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post #1 of 5 (permalink) Old 08-23-12, 10:08 PM Thread Starter
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I have decided to start a comic up. here's the first one



what do ya think?

Also if anyone is better at paint or other such bits of software and wouldn't mind helping me out that would be greatly appreciated.

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A couple of problems.

1st - Paint....I would try to find something better than paint, I don't know what's readily available, but you will want something better

2nd - The fact that I can see the...what I'm assuming is a couch through the guys head, makes the comic look really really messy.

3rd - You need to make things have some depth to them, The couch(?) should not be seen as just a 2D image. Same goes with the faces, if he is talking to the guy laying down, why would he be facing us?

4th - All dialogue should be read from left to right, so in the 2nd frame, the dialogue is messed up.

Get those worked out and I'm sure you should get some positive feedback
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I thought it was a bunkbead at first XD

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i saw the baggage shelf on a train...

do some googlin to find some good comic creating software, get an agent and start submit your work to publishers, or open up a site to put them on, just make sure you copyright all your stuff
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There's one called Comic Life that I used in school. It's very helpful, but you have to upload your own pictures.

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