on a side note people dont generally mix and match stuff like Undivided and Thousand sons, because it breaks away from there theme, instead of having 1 unit of each, wouldnt you want more than 1 to make an ultimately badass force of the same stretagy?
Thats what undivided means, some undivided armies have a specific themes yes, but if hes going for black legion then mixing cult units fit perfectly, so he can have as many Tsons units in his army as long as its with the FOC chart.
Anyway for the colour scheme it reminds me of a warband but i cant remember what, but i like how the red goes with the black, for the marine if the red is intended for highlights i dont think it works really, keep to greys.
As been said washes and thinning your paints will help. good job so far.
Edit: Brotherhood of Darkness was the one i was on about
Last edited by yanlou; 01-18-11 at 11:48 AM.