,” her eyes slowly closed, “soon they shall rise and a galaxy will weep…”
Behind him the door slid open once more,
“Lileath go with you, son of man.”

The night sky was beautiful here, the young human thought as he watched the blue giant make its way amongst the stars, at first he had been afraid of the witch light it had bathed the plains in but now he saw the beauty in it, he smiled as the nights peace was broken yet again by the roaring snores of his ogryn companion.
“Kaavaar,” he said quietly “you can come out now.” The squat appeared from behind a crate, “You have never caught me sleeping on watch!” Torvin laughed
“Aye boy but I still check as I do every man jack of em!” even the squat smiled slowly his face darkened as he looked out towards the deserted city.
“We will be going after them on the morrow?” Torvin said in a hushed tone voice almost cracking.
“Afraid so lad,” the boson let out a breathy whistle, “some folks just can’t help there selves it seems.”
“Gonna go bad when dey cap’ in catches em!” Kolov rumbled from below.
“Go back to sleep Kol, it’s your watch soon enough,” the boson barked yet he smiled at the young boy, “thing is even the ogryn has the right of it, the captain can’t ignore this.”
Sadly Torvin nodded and returned his gaze to the plains, tomorrow would bring blood and every man there knew it.

Torvin slipped amongst the crates his mind racing, the small pistol in his hand hummed, he silently cursed as he realized it was the power cells powering down,
“one shot left..” he whispered to himself, without warning the cover he was crouching in was batted aside, looming high above him was his pursuer he raised his hand the pistol, leaden in his grip, a green flash filled his vision.

“You ok Tor?” the ogryn’s face was a welcome sight as the youngster came awake, he rubbed his eyes the sheen of sweat stung them but he quickly rose all the same, he reached for the auto-gun that had been his prize for finding the weapons stash, still shaking off the remnants of sleep his groping hand settled on the small pistol he had won on that last planet fall, instinctively he checked the power indicator, it was full.
“Just a dream…” his whisper didn’t carry to his massive friend but he seemed to relax as the youngster nodded and moved to his guard position.

The sun rose slowly, Torvin watched the horizon soon its twin would appear aswell, the noise of several people shouting and milling about told him the captain wasn’t going to wait for it. Kaavaar stomped through the makeshift barricade he turned and waved to the youngster, Torvin waved back. The squat boson turned and started off towards the city, the captains voice boomed out behind him, several orders came and went before he heard his own name,
“Torvin get down here your in the hunting party with me,” the captain paused then laughed “and brings that wrecking ball ogryn friend of yours!”
The single sun was just bright enough to light the way across the plains yet once inside the abandoned township the buildings cast shadows that anyone or thing could have hidden in, Torvin shuddered as his imagination started to play games with his mind, every shadow suddenly hid a threat. The great ogryn Kolov hummed out of tune as he strode along, the huge barrel of his auto cannon bobbed jauntily along in time. The captain looked down at his wrist piece and pointed off to the left nobody questioned him as they moved off in that direction, Kaavaar nodded after the captain and whispered to the youngster as they brought up the rear,
“Every one of us got a chip in em,” he rubbed his wrist subconsciously “tells the cap'ins little gizmo where’s we is at!” the grin he wore was positively vicious, “them deserters gonna be really surprised when we turn up!”

“Dig faster you dolts,” Craig snarled at the twin pirates “The captain will be on us soon and we can tell them we got lost,” he looked out to his other comrade standing watch in the shadow of a black onyx pillar,
“Unless he finds the booty then we will have to fight them.” His face twisted in a crooked smile, the look out smiled back and pulled the firing lever into position and nodded.

“They are up ahead,” Kaavaar whispered “You and me will circle behind them while the others march in, that ogryn of yours will hold there attention and we can close the trap while they are distracted. Torvin nodded and waved to Kolov,
“Follow the captain Kol.”

Craig swept his brow with the back of his hand as he watched the second sun crest over the townships buildings, just a few more minutes and he would be a few lies away from being a rich man, well that and three gunshots. His companion’s were busy trying to lower the last crate into the hole, inside a military pattern rocket launcher, his fingers itched at the price that would fetch back on the hive. A soft purring noise caused his heart to miss a beat; he slowly turned round to confront his former shipmates.
“Ah,” he said slowly flicking the safety off his rifle “So good of you to find us captain!”

The square was fairly small and Torvin could see every inch bar the small section hidden by the black monstrosity that jutted from the centre, The traitors were all in view, Craig stood in the pillars shadow holding his rifle at the hip, he faced the captain and crew members, the twins Pod and Dorgan were in a ditch half covered, once the fighting started they would be hard to dig out should they choose to duck down.
“Where’s that snake, Rain?” Kaavaar breathed “Can you see him magpie?”
Slowly Torvin edged forward trying to locate the missing enemy, behind him came a thud swinging round Torvin looked up into Rain’s grinning face, Kaavaar slumped between the traitors legs blood trickling from the side of his head.
“Let’s go see the captain magpie!”

The square seemed bigger once he was in it, Torvin thought as he stumbled under a shove to the back, Craig didn’t he was still a slender wraith of a man the look on his face spoke volumes,
“Best come out then captain,” he grabbed the boy by the hair and threw him to the ground before him, “After all we don’t want anyone hurt now do we?”

Torvin looked up, his vision was swimming, the lithe shadow of the captain emerged from the ally way opposite the group of desperados, his cape billowing slightly as he walked slowly, deliberately into view.
“Craig,” his voice soft and cultured “Where have you been all night?” Torvin cringed as he recognized the way his leader spoke, it had been the same the last time they were on planet, the last time he had tried to be cheated.

“Captain,” Craig smiled “We were searching the stores here and night caught us unawares, so we camped up the night and decided to come back this morning!”

“The hole that the twins are skulking in?” the captain said idly scratching his nose “Morning exercise no doubt, Craig you disappoint me after all am I not a fair captain?”

“Fair?” Craig seemed to taste the word “I have to admit I have served under worse,” Torvin caught a flicker of movement to his right, a large shadow not quite natural, “But I have had it with serving anyone!”

It all happened at once, the twins opened fire from the ditch even as the captain suddenly leapt forward his chainsword roaring to life, Torvin rolled to one side and felt the impact of the auto round drive into the ground where his head had been micro seconds before, a burning agony seared through him as the pain from the torn handful of hair coursed through his system.

With a deafening roar the ogryn joined the battle, casting the huge auto cannon aside he covered the square in three huge strides the twins blasted wildly at the charging monster yet still he came on until he disappeared into the ditch amid frantic curses and screams.

Kaavaar came on through the rear entrance dropped to a stumpy knee and fired twice, his las rifle snap-cracked the first searing lance of light missed the raider, rain’s head by scant millimeters it smashed into the onyx column in a shower of green sparks, yet the second blast found its mark, white hot laser searing through the soft flesh of the raiders throat tearing away the mans life.

Torvin scrambled away from the fight defenseless he desperately searched the battlefield for a weapon, he heard the captains chainsword whine then power up again as it sliced the air to the side of the renegades body, who frantically tried to get room to bring his auto gun to bear, it was then he slipped spouting curses he crashed to the floor, Torvin gazed horrified at the cause of Craig’s slip, Kolov’s huge hand had swept the feet from the renegade but even the ogryn hadn’t that kid of reach it was then Torvin realized that the ogryn had used the leg of one of the twins to trip their leader!
“Not worked out as you thought it might,” the captain was calm as he stepped over the pirate “Goodbye Craig” the chainsword juddered horribly as it struck.

Torvin closed his eyes.

Deep beneath the planets surface, in a dimly lit cavern several green lights flared briefly before dropping to a rhythmic pulsing, a low power hum started and out of the dark a metallic hand snapped forward and clasped the ornate spear before it.

Aboard the Socrates the Eldar Da’Lain eyes flickered open and she screamed…

(This is my first attempt at Gw fan fiction i hope that its enjoyed and if liked will try to continue the story.)
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CHAPTER ONE-The Tempest Stirs

The Huge Imperial ship, Cause of Consternation, slipped silently through the ultimate black of the warp, inside the forces of the Emperor of terra waited to be unleashed upon the foes of man.
The large refectory was an open house to the warriors of the imperial guard, one of the few places that the three different regiments of humans and their allies could mix freely and as such was a cauldron of tension.

With aspects of the reformed Praetorian fifth infantry, Necromundian 12th armored division, Hyrkan 8th artillery, Mordian 11th Iron Guard infantry and the whole of the newly founded Karium 1sty heavy infantry the whole room was a swirling cauldron of testosterone and boredom.

A large group of huge men dressed in the black and purple combat fatigues of the Karium 1st were sauntering around pushing and shoving the smaller warriors at every opportunity and several of the ships crew’s security detail had already been drawn into scuffles with the muscular warriors.

The head of security had detailed in a report to the ships command deck that he felt that the lack of history and indeed combat in the name of the emperor had lead these impressive warriors to search for any opportunity to prove themselves in the eyes of the more distinguished and older regiments.

The small group of red coated warriors was slowly realizing the danger they had found themselves in and it was looking increasingly like violence was the only option left, a scrawny corporal tried one final chance at diplomacy.

“My lord surely we,” he swept his arm back taking in his fellows “are no threat to such as you?”
“That’s right you are no threat to me praetorian!” the ape like warrior laughed “but I would like to take those rations you are trying so hard to hide pass them over and we won’t hurt you,” he laughed and was joined by his fellows “too much!”

“What’s the problem here?” a new voice said and without turning the large guardsman spat out an expletive. “Now my friend that’s not polite!” The Karium turned to regard the speaker, a older man in his mid to late thirties, his hair almost totally grey slowly stood up and sauntered over, his eyes were a bright blue and sparkled with amusement as he threw his red Praetorian jacket on.
“Get lost old man im in charge here,” he flexed a massive arm “See!”

The punch came without any warning and connected flush on the huge mans chin; blood and a single tooth flew from the guardsman’s mouth even as the smaller guard drove his knee solidly into his opponents groin, as the bigger man sank to the floor his comrades stepped forward.

“Two things before you carry this on,” the man said in an almost bored tone, “One,” he tapped the stripes on his shoulder “and two!” he pointed behind them.
“Your praetorian rank means nothing to me you old man and do you honestly think I will fall for that tired old joke, we may be new to the guard but we ain’t stupid!” the lead thug growled, he felt a tap on his shoulder “can it im gonna deal with this jumped up little shit!”
“You might want to see what your friend wants.” The Praetorian said calmly booting the warrior he had felled as he tried to rise again.

A host of voices behind the little group began to chant quietly at first but now it was at a level that the aggressive guardsman could no longer ignore, he swung round to roar at the unseen singers,
“Shut…” his voice trailed off as he beheld a sea of the red coats and white helmets of the entire Praetorian regiment. Another of the large guards from Karium his voice horse whispered,
“What are they singing?”
“It’s a funeral dirge from deep within Pretoria prime hive,” the colonel said not taking his eyes off the small group of would be bullies.
“Funeral dirge?” one of the warriors spat “Who died?”
“You did!” a new voice said in a cold authoritarian tone.
Immediately the singing stopped and a hundred hands slapped to salute, the sea of red parted to reveal the pristine commissar Jeler, “Had you been a praetorian at least!”

The Karium snapped to attention as the Commissar drew up before them, a short man yet his presence filled the entire room, which was the size of an aircraft hanger, he slowly drew a ornate pistol, the color draining from the Karium guards face’s as they watched the pistol, Jeler smiled cold and unforgiving as he let the full implications of his drawing the weapon sink in, as a Commissar only he and his fellow political officers could carry arms aboard the great warship and it was simply for one purpose. The execution of the unworthy.
“This weapon was gifted to me some ten years past,” The commissar said and began to pace the line of warriors, “Gifted warriors of the Impirium by a Warmaster for as he put it, an act of extraordinary devotion to the Emperor!” he looked at the warriors faces where they had been afraid or bored or frustrated he now saw fascination in the Karium and humor in many of the red coated praetorians they of course knew the story and it was a source of great regimental pride.
“I had arrived upon the small moon, Owen II to fine the Praetorian fifth annihilated by the orc warband of Grazanuk Pek the orbital defenses lost, destroyed by a traitor it is believed, the greenskin’s had fallen upon the single guard regiment and slaughtered all they could find,” the Commissar scanned the faces of the warriors looking for one in particular yet the grey haired veteran had disappeared, “I led a guard unit into the orbital defense station and liberated the installation spilling every drop of imperial blood in that holy cause, allowing the divine space marines to land and cleanse the alien filth from that moon. Wounded and unconscious I was laid besides the only other survivor of that day, Henrik Stanz, when I awoke I was presented with this holy weapon and told to continue in my life’s work, enforcing and encouraging the Emperors will!” the last two words having being built up to were thundered across the refectory in a voice that was meant to be heard across parade grounds and battlefields.
The Commissar came to halt in front of the huge Karium guardsman, his voice dropped
“And his laws.” His hand snapped forward and the weapon discharged.
Jeler turned to face the assembled guardsman many of whom stood frozen in place by the sheer coldness of the execution, inside the man fought down the urge of sympathy for his victim outside the Commissar barked out his orders,

Guardsman Schultz Frinz wondered down the corridor towards the praetorian barracks his mind a whirl of conflicting emotion, a shout pulled him from his reverie,
“Hey Frinz,” it was his longtime friend Helmut Kranz, the guard hadn’t changed one bit from the rough hewn ganger on preatoria to the imperial guardsman before Frinz now “What the hell was that about, I mean I have heard that speech a thousand times from the Commissar it always ends with a rebuke about following the word of the Emperor not a plasma round threw the head!”
“Why do you think I did it that way guardsman?” The Commissar stepped out of an alcove and the two guardsmen felt a tinge of fear for this now foreboding and draconian figure. They snapped to attention, the man smiled “At ease, an answer if you please Guardsman Frinz”

“I,” he slowly groped for an answer then it struck him “The Karium were stepping over the line of guardsman rules regular and ships security were failing to deal with it,” the Commissar nodded and waited for the man to continue, “They were failing badly so you stepped in and made it about Imperial law but once you did that,” he trailed off

“Once I did that his fate was sealed, discipline is what makes us an army not uniforms or weapons, the Karium must learn that If they are to fight alongside the Mordian’s and indeed ourselves, we who are cited as paragons of imperial discipline!” he smiled warmly now “and besides we can’t have anyone think they can bully any Praetorians!”
“Except you sir?” the words were out before the guard had thought “I mean…”
“Just so!” Commissar Jeler laughed “Is there anything else you need to know?”

“Begging your pardon sir but who was the old fella that stepped in and decked that ape?” Frinz said trying to detract from his friend’s dangerous comment.
The Commissar’s smiled slid slowly from his face,
“That was Colonel Henrik Stanz, sole survivor of the last Praetorian Fifth, hero of Owen II and your commanding officer!”

The room was dark, to the point where the sole inhabitant could just about see the half empty bottle of firewater, his hand slipped but he finally grasped the glass and drained the contents, Henrik Stanz closed his eyes as his hand reached the second bottle.

“Their still coming!” the words had to be roared for his fellow red coats to hear above the deafening fire from the orc horde that was racing along the vast parade ground,
“Hold your fire, steady…” the sergeant said voice clam as ice “FIRE!”
The snap-crack of las gun fire drown out the screamed warcries of the massive lumbering greenskin’s and the high pitched screeches of their smaller cousins that they drove before them. Then the creatures answering fire began to reach the human line, a guardsman to his right collapsed his head bursting like a melon under the heavy ammunition the orc’s favored, again the sergeants voice boomed out
“Praetorian’s, ten steps back, FIRE!” the regimented line of humans fired again and again on instruction falling back in good order as they did, many fell but always they filled the gaps and held the line.

A Low beep caused Stanz to open his eyes the past fleeing back into the shadows of his tortured mind, slowly he reached into his pocket and drew out a small packet of pills again the low beep indicating their was someone at the door, swallowing the pills he dragged himself to is feet only to collapse again,
“Come!” he yelled clawing his way up into his chair, the door slid opened and a smartly dressed imperial adjunct entered, he coughed politely
“Colonel Stanz?” he said uncertainly straining to pierce the gloom
“That’s correct,” the colonel’s voice was steady and confident
“Warmistress Weooun DeBlaiz summons you immediately!”
“Thank you,” the man hesitated “Dismissed!” Stanz barked and the man left.
The colonel stood, all traces of his stupor vanished even as he walked to his wardrobe he gave a silent prayer of thanks for the dissipation drugs, he sighed heavily
“Lights” he said.

The cavern was now glowing with a green witch light and the power hum was audibly louder, then it was joined by the skittering sound, metal on metal, with a agility belying its size the spear wielder moved into the clear light, its skeletal metal body glinting.
Slowly it raised its spear and then smashed it down on the floor the sound echoing throughout the cavern, sibilantly another creature slipped form the shadows they stood opposite one another before the floating, snakelike creature bowed its head to the spear wielder, slowly the huge warrior moved its spear towards the doorway, the floating creature shimmered and vanished, in a few moments the doorway slid open as the silent army stirred for the first time in a millennia.

The Pirates were in a fine moon when they returned to the Socrates, no body mentioned the rebels yet all were happy with the extra booty that they had brought back.
Kaavaar stomped about clapping men on the back and throwing bottles of grog about, Torvin saw what the captain was up too straight away the squat boson was reaffirming loyalties and taking the men’s mind away from the mutinous actions they had so ruthlessly put down, the night seemed to arrive swiftly and he felt himself glad for the dark shroud to fall.

Kain slowly drew back on the iho stick the smoke from it drifted lazily towards the dark sky, he shivered slightly as a breeze stirred slightly and nervously he looked around, a blur in his vision caused him to rub his eyes when he opened them the nights was as clear as before, sighing happily he drew back on the stick again, soon they would all be in a pleasure palace on some backwater planet.

The Wraith moved past the life form, machine code transmitting back to its master deep beneath them, a body scan revealed that the smoke was slowly killing the creature, a code came back, with the knowledge that the biological creature wouldn’t live long enough for the strange sticks to kill it, the wraith moved on satisfied.
Da’Lain‘s eyes snapped open, within the instant she was up dressed in her armor she moved with purpose, her funeral rites complete she was no longer afraid, snatching up the strange flute like weapon of her race she said a silent benediction and strode to meet her destiny.
The cavern was now a hive of activity and the spear wielder strode among its minions machine code almost inaudible to a human ear buzzed between the control nodes had fired all at once awakening seventy five percent of the tomb world, it was an occurrence unheard of and the answers would lie in the temple. With a clicking of its metallic fingers five skeletal warriors raised their large glowing weapons and fell in behind their lord.

The temple was huge filling the end of the cavernous space it loomed, dwarfing the approaching warriors, as they reached the temple doors they swung open, the machine code that came from the entrance boomed in the nodes of the approaching creatures, so intense it drove them to their knees.
Understanding came with that immense voice, the surface of this most holy of places had once again been desecrated by the flesh and blood creatures, spawned by their ancient enemies, the Lord of the silent army send his will out and behind him a unit of troops stepped from their alcoves and marched in perfect unison towards the door and the surface.
It stopped as the immense voice echoed in the vaults of his mind once more, it nodded once in understanding and whirling around its tattered cloak billowed behind it as it began to prepare to begin its work, millennia interrupted, once more.

“Wake son of man!” Torvin started as he opened his eyes and stared in to the strange green eyed helmeted vision before him, starting he fumbled for his pistol, a strong yet slender hand grasped his wrist “Its me, Da’Lain, you must rouse the captain, death stalks us the silent army approaches,” suddenly she snapped her head around “By Lileath they are amongst us!” she swirled around and vanished down the corridor.

Rubbing his eyes the young human dressed and remembering the Eldar’s words he strapped on his gun belt and snatched up his rifle, he took a deep breath and started after the strange alien, pausing only to rouse Kolov he went to find the captain.

“Something’s approaching!” a pirate shouted as Kaavaar stomped past, the squat looked up and started to grumble as struggled up the stairs
“What kinda something you boot licking son of a orc!” he bellowed between labored breaths
“How am I supposed to know looks for yourself!” The squat looked at the horizon, “Just some funny colored mist is that enough to be making me climb that bloody ladder?”
“Look again; there is shapes in that mist!”
The squat squinted then gave up and reached for his looking glass, the ancient instrument that allowed him to look at things at great distance, the green mist was almost impenetrable yet sure enough their was a humanoid shape flicker then gone.
“WAKE AND RISE, WAKE AND…” the squat suddenly stopped as the air behind the lookout rippled and the wraith dropped its phased shields, horror swept the bosons face, the wraith swept its taloned claws forward,
“Wha…,” suddenly eight long, blood drenched blades burst from the pirates chest, the scream was enough to wake the entire camp, Kaavaar fell back off the barricade, watching all the time as the nightmare raised the dead body high above its head before casting it down to the ground with a dull thud. Menace clear in those glowing eyes it floated down claws raised aimed squarely at the bearded squat!
“MEAL DANNAN!” Da’Lain appeared roaring her challenge, her weapon humming then suddenly discharging it sent a hail of razor sharp disc’s stitching across the wraiths metallic chest in a shower of green sparks “move dwarf!”

Kaavaar rolled away from the hot shower, even as the wraith fell back.
“WAKE AND FIGHT!” he roared regaining his feet, yet now his warning was not needed half dressed warriors were racing to their positions, yet it was too late the gates burst open and the green mist slowly rolled in but now it was only at knee height and the horrors it concealed were revealed, Several huge skeletal warriors marched in unison green light playing beneath shiny metal skins slowly they raised their weapons and fired, green light beams swept across the complex and where they struck their targets screams rent the air.

Torvin dropped from the hatch, even as a huge pirate was struck by the enemy fire, the young human watched in horror as the green blaze engulfed the man flaying him alive, he died screaming and thrashing on the floor, another sizzling bolt smashed the bulkhead as he leapt away. He landed hard and struggled to come to his feet, dust stung his eyes as he tried to locate the attackers.
There they were, huge skeletal warriors striding in perfect unison their weapons firing those sizzling green energy blasts indiscriminately, then Kolov appeared, his huge auto cannon drowning out all other sounds.
Hope faired as the captain led the pirates from the hull of the Socrates and three of the creatures went down in quick succession the battle was nasty and as hot a battle as Torvin had ever known.

“Nasty little fight,” the captain laughed. The Eldar, Da’Lain spat her helmet lost in the battle, “What’s wrong my dear?”
“We need to leave now the battle is not over;” she took a huge breath “it’s never over!”
“They are all down you stupid bitch!” a pirate laughed waving a hand at the decimated creatures “What they gonna do put themselves back together!”

The Eldar looked weary and raised her rifle at the pirate, the man threw himself to the floor as a stream of red hot metal gushed forth, smashing into one of the half reformed creature, the humans looked on in horror as one by one the creatures started to resurrect themselves in flashes of green which light.

“Quick to the Socrates!” the captain yelled only for the wraith to reappear on the gang plank slicing through the humans as they tried to gain the ship, its claws claiming two ore victims.

“we must flee, run for your lives!” the Eldar women screamed as they started to be pushed against the ships underbelly, the crew broke and ran, behind them as implacable as the tide or a storm, the silent army marched following their prey.
The office was sparse to the point of being a cell only the desk in the centre said otherwise; the lights were so dim that only the occupants enhanced eye sight could pierce the darkness. Slowly he twisted the information crystal between his giant fingers, a small console bleeped and he reached for the confirmation button.
“Speak Brother,”
“Brother Captain,” the strong low voice of the captain’s long time friend seemed troubled “I have felt a disturbance in the warp; it seems to originate from the system we are heading too.”
“A disturbance?” the captain made a swift sign of protection “Chaos?”
“It feels,” the pause was slight but definitely there “Different.”
“Brother Captain,” the intercom automatically changed channel
“Yes Brother?”
“We are picking up a distress call from one of the planets in the Dravid system,” again a brief pause “It’s Eldar in origin!”
“Those xeno’s normally shield their transmissions,” the low voice came into the conversation “This may be connected!”
Again the intercom buzzed,
“The imperial battle barge, Cause of Consternation has dropped out of the warp my lord.” The metallic voice of the pilot resonated in the darkened room, its recipient let out an expectant breath
“Inform them that Captain Nayr Psirc, Adeptus Astartes of the Blood Swords requests entry and audience for himself and his honor guard!”
“As you wish Brother Captain,” the marine paused “and if they ask for what purpose?”
“Tell them that, is between myself and the Warmistress!”


Torvin raced through the sparse woodland always glancing over his shoulder at the green glow that followed him with insidious and implacable certainty. Suddenly a hand grabbed him and dragged him into some denser bushes, another hand clapped over his mouth stifling his building scream.
“Shhhhh,” came the captain’s confident voice “we must sneak now!”

The humans came to a halt hidden deeper into the wooded land, a quick scan showed that hardly anyone had reached the questionable safety of the make shift camp.
“We can circle around get to the Socrates and get away!” a desperate sounding pirate said
“Well we can’t fight them,” another spat sarcastically “they won’t stay dead!”
“We must…” another started until the captain stood up “I mean, what do you think captain?”
The leader of the pirates looked at each man and sighed,
“We must try for the Socrates,” he started only for the Eldar to stand “Da’Lain?”
She slowly raised her hand and squeezed the small device,
“What was that?” a pirate said wildly

A sudden ear shattering detonation threw them all to the ground, only the Eldar remained standing.
“WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?” several voices roared at once, the captain smashed a pirate down with a stunning back hand,
“Quiet you fools you will bring those monsters back down on us!” he swung round on the Eldar “if that was what I think it was you better have a good reason!!”
“These creatures must not be allowed to leave this planet,” Da’Lain whispered quietly “They would spread death and destruction like a plague across the system.”
“It’s destroyed the Socrates!” a pirate drew a long thin knife and leapt forward “you have trapped us here with those things!”
The captain stepped inside the knife thrust and head butted the man smashing him to the ground, he growled low and menacing
“You will all refrain from attacking anyone here we have enemies enough without attacking our own!” he turned to the Eldar who was now sat cross legged staring into the forest “So I take it you know of these creatures Da’Lain would you care to explain a few things for us?”

The Eldar slowly regarded each man there, before she began to speak, she told them of the old ones and their enemies the Necontry, how on the brink of defeat it was they who had turned to their unholy gods and doomed themselves to enslavement as the creatures that now pursued them, the Necron’s. She told of the Necron’s abiding hatred of all living things and their implacable advance across thousands of battlefields.
“They are undying only by sealing them away did we, the older races, gain some measure of victory, I had head rumors that they as a race had stirred but I did not think this was a tomb world or I would never have set us down upon this cursed earth,”
“Can we beat them?” Torvin said quietly

“They are indestructible, irresistible, no we cannot beat them, I have sent a beacon for my people we must try to survive as long as possible, maybe they will arrive in time to save us,” the despair in her voice spoke of little hope she looked up and her eyes widened “too late, they are here…”
The night lit up with green witch light and was rent by the sounds of terrified screams.

“Gentlemen,” the warmistress’s voice was clear and powerful, simply used to being obeyed, Henrik Stanz thought as he looked down the long table at the highest representative of the Emperor upon the Cause of Consternation.
Stanz sat at the exact opposite of the woman who was now reeling off the names and rank of the assembled officers, affording him the best view of all that sat at the meeting, he noticed that two men, Sub officers from the Karium he thought, chatted while the Warmistress spoke.

“Have you something to share?” her voice dropped several degrees, “After all you don’t even know why you’re here so I will find it enlightening to hear what you have to say.”
The two officers exchanged perplexed looks before the taller of the two nodded and stood, he sneered at the other men around the table, before turning his gaze on the impassive Warmistress,
“We were simply discussing what we felt these,” he waved a derisory hand at the other officers “ahem, men could offer you when you have the finest officer cadre in the imperial guard,” he gave her a dazzling smile “The Karium 1st!”
Henrik Stanz looked at the other officers, to there credit not a twitch showed on anyone’s faces, he was not surprised as they represented some of the most experienced and historic guard regiments in imperial history, the Warmistress however showed just a hint of a smile as she slowly rose and walked to the centre of the table opposite the two Karium.

“You believe that you know more about a mission I have not even disclosed than the entire officer cadre aboard this ship?” her smile was suddenly frozen by the cold in her voice, “I suggest you shut up listen and learn!”
The two officers sat back down both open mouthed, the large Necromundian General laughed at them both,
“Close your mouths gentlemen I don’t want to see what you had for breakfast!” He boomed.
“General!” the Warmistress said, “Enough, these Karium need guidance not goading!”
“Yes Ma’am!” the big man ripped off a parade ground standard salute
“The mission is in itself fairly simple,” Stanz watched as the Warmistress sat back down, Weooun DeBlaiz was a small women yet her presence filled the room commanding respect in nearly all the assembled officers, “We are to circle around the Dravid system checking on the minor planets and two inhabited moons before proceeding to Dravid Epos to collect the imperial tithes.”

The commander of the Iron Guard slowly raised his hand; he waited for the barley perceptible nod from their commanding officer.
“Warmistress, isn’t all this, a little heavy handed for a simple tax collection?”

Stanz had to agree three companies of guard infantry with a detachment of artillery and a tank battalion seemed overkill for anything other than a planet wide invasion force, obviously there is more to this than tithes.

“Indeed Colonel Stanz it is far more than a simple collection of ores and men!”
The Praetorian jumped not realizing he had spoken aloud, looking down the table his eyes met the full force of the Warmistress’s gaze,
“We have had no contact with Dravid Epos for nearly a decade, the farm planet of Dravid Minor has also gone silent, we are to fine out what has happened and if necessary return them to the emperor’s fold.”

The door slid open and a black clad soldier smartly entered he whispered something to the young women at the head of the table.
“Of course,” she snapped “And escort them here immediately!”
The Warmistress slowly rose
“Gentlemen, it seems that we are to be aided in this mission.”

Torvin lay on the cold slab, his shackles bit deep into his wrists and ankles, around him strange bug like creatures floated their mandibles clicking and buzzing occasionally a green spark leap from their forward legs causing pain to race through every nerved ending in the restrained human.

The voice was immense, it crushed all thought, blood started to trickle from the human’s ears, again the voice spoke

Visions swam across the human’s consciousness, images of huge skeletal warriors in battle, at first against creatures he did not recognize, then the visions changed and they were now fighting each other, huge conflicts that swallowed up star systems, then the long retreat to this underworld haven, he thrashed upon the slab as the images came on and on, a tidal wave of history.


“My friends,” Torvin screamed within the confines of his mind “where are my friends?”

“GONE,” the voice gloated “FEEDING MY HUNGER WITH THEIR SCREAMS,” the voice dropped “THEIR SOULS.”

“Why me?” the young human pleaded his voice echoing in the turmoil within his mind, suddenly he was plunged into another dream, he saw the skeletal beings firing huge canister like rockets to explode in several planets atmospheres, green tinged rain fell polluted from the gaseous weapons.

The great voice dropped to an evil whisper,
The voice rose further as the machines whirled and burst into life, slowly the scalpel like blades descended.

The large conference room suddenly seemed all to small, Henrik Stanz had rose as soon as the heavy footfalls of the newest additions to their meeting had been heard, which is to say he had been standing for two to three minutes longer than he’s flustered companions who either rushed to stand up or remained seated in shock, only the Commander of the Mordian Iron Guard calmly rose and saluted to the two bio engineered warriors that had entered the room.

“Henrik Stanz?” the grey haired warrior looked him up and down, “You are still alive then!” his voice was low and deep much as the praetorian remembered.
“Brother-Librarian Farin I see that nothing in the galaxy has caught you yet!”
There were several gasps as the human reacted to the Marines barbed comment, as if bantering with a fellow officer in the guard.

“Welcome,” the Warmistress said interjecting herself into the conversation, “You wished to see me Lord?”

“Brother-Captain mistress, no more,” the huge man seemed almost subservient and Stanz noticed the two Karium visibly relax and wondered when one of them would try to interject themselves in this conversation, he smiled as the thought crossed his mind, and how long they would last before they felt the full force of imperial command.

“I would discuss the matter in private mistress,” he looked at the guardsmen, “They have no need to concern themselves with my matters at this moment.”

“As you wish commander,” She smiled at the guardsmen “Dismissed gentlemen.”

The humans filed out past the giant space marine’s, even the Karium seemed awed by their size and sheer presence. Stanz passed last and both marines nodded in greeting,

“Brother-Captain I would talk with Henrik if you no longer need me?”
“Of course Brother,” the giant smiled “it is good to see you alive and well Henrik!”
“Brother-Captain now?” the human looked up into the handsome yet rugged features of the marine commander “congratulations.”
The smile faded and the giant nodded.

The Warmistress watched as the guardsman and marine pysker left together, she looked then at the marine commander who returned her gaze unflinchingly,
“You know our colonel Stanz then?”
“You know full well that Henrik Stanz has a great deal of respect from our chapter Warmistress?”
She nodded, the BloodSwords had been the relief force of Astartes that had swept the ork’s from Owen II and they had found Henrik Stanz, the only survivor surrounded by greenskin dead around the planetary defense systems.

“I was at the right shoulder of Brother Farin,” he gestured the two men leaving “We were the ones who cleared the room where Henrik Stanz was found, it was only Farin’s abilities that saved the colonels life, The librarian has followed the mans career ever since.”

“You wished to talk to me about more than one guardsman though Captain, please let us continue.” She smiled gesturing the seat’s, it slipped slightly when she realized the giant would have been hard pressed to use one even without his bulky power armor.

“Thank you Warmistress but I prefer to stand,” the marine said only a slight upturn at the very end of his lips betraying his amusement, “I would know your intentions in this sector and I have orders of my own and do not wish to be at conflict with our allies.”

“Simple we are here to investigate the sectors silence and if necessary return its worlds to the Imperium.”

“Good,” the marine nodded “This only aids my own mission. Thank you Warmistress.”

“May I know what the Astartes interest in this sector is?” She could not disguise her feelings at the way the marine has run rough shod across her command. “Who sent you for an example, after all it is well known I have my critics back on holy terra.”

The Captain slowly raised an eyebrow and leant forward,
“Warmistress, the Astartes do not play at politics and are no cats paws for any bureaucrat of terra, we are a weapon we are pointed at an enemy and that enemy dies.”

“Then you believe there is an enemy in this system?” she said intently

“Indeed,” he growled realizing he had said more than he had intended “And that enemy will die.”


“Their can be no doubt Farseer.” The musical voice said over the communicator
“Then the creature did hide upon this planet,” the Eldar commander mused aloud “They were chased to this sector and disappeared but why now do they return and how did an Eldar renegade discover them?”
“What are your orders my lord?”
“Cloak the ship we must investigate this threat,” he paused and with a prayer he pressed a small symbol on the desk, a cold voice answered the transmission

“Yes Lord?”

“Prepare your exarches and give prayer to Kaela Mensha Khaine.”

“As you command.”

Farseer Ka’Mor Tarim looked out of the port window and started his prayers, the death of which he dreamed was approaching but who would die…


Henrik Stanz watched with faint amusement as the giant librarian lowered himself into the seat designed for a man a third of his size, the man looked at the human and glowered.
Stanz jumped as a electric shock passed through him, He grimaced and then started to laugh,

“I see you still haven’t learnt how to laugh at yourself?”
“Be grateful I like you Henrik that shock can be magnified to flay the skins from your bones!” suddenly the genetically enhanced warrior burst into booming laughter.

“So my friend what brings you to this fly spec cluster?”
The big marine waved a huge finger at the human.

“Henrik I cannot discuss our mission,” he smiled again “But you know that.”
“Indeed, as you know, I had to ask as that young harridan upstairs will summon me and try to squeeze me for any information of your intentions!”
“Then it is well for you that the captain instructed me to provide you with some things that he cannot come straight out and tell your Warmistress.”

The librarian had suddenly turned serious; Stanz picked up on the change of tone immediately as always he felt a strange kinship with the Astartes.

“There are disturbances in the warp Henrik and we have traced them to this system,” he paused for the enormity of this statement to sink in before continuing “many things, pieces of a puzzle if you like, do not fit.”
“You believe there is a threat of the chaos powers here?”
“As I said, these feelings are strange it could be that the dark ones are stirring then again we picked up a distress signal just before we slowed to join your vessel,” the marine pysker paused “it was Eldar in origin.”
“No mention of this in the staff meetings Brother Farin, then again I feel that our Warmistress enjoys springing surprises she has only just revealed our mission here!”

The Space marine nodded slowly before easing himself back out of the chair, it was mangled beyond repair.
“You must carry on with that mission this system is a vital part of the Impirium operations in this sector, with a hive world and a farm planet nearby this is a fertile ground for both us,” he turned to leave striding for the door “and them…”
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CHAPTER 2- The Threads of Fate Tighten

“So we get this fly speck planet to investigate then?” The large Karium corporal said “the boys will soon get bored here!”
The other Imperial commanders ignored the Corporal as they each ran through their postings, The Warmistress watched seemingly impassively, yet her eyes betrayed this pose as they focused intently upon each man.
The huge Karium barged past the Mordian Guard commander, whose hand flashed down for the las-pistol that would normally hang at his side, he grimaced as he grasped at the empty holster, and he glared at the larger guardsman.
“Mistress,” he said forcefully “Have we given some offence?”
The young women looked coolly at the bullish warrior, holding her hand up at the fuming Mordian,
“Is there a problem with my orders?”
“You have assigned my warriors with the red coated weaklings to survey, SURVEY and clear Dravid IV, it’s an uninhabited fly speck, my men and I would surely be better deployed against the hive world!”
“Corporal,” she said making a large show of checking his rank, “You presume to tell me where I as Warmistress will deploy MY forces?”
She held her hand out to her bodyguard “Pistol.”
She hefted the large weapon easily, pulling back the top arming it slowly she pointed straight at the Karium who’s eyes hardened.

“Understand this Karium, I! and I alone command here, if I chose to slowly put a bullet in each of your limbs no man here would so much as whisper a word of protest,” she smiled “in fact several would be annoyed that I hadn’t let them do it!”
“Mistress…” he said starting to protest.

“Silence!” she shouted standing up and pushing the barrel against the mans forehead, only the steps she stood on allowed her to do this but it was not lost on the assembled commanders that she had positioned herself perfectly to achieve her stance.
“No one will move against the hive world until I say so, even with the considerable force we have aboard if that world has fallen to an enemy we have not the man power to take it. I cannot virus bomb the world as high command has forbidden the Extremus, unless there is no other option.”
Despite herself a look of annoyance crossed her features as she realized she was justifying her deployment of forces; she whirled away and returned to her seat.
“You will deploy alongside the Praetorian fifth and you will submit to Henrik Stanz as he will lead that mission!”

The man’s head whipped round to regard the praetorian commander, coolly Stanz returned his glare, with barely a nod the man sat down and pretended to study the data slab once more, The Mordian commander smiled at Stanz and turned to the Warmistress.

Henrik Stanz looked the Karium up and down, more up than down if he was honest with himself but still the man was a fine physical specimen, indicative of his unit, however he appeared mentally limited again in common with his fellows, the thought cheered the red coated colonel, especially as he compared his smaller yet smarter praetorians, taken from the gangs of preatoria these warriors were the nastiest and most cunning warriors the huge hive world had to offer mixed with imperial discipline and training no foe would stand against them, history had proven timeless times that the praetorians stood to the last never losing until every last man had sacrificed himself to the god-emperor!

The smile slipped from his face,
“Apart from on Owen II” he whispered.
Silently the Elder Exarches knelt in prayer, the mighty statue of the bloody handed god, Kaela Mensha Khaine, stood towering above them, each warrior knew that the sacrifice may be called for upon their arrival and each now wrestled with that honor in their minds.
The knowledge that the selection would bring, for a short time at least, total symbiosis with their chosen deity was tempered by the fact that it was the ultimate sacrifice for when the mighty Avatar was no longer needed or defeated in battle they along with his spirit will be banished from this reality.
The Farseer stood upon the balcony and looked down upon his warriors, fierce pride coursed through him as he knew that they would meet the ancient enemy and defeat them once more.


The man once known as Torvin stood amidst the warriors of Necron as they slowly toiled at their labors, he listened to the now deafening machine code speech of his new brothers, understanding was simple mow he was at one with them.
The giant leader, war spear in hand appeared, slowly Torvin lowered his gaze.
“Pariah,” it pulsed “You are requested in the sanctum!”
“Yes my lord.” The human slowly walked behind the Necron Lord and his bodyguard.

The sanctum opened into a large hall in which nothing but row upon row of warriors stood, statue still yet poised like a coiled spring.
The C’Tan’s voice was a thunderclap in the already deafening noise of the Necron chours.

“What is your wish master?” the human said kneeling slowly
Each warrior turned their head slowly to regard their latest member of family, and they spoke with one voice.



The Pariah stood and held his hands out to the blazing alter before him and was joined by the Necron chours as they screamed the words of the Necron...


The warriors of Necron started to slam the butts of their gauze weapons upon the obsidian floor as the laughter of the Deceiver echoed around them.

Brother Captain Nayr Psirc slowly opened his eyes, meditation had bought no answers and even as he had sat in silent contemplation more questions than answers had come to him, By Sanguinius for the first time in years he felt adrift.
“Brother Farin,” he said after tapping the comm's button on the side table “May we speak?”
“I am in the librariam brother.”

Then the mystic warrior was troubled also, Nayr thought as he made his way to Brother Farin’s librariam, the doors slid open allowing the Marine commander entry.

“Welcome Brother,” Farin’s voice was tight as if he had undergone some strain.
“Are you well brother?”
The captain was immidietly concerned as the librarian was the most senior and experienced in the chapter, so much in fact that the captain felt sure that he should have been given command of the mission to the Dravid sector.

“Brother the chapter master chose you as you are best suited do not doubt yourself”
“Even now I forget to guard my thoughts from you!” he laughed as the librarian rose and they clasped forearms in the warriors greeting.

The Marine pysker slowly eased himself back into his seat; his face was etched with strain,
“I have walked the warp this night to try and discern that which stands in the shadows!”
He slowly spread his hands “Alas I have not uncovered our foes, all that has been revealed is broken and pattern less!”
“Tell me what you have seen and together we will ponder the emperor’s truth!”

Slowly Farin closed his eyes and began to speak,
“A young boy stands between the dark and the light, between life and death,” he breathed out and drew in breath “A deaths head hangs above the System, all light slowly draining into its gapping maw.” Again he paused for breath,
“Thousand’s of lights all swirling around a man in a red coat. All encompassed in a five sided wall”
His eyes snapped open,
“Henrik Stanz, The man in the red coat is Stanz!”


The planet was sparsely vegetated and only one structured area showed up on the scans, of course this meant nothing to Henrik Stanz, years of fighting as a guardsmen had taught him to use these orbital scans as nothing more than a indicator, a guide.

Snapping his hand forward he sent several guardsmen off scouting ahead, another guard knelt besides him, extending a hand he held the vox com unit to the colonel,
“Warmistress?” he waited for the reply before continuing “This is Stanz, we have made planet fall, my forces have secured the landing base im giving the green light to send down the rest of the force.”
“Understood, continue with scouting the planet as soon as two thirds of the force is on the surface, standard search colonel,” there was a pause “I expect to be kept informed.”

“As you wish Warmistress,” Stanz threw the handset to the operator, “We got two more drop ships then we move out towards the ruins.”

Slowly the ten man squad filed forward each scanning the foliage nervously, behind them Colonel Henrik Stanz moved alongside the four members of the rearguard, satisfied that they were alert and on their guard he smiled and with a nod of appreciation he began to make his way to the forward troopers, his second in command waved him up.

“Colonel,” he said smiling “We are making good time towards the only settlement picked up on the scanners and the beach head reports that they are well into fortifying the position.”
Stanz nodded, it was to be expected but still he felt a swell of pride that the Praetorians had made a text book landing, he then caught the look in his colleague’s eye.

“Spit it out Thomas you look like someone gave you a shot of firewater and told you it was water!”
“It’s the Karium sir; they are racing towards the settlement using bikes and transports.”
“To be expected.” Stanz grumbled “they have no sense of chain of command other than their own it would seem, what news of the rest of our forces?”
“As far as I can make out the other elements of the attack group are moving towards their designated positions.” Colonel Stanz reached for his binoculars,
“One hopes that they find nothing other than a lazy planetary governor and an ill trained PDF!” he laughed mirthlessly.

He raised the looking device to his eyes to hide his consternation,
The vision that leapt out him was of a beautiful plain that was currently being torn asunder by a variety of transports filled with whooping and waving heavy infantry in the Karium Colors.
“Idiots,” he whispered under his breath, “Find me the vox carrier I need to speak with our base.”


The Eldar Farseer opened his minds eye and watched through the eyes of his chief scout as the peerless warrior slid unseen through the vegetation, before him the man things raced across the plain upon their crude vehicles destroying all in their path, he could feel the contempt in his warriors mind.

“Barbaric they are my friend yet dangerous like all wild beasts,” immediately he felt the apology in the scouts mind. “They are fools to rush headlong into the unknown; we above all know this to be true.”

The view changed as he leapt into another mind, here he beheld the cautious approach of the red coated warriors, disciplined and well drilled he watched as they traversed the plain using every available cover, the scouts mind focused as he searched out the leader.

“Arrragghhh” The Farseer broke the connection as a blaze of light struck his physic vision. The light receded and he looked up from his knees, not realizing he had fallen.
“My lord?” An Exarch had raced from his post to aid his leader

Straightening the psycic looked pale yet strong he motioned the warrior away,
“Are your warriors ready?” he said to the shadowy figure that had remained hidden in the dark
“Ever vigilant my lord.” Came the rasping reply
“Then go to the planet,” the Farseer turned “and prepare for war.”
“With whom do we fight?”
“That remains to be seen but fight we will have to, the humans have disturbed the old enemy,” the stars seemed brighter in his mind as if everything was sharper, clearer than it had been before, “the silent ones must be stopped whatever the cost!”
(This is as far as i have got before the dreaded writers block {which may or may not exist} struck help/crytic are welcome. I hope this has been enjoyed by those of you patient enough to indulge me!)

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(as a footnote, since lurking here on this wonderful site i have discovered that the necrons history has developed/changed so i apologise if this post is innacurate or just plain, well wrong
Much of the 40K fluff has changed in the 25+ years I have been involved. I firmly believe a good story based on ideas different from the current "official" fluff is better than a slavish adherence to changes designed to sell a game.

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